Hey guys. I have decided to rewrite Predator's Child. Now I know what you're thinking: "But Love, why are you rewriting Predator's Child?"
Disclaimer: That's not what we're thinking.
"Isn't it already the greatest AvP fanfic ever?"
Waiver: We are definitely not thinking that.
Well my devoted slaves-I mean readers.
Disclaimer: That's not what he means.
Quiet you. Anyway, I just find that it was all over the place: the characters didn't have much development, there wasn't much detail on settings, the chapters were very short, and the story was written like I was making it up as I went along.
Waiver: Which he was.
She's right. I was just making it up as I go. Now however, I have a much better idea of where I would take the story. I just think that the whole thing could have been done better and it can. That's why I'm rewriting it. Please note that I haven't started rewriting it yet and much of the early chapters might be the same as the original. Maybe.
Disclaimer: We apologize for the inconvenience. We do not own AvP.
Waiver: If you have an idea of what we could add to the rewrite to make the story more enjoyable, let us know in the reviews along with anything else you may want to bring to our attention.
Thank you for reading Predator's Child!
Oh! Last thing, I swear! When I actually start writing the new version I would appreciate a Beta Reader. If anyone is interested PM me.