warning yaoi , don't like don't read.
im sorry that this took to long I wrote a over 9000 word chappie then deleted it :I (its over nine thousand! :D , DBZ fans will know what im talking about)
so any way should I make chappies shorter or longer than they are?
warning: yaoi ,(eventual)violence , death , language.
disclaimer: still don't own one piece or the characters. :C
onto the storeh!
zoro was lazily walking through a sunny glade on the way to see his furry friend.
He knew he wasn't lost. But then again that rock seems to be following him , and that tree. They were planning something and zoro knew it. He scowled at them , making a huffing noise as he did so.
after hours of walking and many creative curses later , he finally found himself in a familiar clearing with a small cottage near middle .
he sighed in relief upon seeing it and hurriedly jogged upto it only to groan in pain as lightning flashed behind his eyes and it felt like his head was about to explode , he doubled over clutching his head with both hands and therefore dropping the boy , but zoro didn't notice his mind was on other things at the moment.
He weakly looked upto the cottage an called out , "chopp..er , help!"
"ahhh! , zoro I didn't know it was you!" cried a panicked voice and just as fast as the pain appeared it was gone and zoro sighed as he stood back up looking down at chopper who was fidgeting nervously.
zoro chuckled softly "I see that old hag kurahas protection barriers are still working."
"oh yeah she made them a bit stronger before she left." said chopper softly looking down at his feet.
zoro raised a brow "where did she go?" chopper looked really sad as he thought back on it.
"she went back to drum island because she said I was now too old for her to look after."
"well doesn't that mean that she thinks that you are now good enough and she doesn't have to teach you anymore?" zoro questioned trying to bring light to the situation.
and it worked chopper face lit up like Christmas and he started to do a twirly dance "just cuz she did that doesn't mean im happy , you bastard!"
zoro chuckled at his friends antics but his face soon fell as he remembered why he had come here. he whipped around and soon found what he was looking for , the boy , luffy was lying on the ground a few feet away where zoro had dropped him.
"chopper you need to help this boy , his very badly injured!" zoro yelled at chopper from the boys side making him jump but he recovered quickly and his face settled into his professional doctor face as he hurried up to zoro to examine the boy.
The little doctors eyes widened as he saw all the blood and how badly wounded the boy was , he looked at zoro with an unspoken question.
"Ill tell you later." zoro said having already known what chopper was about to ask.
The doctor nodded , jumped to his feet and hurried to the cottage , he looked behind him at zoro "quickly , bring him inside."
zoro nodded and picked the boy up carefully and followed after the doctor.
once inside zoro noted that the place hadn't changed much from the last time he was here. Every thing still looked cozy and warm with a fire place in the corner and large comfy sofas surrounding it. Chopper walked up to a small Persian rug that was on the floor and briskly lifted it away , underneath was a small steel trap door with a key pad next to it. Chopper punched in the password and opened the hatch to expose a set of stairs , the small doctor jumped down them and zoro followed suit.
The stairs led to a long blank white passage way , chopper took them through many lefts and rights and soon zoro had no idea where he was.
as they made one more left turn , zoro saw the door which the furry doctor paused at and sighed in relief.
Zoro walked through the door way and glanced around uneasily , he didn't really like hospital or clinics much , the smell made him uneasy.
"lay him on the bed." chopper instructed in full doctor mode now.
Zoro did as he was told and gently put the limp body on the clinically white sheets of the hospital bed.
Chopper was whizzing about , gathering equipment such as gloves and anaesthetic , disinfectant .
the doctor looked at zoro as if he was considering something but quickly shook his head."zoro I need to examine him and then start surgery immediately." he stated calmly.
zoro nodded getting the hint and walked over to the nearest wall and slumped down to the floor , he watched as the doctor inspected the wounded boy , he took his pulse checked his throat and then his eyes , as he looked into one of the boys eyes he frowned "his eyes are strange..."
zoros brows creased at the sudden statement and he hefted himself off the floor to see what the doctor meant. As he approached the doctor he saw many emotions pass over his furry face , confusion , mild shock but most of all fear. As zoro peered into the boys face , his eyes widened slightly . One of his eyes were a dark nut brown but the other was a dark bloody red. Where they like that before?
Chopper closed the boys eyes and looked up at zoro with worry marring his face "what is he?"
zoro sighed "I don't know , but the wound on his chest is far stranger that his eyes."
The doctor looked doubtful at that statement before his eyes slowly travelled to the bloodied bandages on the boys chest.
he nodded resolutely and reached out with shaking hooves before he slowly peeled back the already cut bandages , when he saw the gaping bloody hole his fur stood on end.
"w w what h happened to h him?!" chopper stuttered with panic.
I'm not sure but I think he was attacked by very strong demons , there was another boy near by but he was dead by time I got there." zoro stated bluntly.
Chopper frowned at this " still he should be dead right now , no human could possibly survive a wound like that." he said softly.
zoro looked impassively at the small doctor and sat back in his spot on the floor. he watched as the doctor once again began to inspect the boy , this time he cleaned around the hole and prepped him for surgery but froze as he heard a small noise coming from beneath him, he leaped backwards as the half dead boy sat bolt up right with wide wild eyes.
"HYAAAA! zzoro his awake!" chopper squealed as he ran to the furthest corner of the room and stood there shaking while he watched the wide eyed boy warily .
luffy locked eyes with a shocked (that rimed XD) zoro , he just stared at the green haired male for a moment before he tried to say something but all that came out was a scratchy rasp. The boy sat there breathing heavily and still staring at zoro with those strange eyes.
he opened and closed his mouth again before he finally found his voice "hun...gryy" he gasped desperately.
zoros frown deepened "what?"
