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AT MUD ISLAND :
cid team reach their back up is also there
abhijeet(to acp sir):sir hum 4 groups mai divide ho kar agay bharty hain
acp:han abhijeet ye thik hai aur teams ye hain
TEAM A :sherya. rajat .purvi (attack from north side)
TEAM B:pankaj abhijeet nikhil .(attack from south side)
TEAM .dushant (attack from east side)
TEAM D:sachin .kavi .ishyant (attack from west side)
okay all team understand the plan
team:yes sir
acp:so attack my boyz
whole team members enter into the bungalow from four different sides
as they enter knocking down some goons the firing starts from goons side the team also counter attack and the show down after about 15 minutes of firing the goons knocked down
rajat:to abhijeet sir par yahan par shera kahin bhi nai hai
abhijeet:oh no shera hammary hath sy nikal gaya (in fear) daya ki jan ko ab aur khatra barh gaya
abhijeet:ordered nikhil purvi sachin dekho koi zinda hai kia agar hai tu unhain hospital phunchao ambulance bulwa kar
rajat:sary check naky par shera ki photo bhejdo is shehar sy bahar nai jana chai aur security bhi barhado
rajat noded
trio:nods ..and get back to their work
abhijeet :to the remaining team member pura bungalow dekho dekho kuch milta hai kia
while he himself started searching of his lovely brother and soon he found it in an enclosed room he is lying unconscious he ran towards him pats his cheecks daya ankhain kholo he search here and there for water and foud a water pot in one corner of room he takes some water in his hand and sprinkles on dayas face
he again pats his cheeck this time dayas eye lashes moved a bit
after some minutes effort he got some conscious
abhijeet help him to make him sit
abhijeet(tearyface):tu thik hai na daya ..
daya(weakly):mai thik hun abhi
abhi: nai tu thik nai hai ...dekh kia hal banadia hai tera choron ga nai mai unko aik aik cheez ka hissab lunga mai dekhna
rajat:sir daya sir ko hospital(he could not complete his sentence)
abhijeet:han chalo noded...rajat kuch pata chala shera ka
rajat noded in no
rajat &abhijeet help him to walk towards the ambulance as daya is so weak
At hospital...soon they reach the hospital
they rush towards the emergency calling dr aditia
soon dr aditia reached
he give some comfortable lines to abhijeet on seeing his worried face and
enter into the emergency room
after half hour dr aditia came
abhijeet rushed towards him kaisa hai wo aditia thik hai tm ny jo kaha tha (he is feeling a lump in his throat) dr aditia in a low tone abhijeet himmat rakho
abhijeet:look at dr aditia as he did not understand what he said he repeats h.i.m.m.a.t r.a.k.h.o when he understand the meanings of dr aditia word he speak in a straight tone kia hua usy aditia loss...memory loss...bt physically he is fine bt han wo tmhain .purvi .aur sherya ko pehchanta hai
all smiles on this as how is this possible that daya sir forget his brother sister and luv
abhijeet :happy yani memory loss puri tarah nai hua hai aur bht jald thik hojaiga haina ...aur koi khatra wali bat tu nai hai na
he speaks all in one breath
bt then what he heard is most horrible thing ahe felt sky crush on his head
aditia:abhijeet wo tmhain abhi tu manta hai bt not as a brother bt as a father
he paused seeing the reaction of abhijeet .abhijeet plz himmat rakho
abhijeet(senselessly):just nods
acp:come forward and hug abhijeet
abhijeet:who was fighting with his tears just shattered with tears just give the way to pain to flow in form of tears after some moments he relaxed a bit
after seeing him relax dr aditia continue
aditia:purvi ko apni behan aur sherya ko apni mama manta hai aur khud ko wo 4-5 saal ka bacha manta hai in short he lost identification of relations because usky dimag k memories wala part damage hua aur sari memories mix up hogai hainhe cannot be able to distinguish any one but its temporary phase medication aur shock treatment sy he will be recover soon bt shock jb daingy jb uski heart beat aur nerve level normal hojain gi abhi sedation dy kar sulaya hai after one hour he will be in conscious so jb tk ap apny emotions ko relax karlain and mentally prepared bhi
now its sherya turned who completely stuuned after hearing this completely shattered purvi try to console him
