A/N Hii hop you liked the last chapter I'm trying to make them longer, and thank you soooooooo much for the views you almost doubled what we had so far in just one day. I was wondering would you like some POV'S from some other characters at all? This is way beyond my expectations to get 1,162 views omg, to know that even after 2 weeks you still follow thanks so much, enjoy.

Liz xx

Tris POV

I slowly roll around the bed and I can't think how much more perfect my life could be right now, except for the fact that I have to get up at quarter to seven for my kitchen job, but oh well I'm still excited for my first day. I drag myself from the sheets, I think one of the only white things I see in Dauntless compound. I can't see Tobias, that's weird he usually doesn't get up till ten when he's not working. I shove one of his jumpers over my head and I feel cradled and safe, surrounded by his smell, I pull on some ripped jeans that Christina insisted were very 'in' right now. I don't bother locking the apartment Tobias might come back later anyway. Every time I walk into the pit it shocks me how vast it is and the life that surrounds it, the pit is never empty, day or night. Al jumps on my back surprising me making me release a small, croaky scream he laughs and says, "you ready to make some Dauntless cake?"

"Hell yeah I am!"

We walk into the kitchens and I am struck with the smell of bread and flour, I look over and smile at Al I have a feeling I'm really going to enjoy this job. A lady with orange and black hairs comes to met us introducing herself as Alaska, and she tells us that she is our supervisor and all we have to do is make a Dauntless cake to start off with. I grab the flour and sugar from the cupboards and chuck some stuff into a blender until it kind of resembles cake batter, laughing the whole time I have never been a good chef.

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My shift just finished and I pull myself through our apartment door and land on the bed with a huff. I can hear water running in the bathroom so Tobias is clearly in. Our new batch of initiates will be arriving in a couple of weeks, I'm looking forward to it although not the fear landscapes, I shiver remembering mine. The bathroom door swims open abruptly and Tobias walks out with just as small towel around him, he hasn't noticed me yet wrapped in the duvet I wonder how lime it will take him. He is quietly singing a very undauntless tune about magic and music which amuses me, until you get to know him Tobias seems like a soldier like figure that can't be distracted, but now..

His perfectly toned body makes me feel so inadequate, my pale skinny youthful figure is embarrassing compared to him. He turns to pull on his clothes so I slowly creep out of bed and walk up towards him careful to make no sound, and shout "HI!" Just by his ear. He jumps and let's out a very small, very hight scream. I burst out laughing and lean in to kiss him, and I can feel his chest rising up and down on mine as he whispers in my ear, "never do that again."

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I am just walking aimlessly around the pit, Tobias is in the control room and Christina and Will are no where to be found so I am a bit bored and lonely. I wonder into the hallway that my mother was waiting in on visiting day when Eric approaches me. I feel nervous every time I see his metallic face, but I try and hide it as he says in his rough deep voice " Tris, I've been meaning to talk to you."

"You have? About what?" I reply tensely this can't be good. He leans in towards my face, I see his eyes focus on my lips for a split second before they move towards my eyes. He leans in closer still until the stink of beer on his breath is almost unbearable, and his lips slowly brush mine. Alarm bells are ringing off in my brain p, I freak out a bit then formulate an escape plan as he try's to deepen the kiss and puts a hand up my shirt I scream out, kick him between the legs and he doubles over, I run. I run away, I can't believe this just happened. I sprint to the control room, when Tobias sees me at the doorway in tears he runs towards me, and just cradles me surrounding me with that smell, that safety. And I cry into his stomach.