"hu...ngry!.." the boy snarled his brown and red eyes flashing dangerously .
before zoro could blink he was being held by the throat and pressed into the wall , he was at least two feet off the ground and could feel sharp nails digging into his neck . he looked down at his attacker , luffy was staring up at him like he was starving . He leaned forward towards zoros neck but zoro found that he couldn't move at all. he felt hot breath ghost against his throat , a wet tongue trailed from his jaw to his collar bone and zoro shuddered at the feeling , his eyes widened as twin points punctured his skin , shivers ran through his body at the feeling.
luffy moaned against zoros skin as he swallowed mouthfuls of blood , he pulled the others body towards him and bit down harder causing his fangs to go deeper in zoros flesh.
zoro gasped at the feeling of having luffys fangs in his neck , the feeling was strange and addictive . Zoro blinked as he realised just what position he was in , he hastily shoved the starved half boy away from him , he gripped his bloody neck and glared at the boy.
luffys eyes had completely changed , both of them were luminous red and glinting hungrily , he snarled at zoro showing a set of deathly sharp canines that shined slightly in the light.
zoro stepped backwards into a defensive stance "luffy , im warning you don't do this , I don't want to hurt you more than you already are ."
luffy took no head in his warning and leapt towards him with amazing speed , but zoro was faster he gripped luffy by both arms and twisted them around his back successfully immobilizing him for the moment.
"chopper! don't you have something to put him to sleep?!" zoro yelled at the shivering reindeer , chopper looked at zoro with wide eyes before the haze left them and he nodded , quickly looking around he soon located a large syringe filled with light blue liquid.
zoro felt the body in his arms suddenly still , he looked down and saw that luffys eyes had gone impossibly wide as he spotted the syringe , his pupils had turned to slits and his breathing had ceased altogether , for some reason it made zoros heart hurt to see the boy like this.
luffy started to struggle desperately again "n-no no" he whispered "not that , not AGAIN!" he screamed "please no! please!"
chopper didn't listen to the struggling boys begging , luffy pulled back from chopper as he reached luffy with the injection in his hooves.
zoro felt something incredibly powerful start to grow from inside the boy " chopper , I don't think this is a good idea"
chopper wasn't listening , the massive amount of power grew even further as chopper tried to grab at luffys wrist.
all of a sudden the power erupted "I said NO!" luffy roared and the power flowed of him in great waves , the doctor fell to the ground his eyes empty and his mouth hanging open . zoro felt his heart skip a beat and his head went all fuzzy , it was hard to see , everything had blurred. his arms went numb and his hold on luffy loosened enough for the boy to jump to the opposite side of the room,
zoro held the sides of his head as pain splintered through his brain , he tried to look up but everything was still blurry . he took a few deep calming breaths and soon the pain had ebbed away into a dull ache .
luffy was on the opposite side of the room breathing heavily , with his eyes going in and out of focus . zoro shakily stood up and looked at the tired boy.
luffy looked back at him blearily and in the next second his knees had buckled and he was falling to the floor with a thump , he was unconscious before he touched the ground. zoro walked towards him cautiously , he kneeled next to the unconscious boy and just looked at him , at his tired face and his messy hair , he looked at the scar under his eye and all the bruises framing his face . he slowly lifted a hand to the boys hair and swept it back from his now peaceful face , luffy didn't stir at the gentle touches nor did he stir when zoro picked him up and placed him on the now devastatingly messy bed.
zoro left him there to wake up the comatose doctor , he shook him not so gently "chopper wake up , you still need to help this kid"
chopper slowly came to and lifted his heavy head "wha? ... ZORO YOUR BLEEDING!" chopper yelled and zoro flinched at the loud noise still having a massive head ache.
"never mind me , his more important and any way I can take care of myself " zoro huffed indignantly .
chopper didn't look convinced , but soon made up his mind that luffy was more important at the moment "fine , but once im done with him your mine!"
zoro sighed "yeah yeah" he went about looking in the cubards until he found a white first aid box at he back of one , he picked up a small hand held mirror on the way as well , soon he was back to his spot on the floor . he looked at the bite wound on his neck noting how it was already healing . damn he bit really deep! zoro thought , he glared at the bite and then doused it with anti bacterial , he hissed at the sting but got on with it any way. he bandaged from his neck across his chest so that it would be secure. once he was done he just watched as chopper finally got on with the surgery , he had to clean everything again and then sew all the iner wounds shut first before he finished by sewing the skin back together.
once everything was done chopper walked over to zoro then slumped down next to him , it was fair to say that all of them were fairly exhausted.
chopper looked up at zoro " hey zoro , can I sleep now?"
the green haired male looked down at the furry doctor and grunted "yeah , I guess"
zoro looked towards the hospital bed expecting to see a sleeping body there but was instead met by to wide brown eyes staring at him intently.
the boy tilted his head slightly " naa , im hungry." he said simply
not again.
well um yeah there you have it (FINALLY) I am truly ashamed that this took so damn long , GAWD .
any way its done , got a bit of zolu action I there (not really)
well tell me what u think creative critism is always welcome , also suggestions would be helpful and thx for reading!
even though this is only the second chapter im still quite proud of this and my self.
until the next chappie , love u all xoxo
bye bye