Hey got a terrible comment just want to say I'm not going to change things drastically because you say cruel things I'll just think it's because you have nothing better to do than hurt others feelings. I take constructive criticism well and with an open mind but I hate cruel comments and your just making you and your story's less appealing to me I hope you get the message if not don't read this fanficton. I'll post the real chapter this weekend promise sorry for taking so long thank you readers for all your support love you all.
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