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_The two animals woke to the sudden sound of the door opening, revealing the doctors reeling in Yuki, in his bed asleep. They stood eyes fixed at the shirtless bandaged Yuki, with an eye patch covering his eye. Hatori entered the room and shook the doctors hands. The doctors and nurses got Yuki all set up with wires and machines. One nurse looked at Ayame and Shigure who looked worn out from the trauma of the whole event. he gave a sympathetic node and put a new breathing mask over Yuki's mouth and nose. Ayame walked over and touched his brothers ragged misplaced hair. He leaned over and kissed his brother's head, as he held tight to his bidden IV hand.
As the Doctors and nurses left; Hatori spoke up. "He had internal bleeding and some blood clots. Also his bronchial tubes took some damage as well, not to mention his overall state is bad. He hung in there, we thought we would lose him but- he pulled through."
Shigure smiled and said. "I knew the kid would pull through. See? I told you he would make it didn't I?" he said in a accepting voice.
"He could die at anytime you know- It's only time now that he will pass." Ayame said, feeling hope was still far from near.
"We will not stand to hear such talk Ayame. Hatori's voice now harsh. Now If you look at Yuki you could see he is in safe hands and will live. It will take time for him to recover, but he will be up in no time." He said ending his voice in a caring matter.
The three stood there in silence looking at Yuki who layed on the bed. Only the beeping of the machines and the little drops of fluid going into Yuki's arm sounded throughout the room. "Shigure?" Ayame said in a quiet voice looking at Yuki's sleeping face.
"Yes?" Shigure replied, shocked by the silence broken by the one who was grieving the most.
"What is Yuki's favorite treat right now?"
Shigure looked perplexed but shrugged and replied. "Ummm- I know he really likes Chocolate Carmel Drops… They are like a chocolate gumdrop looking things with caramel inside, about this big." He opened his thumb and fore finger as wide as they could go. "I don't know why he likes those things…" Ayame gave a small smile.
"I think I will go out and get some for Yuki. It's hard to enjoy yourself in such a place like this, besides- It might hopefully bring us just a little closer together.
Hatori gave a small smile and nodded. "But let's eat first." Hatori replied.
"But-" Ayame began but was cute off abruptly.
"No, we will all eat together, than you can go and get your treats for Yuki. I don't think he will be up for eating, even if we told him to." Hatori stated.
The three friends ate silently in Yuki's room. Shigure and Hatori both began to see Ayame becoming happier. It seemed the more he thought of giving Yuki the treat, and being by his side; the more positive and sparky he became to be. This pleased Hatori and Shigure greatly, seeing their friend down and not overly happy was hard to see; especially sense they had known each other since they were kids.
Ayame had gone to the Store with Shigure who was happy again to see Ayame run like crazy trying to find the darn candy.
"Shigure! We have to find them for Yuki! Oh what if they ate them all!
Shigure laughed when Ayame thought that the bakery had ate all the Chocolate Carmel drops. "Come on I know were they are." He said laughing. Aya jumped happily and then paid for the dozen treats. The dog and snake then made there way back to the Hospital.
When the trio made there way to Yuki's room; they opened the door slowly and entered setting the chocolate treat on the counter and then sitting down to rest. Hatori then entered moments latter seeing the two managed to find there way up to the room without calling in a cluster panic. Hatori sat down and said. "So looks like you found them; good."
Soon Yuki then began to stir on his bed. The men looked at him and stood to great him. Shigure and Hatori stood on the left side of the bed whale Ayame stood on the right side. Yuki made a his hands into fists and started to slowly move his feet. Yuki moaned loudly and began to feel pain everywhere.
"Yuki? It's Hatori, can you open your eyes for me? Yuki? Yuki open your eyes."
Yuki opened his mouth to find it dry as it could be. Hatori grabbed a glass of water with a little sponge on a stick, and placed the sponge on Yuki's lips so to make them not so dry. Yuki opened his mouth and Hatori put the sponge on Yuki's dry tongue. Yuki sucked up the water and Hatori put a straw in his mouth so Yuki could drink the water more freely.
Yuki then opened up his eyes to find only one eye not covered and working. Yuki turned his head to Hatori's voice and watched the doctor with weak tired eyes.
"Hay Yuki, it's Shigure. You feeling alright?"
Yuki looked blankly at them and he turned his head slowly to look at his hand. Yuki picked up his hand and looked at the IV and bandages securing it. Yuki, turned his head to the right to see his brother's eyes wide with concern.