purvi(teary face):kuch nai hoga daya sir ko wo bht jald thik hojaingy tujhy apny pyar pr bharoosa hai na
sherya:nods
purvi:tu phir ro kiun rahi hai hammain himmat rakhni hogi daya sir ko thik karny k lia na tu chal shabash ansoon punch after a paused in naughty tone daya sir ki mummy bht bhadur haina aur tjhy tu itna acha mauqa mil raha hai daya sir k pass rehna ka
sherya :blushed badly and a teary smile came on his lip she just nods
purvi turned to abhijeet:ap kun ro rahy hain ap tu papa haina apko tu mummy sy bhi ziyada samjhdar aur bhadur hona chaiya na ... aur meri bhabhi ko sambhalna chaiya na apko tu na ky is hospital ko swimming phool
abhijeet:a teary smile came on his lips he just noded
AFTER ONE HOUR:
daya get back conscious he is lying on hospital bed
team enters into the room
and there came a swet and innocent query
daya(to sherya):mama ap itna logon ko kun lai kar ai ho
sherya:ye apsy dosti karna chahty hain
daya:jaisy papa ny ap sy ki thi
abhijeet:(murmurs) yadasht chali gai mjhy papa aur sherya ko mummi bana diya pr tang khenchny ki adat nai gai abhi tk ...had hai
daya:dekho mummi papa apny ap sy bat karahy hain ap inhain jharoo sy maro na aphi tu kehti ho ye bad rabbit (habbit) hai jaisy miss marti hain
abhijeet:jump on his feet after the thought sherya hitting him with jharoo and tarika ji is watching all this ...he shivers with the thought
team who is trying to control their smile but could not resist from smiling after seeing abhijeets reaction
daya(to nikhil):mama ko jharoo la kar do
nikhil (astonished):main jharoo la kar don abhijeet sir ko marny k lia
daya:nods . ...a.l.i.j.e.t uncle ko nai abhi ko marny ka lia
the whole room shiver with the brusting laughter voice of team members
daya(confusion):ap log hansy kun
acp:ap ho hi itny cute k sab apko dekh kar hans pary
acp signle frredy to call aditia
daya(proud tone):mama bhi kehti hain ..room terhy naak waly uncle
acp & team eyes get widened on hearing the compliment tery nak waly uncle
abhijeet(murmurs):pehly rawan ab terhy nak waly uncle (he smile broadly )pata nai aur kitny nam rakhy ga ye acp sir k
acp:somehow manage his anger on this compliment and smile broadly
team:somehow manage their laughing voice and smile broadly on hearing this compliment too
turned to sherya
mama..ghar kab jaingy
abhijeet(murmurs):ab aya na line par kab sy mjhy sherya k hathoon pitwany ki koshish karahai .. hamesha mjhy hi phasata hai
sherya:chaly jain gy abhi ap so jao...good boy ki tarah
daya:mama gaud mai jhula jhula kar sulao na
abhijeet&sherya eyes get widened on hearing this farmaish
pr thanks to aditia who come on correct time
aditia:checks daya...and then give him sedation after so many nakhras but abhijeet and sherya managed well...in between these daya is making so may faces
after sometimes confirming of dayas sleep team get out of dayas room holding their stomach
once again they all laugh broadly on remembering the cute conservation of daya
abhijeet(to acp sir):sir daya uthy ga tu ghar jany ki zid kary ga
acp:rajat pankaj sachin tm abhijeet k ghar jao aur sara saman jo cid sy ya abhijeet daya sy related hai abhijeet k purany ghar mai rakh wado ...aur purvi tm sherya ka saman duo k ghar phunchado aur apna bhi so sherya could be feel comfortable aur kun k ab tum uski behan ho
puri nods
trio:get back to their task
abhijeet after completing discharge formalities and gathering information about dayas health from dr aditia moves towards acp sir
acp:hogaya sb kuch
abhijeet:nod
acp:main ny constable tainat kar dia hain tmhary ghar k bhar safety k lia shera abhi bhi azad ghum raha hai badly ki ag mai jal raha hoga wo daya par hamla bhi karsakta hai dobara
abhijeet:noded...as he also worried for dayas safety
at evening daya wake up and as usual demand of hm ghar kab jaingy mama
sherya:pehly ap hath mun dho kar clothes change karlo
daya:ap mera mun dhula ka mjhy kapry pehna do
sherya:blushed bad on this demand of daya
abhijeet:trying to cover up ap good boy hona mama k
daya:nods
abhijeet: tu phir ap khud clothes change karky aur mun dhoky ao okay
daya:yes papa
after some time daya came
daya:happily dekho mama mainy good boy ki tarah kapry change karlia ...
