So we're actually starting to get close to the end of Season One of this series, which means that I'm planning Season Two, so any big crazy ideas that you have I will need to hear about pretty soon, before I'm done with the planning.
Example of things to suggest:
Resurrection, someone who has been killed during the show is returns to the SGC alive.
Small plot stories, for one or two Episodes, at the moment there's 4-5 Episodes left to fill.
Tech, any new tech which could help either the Tau'ri, the Goa'uld, the Lucian Alliance, the Wraith or any other enemy who could show up.
Ship designs, I'm always trying to expand the Tau'ri fleet, but new ships for other factions would be appreciated as I'm having a hard time creating ships for them.
Enemies, any enemies who could show up to challenge the Tau'ri or at least give them something to crush while we wait for the real enemy to show up.
Things I've failed to wrap up.
Any other ideas you have.
Just remember to keep the ideas reasonable, there's no hopping that people like Paul Emerson, Jacob Carter or anyone who's body has been seen buried or recovered in a dead state, unless their mind have been downloaded to a computer, crystal etc., will come back to the story, unless you can come up with a reasonable way to bring them back, but no Ascended involvement, that's my personal card.
A/N: If anyone can give me a link to an insignia to put on the ships I've made I'd be really happy. I can't seem to find a simple one, anything to complicated will look like shit and anything to simple will look amateurish, otherwise I'll use the Earth point of origin to brand the Tau'ri ships.
Review replies:
jabbarulez: Yes she is, for now… mohahahaha. ;-)
Chronus1326: We'll probably see the new hyperdrive used in stealth-bombers, scout ships, stelth etc.
I thought Young needed some place to sit while on the bridge, so he got his of little chair, if that's the one you're referring to.
Well I think Rush will allow Young to be in control and be a little friendlier towards him now that he's got a little distraction in the form of Dr. Amanda Perry, that was one of the reasons I brought her back, so that Rush would be a little bit happier and more prone to take orders than before.
Black Limousine. Broadway. Los Angeles. Earth.
20:50 16/11 2012
Sitting in the back of a limousine all dressed up in fancy clothes was O'Neill, Sam, Daniel and Teal'c, it was one of the last cars of the old, traditional, type that was left, these days most of the cars had been replaced by hover cars who flew several hundred meters above the surface, around the cars where massive skyscrapers which stretched several kilometers straight up.
"I can't believe the documentary is released after nine years." Sam said.
"Well, it's not the original documentary that Bregman tried to do, this time Bregman got everything he asked for and more, he even got to see Destiny." Daniel said.
"Indeed." Teal'c said.
"It's all been revealed already Carter, this is more of a way to make it easier for people to understand what has happened during the fifteen years that the SGC have been in existence and it's a hell of a lot easier than to read through all the mission reports." O'Neill said.
"I guess you're right." Sam said
"And you know that it's only half documentary, I got a little sneak-peak and with the things they got from our memories they've done some amazing things to the movie half of it." Daniel said.
"What did you see?" Sam said with a slightly nervous undertone in her voice.
"Not much, just that it should be really interesting to watch."
"I hope they didn't use anything private in the movie." Sam said, still with a nervous undertone.
"Sam, you designed the tools they used to extract our memories and all of us got a chance to remove the parts we didn't want them to see." O'Neill said.
"I guess you're right, but still it wasn't my own device to start with, it was the Ohne who made it originally, I simply redesigned it to be compatible with our tech, I could have missed some detail." Sam said as she turned around and looked out the window.
"Don't worry, we can always shoot the director if it's not the way we wanted it to be." O'Neill said as he pulled away the left side of his suit to reveal a stunner, with a smile on his lips.
"Jack, why did you bring a stunner to the grand opening of a movie?" Daniel said; getting an odd feeling from his friends, but as quickly as it came it disappeared.
"You never know who's going to be there so I thought; what the hell, might as well bring a gun."
"You're not bringing that gun into the theater." Sam said as he slid over towards O'Neill and took the gun away from him.
"Come on, can I at least bring a knife or something?" O'Neill complained with a sad face.