"Yuki?- it's- it's me- A-"
Yuki found sudden strength and lunged at his brother, with pear rage; not noticing any pain, his breathing mask then fell off of his face. Yuki's hands grabbed Ayame's hair and some of his shoulder. Caught of guard Ayame stood still. Shigure and Hatori were about to intervene when Aya held up his hand to signal them to stop.
The two men stood in shock as Yuki held his brothers hair and shoulder with such force. "YOU LEFT ME TO DIE!" Yuki yelled in his brothers face.
"Yuki- Yuki- calm down- look I'm-" Yuki yanked hard on his brothers hair causing him to scream. Aya held up his hand fast again to stop his friends from stopping Yuki.
"YOU WATCH ME AND PAY NO ATATION TO MY PAIN WHALE YOU GO ABOUT YOUR DAY HAPPY AS YOU CAN BE WITHOUT A FRAKEN WORRY!" Hatori and Shigure stood in udder shock.
Yuki took his hand off of his brother's shoulder and hair, and grabbed his neck. "YOU WILL KNOW ONLY LITTLE PAIN OF WHAT I HAVE GONE THROUGH!" Yuki started to choke Ayame. Aya let out panic gasps as Hatori and Shigure started trying to pry Yuki away from his brother.
"Yu-Yuki! Y-ki –" Aya gasped staring to lose all breath.
"YUKI LET GO OF HIM" Hatori yelled at his cousin in great distress.
"YUKI HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?! LET GO OF AYAMIE NOW!" Shigure screamed.
Male doctors and nurses herd the commotion and ran in and assisted in trying to break Yuki's grip off of his brother. Yuki's hands were pride off of Aya's neck and pined to the bed. Yuki screamed tossing his head to his side and moving the middle part of his stomach; causing to break some of the delicate stiches in his stomach from the surgery. Ayame fell to the floor holding his neck, gasping for breath looking up at his distraught little brother. Yuki's eyes started to fill with tears. "Hold on." Hatori said, as he grabbed a needle and stuck it in Yuki's shoulder. Almost at once Yuki started to calm down gasping for breath. The Doctors and nurses started to ease their hold till they could finally let go. Yuki moaned and his eyes fell completely shut into a deep sleep.
Shigure ran and kneeled down too his friend. "Aya! You alright?! Aya sat pulling his legs to his chest and his head on his knees crying desperately. The doctors kneeled down near him, but Shigure held up his hand and shook his head no. The doctors nodded and took Yuki back into surgery to fix up the stiches. Hatori took a deep breath and kneeled down to Aya as well. "Aya…... Aya- look at me." Hatori said in a quiet calm voice. Ayame buried his face more in his knees and sobbed shaking his head no.
"Aya, I will say you weren't there for him when he was young, but the pain he felt also was from another pain…. He was mixing up emotions of you and Akito- You-"
Ayame cut off Hatori and said sobbing. "Leave- leave me….. I don't want to be here anymore I-" He gasped for breathe as Hatori rubbed his back trying to calm him down.
"No Ayame I can't do that. Now I want you to listen to what I have to say, when I am done you can speak; but right now I want you to lesson to me ok?" Ayame nodded the best he could with his head in his knees. Hatori cleared his throat and said calmly, "I am going to have Shigure go back to his house and gather some of Yuki's things. He will contact Kyo and Tohru that Yuki isn't feeling well and we'll tell them not to tell "anyone" that Yuki is here. They will not visit Yuki right now either; You will stay here with Yuki over night." Ayame's head popped up looking at Hatori with a dumbstruck look on his face. He was about to speak when Hatori stopped him. "Shhhh I'm no done yet." Aya sighed now looking at Hatori with tears running down his face, lip quivering. "I will be here as well, to check up on you two from time to time. Doctors will come in at night to also see how Yuki is doing. You said yourself that you felt horrible not being a good big brother when Yuki was younger. Now is the best time to start and show him you are here all the way." Hatori smiled at his tearful friend.
Aya smiled and nodded, wiping his noise on his sleeve. "I'll get some of your stuff as well Aya." Shigure said giving his friend a hug. Aya stood up as well and blew his noise in a tissue. Hatori brought in a nice spare bed for his friend to sleep on, over by the window. Shigure left to gather some of Yuki's and Ayame's things, and not to soon after; Yuki was back in his room sound asleep. Only to keep him sedated for the time being.
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