sherya:good ...ab shoes bhi pehanlo
daya:mjhy laces bandhny nai aty mama
sherya:okay mai apko pehnadaity hun
after this sherya said chalain
daya:nods...mama ap mjhy gaud mai lai kar jao na
abhijeet(suppressed his laugh):beta yaha par agar kisi nai dekh lia k ap mama ki gaud mai jarahy tu woh kya sochy gai
daya:nai mai khud jaunga gaud mai nai ...trying to closer to sherya ...mama idher baitho sherya noded kia hua apko baithaya kun mjhy ...daya give a soft kiss on his cheeks and said ap worlds best mother ho sherya blushed badly and tears came in his eyes on remembering the beautiful memories
abhijeet(murmurs):lo aj tk mun sy i luv u bola nai gaya aj direct kiss ...hey bhagwan agey pata nai kia hony wala hai ...bachaly mjhy
daya:to sherya chalain
sherya:control over his emotions and clear his eyes and smiles and said chalo
daya:didi kahan hai
abhijeet(murmurs):lo agai yad apni didi ki ab maza ay ga abhi tk tu hamari tang khinch raha tha ab purvi ki bhi khaichy ga
before any one can answer the querry of daya
purvi:apki didi yahan hain
daya:hugs her...ap kahan thi itni dair sy mainy bht miss kia apko
abhijeet:ab chalain ab tu apki didi bhi again
daya:nods chalain
abhijeet:opens the front seat of car for daya
daya slap his forehad papa yahan mai nai mama baithaingi
mai piche didi k sath baithon ga
abhijeet:covering the scenario...okay
on reaching the house daya happily ...yipppppeeee hum puhanch gai
he saw a cat and run in order to catch the cat
sherya run behind that he might not hurt himself
after some time sherya caught daya and scolded as kahan jarahy thy ap
bad boyz ki tarah daya make a puppy face and sherya forgot all scoldings and lost in this puppy face
flash back start...sherya is calling but he did not pick up the phone as he is busy with his khabri
they had make a plan to spent the evening their
but dayas meeting with his khabri spoils their and now he is not picking his call she is super angry on daya
at 9 daya reaches at sheryas place
sorry sherya late hogaya woh asal main khabri sy mil ny jana par gaya
sherya(angrily):tu ab kun ai hain
daya:awwwwe my cute doll is angry with me
he make a puppy face and her anger vanished in air
she also dont know why she cannot resist herself infront of dayas puppy face
flashback end...her thoughts distrubed by the innocent querry
daya:kia hua mama ap ro kun rahi ho mai ainda nai karonga pakka he holds hid ears sorry mai apko dobara hurt nai karonga
abhijeet:till now reach their in search of daya and sherya
...gasaping the scenario
he said kia bhai tm dono aj mjhy bhuka marwao gy kia chalo jaldi andar chalo mjhy bht bhuk lagi hai
sherya:clears her eyes and said chalia andar chalty hain
daya:mama main gol garry (guppy) khaon ga
abhijeets mouth drop down to floor :kia kaha sahab nai dinner mai gol gappy khain gy (in anger)isy tu main dus jootian khilaonga aik dafa thik hojai
after so many efforts abhijeet sherya purvi succeeded to melt his zidd of gol gappy and convince him on eating noodles
after feeding daya
sherya said jao apny kamry main ja kar sojao
daya:nai mai aisy nai soan ga mama mera balon main hath pheraingi aur papa mjhy loori sunaigi
abhijeet:(with widened eyes)there is no other chance of escape sherya ab ye bat tu mani pary gi hamain sahab ki ...tm comfortable hogi sherya
sherya:nods
abhijeet to purvi tm team ko msg kardo adhy ghanty mai mere ghar puhanchy jb tk hum is sahabjady ko sulah kar aty hain
purvi:noded
after adjusting both on the edges of dayas bed they starting their jobs assinged by his lovely bro &love
after some efforts
they both succeed in making daya sleep
daya is sleeping huging sherya's waist
sherya:lost in his thoughts still patting dayas head
abhijeet came forward and placed a hand over his shoulder and said woh sogaya hai sherya
FLASH BACK START
dareya and abhirika are going on mission and played as a role of couple
between the mission they had to go in party where a drug deal takes place
DAYA HOLDING SHERYA PATNI JI AP MERE SATH DANCE KARNA CHAINGI
SHERYA :WHY NOT PATI PERMAISHER JI
ON DANCE FLOOR
DAYA:HOLDING SHERYA AND LOST IN HER BEAUTIFUL MESMERIZING EYES AND ANGEL'S BEAUTY
(IN BACKGROUND MUSIC WAS PLAYING MUHABBAT BARSA DAINA TU K SAWAN AYA HAI)