"No, absolutely not." Sam said as she put away the stunner inside the minibar before turning to Daniel. "Have you heard anything from Vala lately?"
"Yea, she sent me a message a few days ago. Ba'al's host seems to still be in a bad shape, say's it'll be at least a few months until she thinks she will feel good about leaving him at all, even if it's only for a few hours." Daniel replied.
"It's been almost five years since the Tok'ra removed Ba'al from the host, I think she should have at least visited us once."
"Traumas can take decades, even lifetimes to overcome and you know how Vala can be, once she's decided she wants to do something she's fully committed to that thing."
"Still, I think you should check up on her."
"I'll do it as soon as we get back from this." Daniel said before opening the door as he had noticed how the limousine had stopped, stepping out of the limousine he was greeted by camera flashes from the older cameras and the laser scanning from the more modern scan-cams which created a 3D image of the person.
Following closely behind him was Teal'c and then came O'Neill, who reached back inside the limousine and helped Sam get out. Then the group walked up the red carped a few meters to make room for their colleagues following in the limousine behind, there they waited as the next limousine pulled up and Sheppard, Elizabeth, Rodney, Teyla, Ronon and Mara exited it, then as a third limousine was about to pull up a single gun shoot was heard. Hearing this everyone in the group dropped down on the group, except O'Neill who came crashing down a second later with a hole through his chest.
Seeing him fall Sam crawled up to O'Neill and tried find a heartbeat, on the other side of the carped Sheppard reacted, not having had a female who took his stunner he drew it and begun to chase after the shooter, whom he'd spotted in a hover car a couple of hundred meters down the street, after running a few seconds he realized he wouldn't be able to catch up with the shooter on foot as the hover car took of towards the skies, instead he took out a hidden container of nanites and put it inside the magazine slot and fired, after a couple of shoots he hit the car and the nanites started to send a locator signal, then Sheppard turned around and begun to run towards the closest parking garage and as he reached the entrance Daniel caught up with him, stunner in hand.
Parking Garage. Los Angeles. Earth
20:55 16/11 2012
Running inside they soon found a transporter booth and walked inside, entering an override code and choosing another building in the direction that the shooter disappeared, once in that building they ran out of the booth and grabbed a car and with Daniel in the drivers seat and Sheppard in the passenger seat they took of.
Sitting in the passenger seat Sheppard begun to pull out a hidden control panel designated for maintenance personnel and when he had gotten the panel out he entered his override code, forcing the cars safety systems to be overridden and allowing them full control, pressing more buttons Sheppard started a tracking program and on the cars HUD a trail appeared which lead to the signal.
Forcing the car up to speed Daniel pushed it to its limit to catch up with the shooter, forcing the car around corner after corner just to catch up with him.
"This is General John Sheppard, I'm requesting backup. My self and General Daniel Jackson is pursuing a criminal who have shoot General of the SGC Jack O'Neill on Broadway." Sheppard said after establishing a connection to Atlantia.
"Yes sir, backup is on its way but they're a few minutes away." The man sitting in Atlantia responded.
"Well beam them if you have to, just get them here now."
"I'm sorry sir, you know that beaming inside a city is forbidden unless you have a permit."
"I don't care, beam the here, or at least beam O'Neill back to Atlantia for proper medical attention."
"General of the SGC Jack O'Neill has already been beamed out of the city and is currently in surgery by Dr. Beckett, who have been summoned back from Pegasus."
"Well at least he's safe then." Sheppard said before shutting down the link to Atlantia.
"I guess we're on our own then." Daniel said.
"No, backups just a few minutes behind us." Sheppard said.
"This will all be over in a few minutes." Daniel said as he pushed the car around another tight corner, then all of a sudden the signal stopped.
"Crap, they must have found the transmitter." Sheppard said as Daniel begun to hover with the car in the location where the transmitter stopped transmitting, then they got a short signal of the transmitter dropping, taking the direction the transmitter feel into account Daniel moved the car in that direction.
"There he is." Daniel screamed as he floored the engine and threw the car around on the spot to follow the shooter whom he'd spotted.