SUDDENLY SHERYA SLIPS BEFORE SHE FALL DOWN DAYA CAUGHT HER BY HOLDING HER WAIST
SHERYA:SHIVER A BIT ON THIS TOUCH OF DAYA
ABHIJEET AND TARIKA:WHO WAS STANDING NEAR BY CLICK THIS BEAUTIFUL MEMORY IN CAMERA
ABIHEEJ(WHISPERS)IN TARIKA'S EAR LO HOGA YE TU LATO
CHALO CHAAL KAR INKA EYE LOCK TORAIN WARNA MISSION PURA NAI HOGA SARI ZINDAGI
TARIKA:GIGGLES CHORO NA ABHIJEET CHALO CHALTY HAIN
flash back end...sherya:came out his dreamworld
JI SIR APNY KUCH KAHA ...ABHIJEET HAN WOH SO GAYA HAI
SHERYA NODS ...HMMMM
ABHIJEET:AFTER SETTLING PILLOW IN DAYA'S HAND AS HE WAS HOLDING SHERYAS WAIST SO THAT HIS SLEEP CAN'T DISTRUB
abhijeet :to sherya mai janta hun tmhary lia bht mushkil hai but hamain apny apko sambhalna hoga daya kai lia...you luv daya na to us luv ko wapis pany ki lia hi sahi
sherya:noded with teary eyes
after this they move towards lounch where team is waiting for him
abhijeet to purvi phir batao usky bad kia hua tha
purvi started
flashback starts...he did not takes proper rest nor take of his health
after discharging from hospital
2ND DAY
daya received a parcel ...in which a new mobile set is kept
he picked up the phone the phone started ringing he attend the call
shera(on other side):teasing tone sunna hai tmhara accident hua tha kaisy ho
daya:ay shera tu aik dafa meri muthi mai aja gardan maror dun ga teri
sheta:in anger tameez sy bat kar ye mat bhul k tery abhi ki sansoon ki dor mere hath mai hai
daya hurried nai i m sorry ab nai karonga gussa kjya chahty ho tm ...hmmmm ab aya na line par tu
aik hafty ka time hai sochly achi tarah sy ya tu abhijeet ki maut ya tu sary rishty tor k banglore mai aja
daya yelled with anger main nai karonga aisa kabhi nai kary ga tu tu sb kuch jo hum khaingy apny abhi ki zindagi k lia ...aik hafta sochlo aik hafty bad call karon ga aur han agar mere bary main ya is mobile k bary main kisi ko bhi bataya na tu ...agy tm khud samjhdar ho
shera laughed evilly
daya with a thud fall on the floor ...tears rolling down from his cheecks
leaving abhijeet lost his life as well as abhijeet and he did not want to take this cruel bt destiny played a cruel game he has choose between abhi and his life and the results of both decision means to kill abhijeet the pain he has been starting to give his caring big bro and buddy means he is also in pain but he nerve CARE of his paint bt his brotherpain he do care whole night he is on the crying&understanding the creulity the circumstances had played to him
when morning arose he look at clock its sharp 6 indicating that came to his house any time
so he moved towards after washing his face and changing cloth so that could not get any sign of crying on his and gestures ...
the door belll rang ...daya opening the some harsh words came from his mouth mana kia tha na phir kun aye ho haan yahan par
abhijeet in straight tone tm rat bhar soi nai aur rahy ho na
daya(sighed);as how he could hide his emotions from his brother
tmhain kia problem mai roaun ya hason han
abhijeet daya bachy ki bat hai mjhy batao do din sy dekh raha hoon tm kuch pareshan ho ...itni tension mat lo bacch mjh sy share karlo ye tmhari health ki lia thik nai hai
its become difficult for daya to control over his emotions after hearing this soft voice and sensing a secure shell around him but he control over his emotional battle immediately and speak in harsh
why would you so much interested to irritated me?why you shouldn't leave me alone ?
plz chaly jao yahan sy akela chodo mjhy
abhijeet in extreme hurt and just left the place
while daya in extreme pain falls down on the floor near the door he was hiting himself and murmuring kun kia mainy asa ?kiun dil tora uska main ?he hit another slap to himself he was not looking in his senses after some time he slept aur unconscious
over there
AT EVENING
purvi entered into the by a spare key and stunned to see blood dipped face of his bhaiya
she tried him to wake up but all gone in vain ...he sprinkles some water on his face and this time it gets work after sometime he get conscious
purvi(harsh):kun karahy hain ap aisa kun khud ko aur abhijeet sir ko aur hum sab ko dukh puhancha rahe hain ap
daya:shouting purvi chali jao yahan just get lost akela kun nai chordaty mjhy tm sb...
purvi tried to talk back but seeing all going in vain she left the place
daya wash his face which was fully dipped in blood although he feel high pain but he said to himself ye dard tu kuch bhi nai hai usky agy jo mainy abhijeet ko dia hai
i am sorry abhijeet ...a tear slipped down from his eyes hurting his wounds
AFTER THIS
DAYAbehavior was very odd with every one
even purvi tried to talk with him but in return she only got harsh and cruel words ...purvi kahin bhaiya ko wo call dobara tu nai ai ...mjhy bhaiya k phone records check karny chaiya ...but she did not get any clue from phone records
purvi(pov):phone records tu sahi hain phir bhaiya itny tensed kun hai
pata lagana paryga
abijeet(tensed):very much as dr aditia told his health report agar ye aisi hi neglect karta raha na tu it will be dangerous for him ...abhijeet become more tensed
purvi heard all this from bureau door now she could not resist she directly go towards dayas house she will shocked on seeing the scenario the door of house was half opened she peep inside and become more shocked on seeing scenario daya was sitting on ground holding his head
she hurried towards daya bhaiya kia huwa apko ...mai abhi adita aur abhijeet sir ko phone karti hun
daya who was sweating profusely noded in no nai meri dawai upper waly kitchen cabinet mai hai wo daido theek hojai ga
purvi:noded ..mai abhi lati hun she cursed herself how she neglectful from his while she knows the whole conditions
purvi returned with tablet and water glass handed over the both to daya
daya gluped down the tablet with water after half an hour he feeled a bit relaxed
purvi after seeing him relax started the conversation
purvi(in harsh) AB BATAINGY AP AP AB TU APKA TRANFER BHI HOGAYA HAI BANGALORE MAI JATY JATY HI SACHAI BATA DIJIA
APNY QASAM DI HAI ABHIJEET SIR KO NAI BATANY KI
DAYA:TELL HER BEFORE HIS ACCIDENT WHAT HAPPENED AND AFTER HIS DISCHARGE WHAT WAS HAPPEN ED DAYA FURTHER ADDED WITH
tmhary jany k bad mainy bht socha and i choose abhijeet life not abhi i knew my brother is very strong aur tm log hogy yahan mere jany k bad tu tum log sambhal logy
main dcp k ghar aur usy banglore cid mai transfer ki request ki
dcp sir bht khush huai mera transfer application dekh kar and after two days mera transfer later bhi agaya
purvi main Bangalore shera k kehny par ja raha hun wahan cid mai rah kar usky gang bary mai information nikalonga aur shera ko pakar kar bht jald wapis lautoon ga yahan mjhy lagta hai k shera Bangalore mai hi kahin chupa hai ...jb tk tm sambhalena mery bhai ko
kal subha ki flight hai meri ...then he hold purvis hand wada karo k tm abhijeet ka khayal rakhogi aur sambhal logi use wada karo mjhsy
purvi:pehly ap wada karain k mjhsy contact main rahaingy
shera k bary mai jo bhi information mily gi wo mjh sy share karaingy
daya:noded promise
purvi apna bhi khayal rakhengy aur yahan ki ya abhijeet sir tension ki nahi laingy bilkul bhi
daya:nodded nai lunga
purvi:mai apky lautny ka intezar karungi ...kun k apky sath hum sabki khushian nhi ja rahi hai yad rakhia ga
and she moved out the house ...the tears which she suppress inside her till the whole conversation starts rolling down from his cheeck in flow
she shouts in pain anger disbelief kun...kun bhagwan kia..kia bigara hai in dona ny apka jo kabhi chain nai lainy daity ...itny imteehan kiun lyty ho inka haan ..inka ..kasoor kia hai bs itna hi na ki yeah dono dost hain aik dosry ki jan hain bs itna hi na
why?why?why?why? she had only one question why it just happen with her brothers
INSIDE THE HOUSE ...THE PHONE RANK
daya picked up... ..he yelled kia ...kia ...kaha tmny
flashback endwhole team shattered with tears but the most shattered person in the room was abhijeet
thinking whaat daya had done for him and what he had done with him
team also have the same guilt
is new turn ny chounka dia na
guys daya ka identification of relations mix up hona imaginary hai
sorry for mistakes & guyz plz review zarror karia ga silent viewers bhi review karo so i get to know my mistakes
next update thora late hoga as my exams start
hope u all like it