"Slow down Daniel." Sheppard shouted as Daniel threw the car into a barrel roll to avoid a meeting truck.
"He's not getting away with shooting Jack." Daniel said as he pressed the car to its limit to eliminate the last meters between the vehicles.
Coming up on the right side of the shooter Daniel made a sharp turn into the other car, knocking both into a nearby building.
Broadway. Los Angeles Earth.
20:50 16/11 2012
As Sheppard took of after the shooter and Daniel jumped back into the limousine to get O'Neill's stunner Sam managed to pull out a smaller variation of a FMC from the inside of her dress, activate it and create a channel to Atlantis.
"This is General Samantha Carter, General of the SGC Jack O'Neill has been shoot, I repeat O'Neill has been shoot." Sam shouted into the device.
"Copy that, emergency vehicles are on their way." A female voice replied.
"Recall Dr. Beckett from Pegasus ASAP and lock onto O'Neill's tracker and beam him out of here."
"Yes, mam, Dr. Beckett is being recalled from Pegasus, but as you know we can't beam things in and out of cities without permission."
"Just get it done, I want him out of here now."
"I'm sorry, but..." The woman begun before she was cut of as Carter sent an override code back to Atlantis and took control of the terminal, ordering a beaming from a ship in orbit.
Gate Room. Atlantis.
20:55 16/11 2012
"Now that wasn't so hard was it?" Sam screamed at the woman, siting in the control room which had answered her call, moments after she and O'Neill beamed into the gate room.
"No mam, Beckett will be here shortly." The woman answered nervously as the white gate begun to spin and moments later spit out Beckett.
"I appreciate your eagerness General, but I can't do proper surgery on him right here in the middle of the gate room." Beckett said as he came through and saw the duo.
"I don't expect you to either." Sam said as she ordered another beaming and they found themselves in the operating room with O'Neill on the table and nurses and other medical personnel running inside to help Beckett and at the same time showing Sam out of the room.
Crash Site. Los Angeles. Earth.
21:00 16/11 2012
Daniel slowly felt how his body started to hurt, slowly his memories returned and he remembered the crash, then he regained control of his eyes and opened them, at the other end of the room, about fifteen meters away, on the other side of a couch, was the other car and slowly crawling out of it was two people, one male, the shooter and one female, slowly he managed to turn his head to see Sheppard hanging out through the window of the car, then he felt his arm and hand return to his control and he felt the stunner that he was still holding, forcing it up he aimed it at the woman, through the now broken windscreen, and pulled the trigger, as his finger squeezed the trigger one of the balls was propelled out of the barrel while it absorbed energy, then it exited the barrel and in a fraction of a second it traversed the distance to the woman before exploding on her chest and stunning her, but in doing so he overloaded the power crystal and it shattered, sending piece flying in all directions but most of them flying and hitting Daniel's face, cutting it badly, then he fainted from the pain.
Coming to again Daniel felt how he was dragged out of the car and as his legs dropped down from the car to the ground he screamed as they bent in a direction that was far from natural.
"So you're awake." Daniel heard a man say as he was leaned against the car.
Then he felt a pair of fingers taking a hold of his eyelid and forcing it open, only to have blood flow down into the eye and blocking his vision, then he felt the barrel of a gun being pressed against his forehead.
"It seems like we wont be able to get away alive, but at least we got three of you, instead of just the one, the Alliance will be pleased in either case." The man said, then Daniel heard the click as the man removed the safety on the gun, followed by a single gun shoot.
Control Room. Atlantis. Earth.
21:10 16/11 2012
As Sam, wearing full Atlas armor, beamed into the Control Room of Atlantis with a furious expression, everyone in the room knew not to say anything.
"You five, I want to know who that person was." Sam shouted and pointed at five random techs sitting in the control room.
"Yes, mam." They all answered before starting to override security scan-cams all over Los Angeles to look at their captured footage.
"I don't care if you brake a few laws, find them."
"Mam, we have approaching vessels in hyperspace." A tech sitting at the sensors said.
"How far out?" Sam said as she walked over to the tech.
"Two hours mam, their speed is suggesting that it is Anubis Ha'taks."
"How many?"
"Looks like six, but they give of a much bigger signal than six ships would do, it's possible they fly so close together that the sensors can't tell them apart."
"Tell General Ellis to prepare his ships and get two Andromeda class ships here too." Sam said before she requested to be beamed down to the building hall.
"Yes mam." The tech said just as Sam disappeared in a flash of light.
Building Room. Atlantis. Earth.
21:15
Arriving in the building room Sam walked up to one of the few ships which was still stationed here, the other ships had either been put into service somewhere in the galaxy, been taken to the storage facility in Canada or where at Chrona to be re-fitted with never tech, it was a command class ship, her command class ship, named the Challenger. Standing beneath it she activated a ring platform and found herself on the bridge of the ship, as she sat down in the control chair a tech opened a link to her ship.
"Mam, bad news, General of the SGC Jack O'Neill wasn't the only one to be targeted, several heads of states around the world have been attacked, the President of the America has been confirmed to have been killed, the same goes for the Chinese President and Prime-minister as well as the British Prime-minister, the status of France's, Spain's, Germany's and Russia's leaders are currently unknown, but they are suspected to be dead to." The tech said hesitatingly.
"What?" Sam screamed at the tech who, even though he was on the other side of the screen, flinched.
"It seems that it was a coordinated attack on the leaders of the world."
"Send aid to every country who request our aid."
"Yes, mam. There is however even more bad news."
"More bad news, what else could have happened in a matter of an hour?"
"Well the X-306s that you requested are yet to be manned and before General Jackson signs them of we can't take them out of dry dock, the station wont allow it."
"Fuck, I'll fix it." Sam said as she got out of the chair and walked up to the rings in the back of the bridge.
"Uh, that's not all, Langara and the capital of the Free Jaffa Nation have both been attacked by Anubis Ha'tak's all evidence points to the Lucian Alliance, mam." The tech said nervously as the call was transferred to Sam's FMC.
"Deal with it, dispatch Caldwell to the Free Jaffa Nation and have Sheppard take a couple of ships to Langara." Sam said angrily as the rings placed her in the gate room and she walked up to the dialing console of her ship and dialed the white gate to Chrona.
"Mam, General Sheppard has been involved in a car crash with General Daniel and the man who shoot General of the SGC Jack O'Neill."
"Sheppard too? Do I have to do everything myself? Let Ellis handle the approaching fleet, Caldwell will have to help the Jaffa, I'll help Langara myself." Sam said as she stepped through the gate to Chrona, effectively cutting the connection.
Control Room. Chrona. Milky Way.
21:25 16/11 2012
Stepping inside the control room Sam scared away the older technicians as soon as they saw her expression, only the never techs who had never seen Sam mad stayed in the room.
"Why is it that those ships are still in dry dock?" Sam said and pointed out the window at the two X-306s.
"Th…they aren't finished yet, Dr. Jackson need to approve them before the station will release the ships." A young tech said.
"So you're telling me that there's no other way?" Sam said as she sat down in the control chair and brought up a list of ships, selecting the two ships she wanted and opened their files, above her head two red holograms appeared with rows of specs besides each hologram, then one of the holograms turned green to the techs surprise.
"The other one too." Sam screamed into the air, then there was a pause before she continued. "I don't care what you think, just give me control of the ships."
After a few seconds a hologram of the control rooms blueprint appeared above the chair, a second later Sam got out of the chair, walked up to a wall and ripped out a computer core, then she got back to the chair and added her own command code next to Daniel's before getting out and putting the computer core back, sealing it in so no one could do what she had just done, then she simply entered her command code and the two ships where both released from lockdown.
"That wasn't so hard was it? Now get those ships going." Sam ordered two marines standing in the back of the room, before she got out of the chair and headed back to the gate.
"Yes mam." The two marines said before stepping into the nearby transport booth to find the two crews who were on the station ready to man the ships.
Bridge. Challenger. Building Room. Atlantis. Earth.
21:45 16/11 2012
Walking into the bridge Sam sat down in the control chair and powered up the ship, taking control of the ship she raised it of the floor and approached the Supergate, which she dialed to the Supergate inside the solar system, going through the gate the ship came out in the asteroid belt and a minute later it jumped to hyperspace towards Langara.
Sol System. Milky Way.
23:10 16/11 2012
Ellis was sitting in his command chair of his command class ship when the approaching fleet dropped out of hyperspace behind Mars.
"Given me something?" Ellis said to his helmsman.
"Sensors show fifty Anubis Ha'tak's and one ship, which seems to be of the same design as Anubis mothership." The helmsman answered.
"Any word on the two X-306 they promised us?"
"They are on their way here, ETA ten minutes."
"Good, then we won't have to fight this alone. Get me some readings on the mothership."
"Yes, sir. I'll have something as soon as they come around the planet."
"Order the fleet to advance, might as well get this over with."
"Fleet is advancing."
Five minutes later the two fleets got a visual of each other.
"How's it going on the readings on the mothership?" Ellis said.
"It appears to have been rushed into service, multiple decks are exposed to space, otherwise it's exactly like Anubis own mothership." The helmsman answered.
"So someone must have found it and taken it after Anubis defeat. Any IFF?"
"Lucian Alliance sir."
"The moment they are in weapons range I want them destroyed."
"Yes, sir." The weapons officer answered.
Langara System Milky Way
23:10 16/11 2012
Coming out of hyperspace Sam was greeted by a fleet consisting of thirty Anubis Ha'tak's and a number of troop transports, all transmitting Lucian Alliance IFF.
As Sam approached the attacking fleet she readied weapons and checked shield and in the other fleet the same thing was happening, as the two fleets closed in one each other Sam opened a connection to Atlantis.
"I'm seeing several troop transports, send a brigade through the gate to help in the ground defense and get me a crew for my ship." Sam said.
"Yes mam." The tech in Atlantis answered.
Cutting the connection Sam increased her ships speed and a minute later she felt the first plasma blots hit her shields, Sam on the other hand waited a few more seconds to get better accuracy and when she felt that she was close enough she opened up with every thing she got, blasting four ships to destruction and badly damaging another, then the gate activated and a few seconds after that crew members started to ring up to the bridge to positions at the consoles.
"Mam, we are unable to dial Langaras gate at the moment, the brigade has instead gated her and will drop to the surface when it is safe to do so." Her second in command said.
"Hm, get them moving as soon as we are clear." Sam said and continued to control the ship.
Then the rings at the back of the bridge activated and four Lucian Alliance soldiers found themselves staring into the barrels of PP-90s held by marines guarding the bridge, which was the last thing they saw as they raised their weapons, then Sam locked down all of the ring platforms on the ship.
Outside the ship the bombardment of range plasma bolts increased as the Challenger got closer and closer to the Ha'tak's and their accuracy increased, in response Sam fired of another salvo, taking down another four ships, bringing the total down to thirteen, including one heavily damaged, then the two fleets passed each other and started to turn around for another run, at this time the Challenger found itself between the Ha'tak's and Langara, at which point Sam put the underside of the ship parallel to the planets surface and the brigade started to deploy, one hundred at a time, that was the number of drop pods equipped inside the hangar, a minute later, with the Ha'tak's closing in half of the brigade had been deployed and Sam stopped the drops to engage the Ha'tak's once more.
Looking at her shield strength she saw that it had been reduced to below fifty percent, meaning that she needed to recharge or the ship found find itself defense-less, at that moment two Aurora's dropped out behind the Ha'tak's and then a command class ship jumped in right above them.
"Looks like we're just in time." McKay said over a channel from the other command class ship.
"What are you doing here Rodney?" Helping you, we'll take care of these ships, get the men down to the surface, they are attacking Destiny.
"How do you know that?"
"We got a message from Young, he says that they've lost the gate room, there's simply to many coming through."
"Ok, I'll get the gate, clean up this mess."
"I'm on it." Rodney said as he cut the connection and charged the Ha'tak's with his ship, following closely behind him was the drones and combat jumpers of the Aurora's, using the command class ship as a shield.
When Rodney was within weapons range he decreased the ships speed and started to fire all of his weapons, including the anti fighter turrets, the main guns roared as they fired of volley after volley at the Ha'tak's taking out ship after ship, then the fighter turrets fire hit the shields of the Ha'tak's, creating small ripples on the shields, but mixed within was drones and following closely behind was the combat jumpers.
As the Lucian Alliance realized the deadly surprise hidden within the anti fighter fire many ran of to the glider bay and tried to save themselves by flying away, but the moment they got out of the ship a combat jumper was there and blasted them out of the sky, soon all that remained of the Lucian Alliance fleet was the troop transports on the surface of Langara.
Surface of Langara. Milky Way.
23:30 16/11 2012
Coming down with a crash Sam and ten marines took up defensive position on the road they had landed on, as soon as they were confident no Lucian Alliance troops were in the vicinity of them they moved out in the direction of the Stargate, running down the streets they found themselves approaching a fire fight with the Tau'ri brigade on the outside of the complex that housed the Stargate and a lot of Lucian Alliance troops shooting back from inside.
Coming up to the commander of the brigade Sam stopped.
"How are things looking?" Sam asked.
"The Lucian Alliance have fortified themselves inside the complex, we have yet to breach it."
"You have any heavies in your brigade?"
"Yes mam."
"Have them ram the building from several directions, if there's not a door where they run through that's even better, they probably wont expect us to come through there, and get the snipers up on those roofs." Sam said and pointed to some nearby roofs.
"Yes mam. Heavies are already preparing to rush trough the building and snipers are on their way to the roofs."
"Good, then lets do this." Sam said as she turned back to her ten-man group and ordered the two heavies to make a hole through the wall.
Not waiting for the other heavies to get ready the two heavies walked away a few hundred meters to increase the distance to the complex then they started to run, slowly at first then faster and faster and faster until they hit the wall, but that didn't stop them as they continued through the complex and went out the other side, through another wall, then they managed to stop just outside that wall.
The moment Sam saw the heavies run through the wall she and her group took of towards the complex, just before she reached the hole the other heavies came running through the building, perforating it so that it looked like a Swiss chees, and closely behind them were the rest of the brigade, taking a step inside the building Sam raised her PP-90 towards the roof and fired, as the bullet speeded out of the barrel it created a small pocket of plasma behind it that evaporated the bullet when it hit the roof and continued up through the roof, on the floor above several Lucian Alliance soldiers were hit in the legs, feet or lower body as Sam sprayed an entire clip through the roof into them.
Continuing towards the staircase she knew led to the Stargate Sam shoot more Lucian Alliance soldiers than she could count and when her PP-90 ran out of bullets to shoot she pressed forward, shooting small amounts of plasma, which was as devastating as the bullets against the unprotected soldiers, around her the other Tau'ri soldiers was wiping out the Lucian Alliance soldiers who remained.
When she reached the stairs she ran down them with the soldiers following closely behind, reaching the bottom of the stairs Sam felt the kinetic force of several bullets hitting her, ignoring the force pressing against her shield she took aim at one of the soldiers and dashed forward, she grabbed the man and crushed his throat, then she moved on to the next and the next after that, felling the adrenalin pumping and her bloodlust nearing satisfaction Sam felt better than she'd done in years, then her mind returned to O'Neill and her bloodlust returned, turning around to find a new opponent Sam saw the four Company Chiefs and the Brigade Officer waiting for her to give them new orders.
"I want one company to secure the building, the other three I want to clean up the rest of the city, lastly I want a single team to follow me through the Stargate to clean up on the other side." Sam ordered.
"Black Team we're up." Black Team's leader said from the behind the Brigade Officer.
"Black Team is reporting for duty, mam." The Team Leader said when he and his team reached Sam.
"You'll do." Sam said as she leaped through the gate, remembering what Rodney had said about Destiny being over run simply because of the amount of soldiers.
THE END.
That's it people, hope the Episode wasn't to dark.
A new year in school starts in a couple of hours for me, so there might be a little longer pause as I return to a normal schedule or it might not be a longer pause, we'll see.
As always I'm looking forward to your reviews and all suggestions are appreciated.