Edge of Desire

by vampiresim

Bella Swan, independent 25 year old who has nothing to do with love. But what happens when she is arranged to marry the guy who first broke her heart at the age of 13? Will she open up to him or will she stay guarded and give him hell?

10. Chapter 10-have mercy on me

Please Don't Kill Me!

Hi everyone, it's your girl Sim. I have taken some time away from "Edge of Desire", just to rethink about the story plot. I did have it going in a direction but at one point I came to realize it was going no direction like the band "One Direction." Okay, that was a bad pun.

Anyways, as this being my first story ever, I have seen myself make too many mistakes with it. I'm on the fence here whether I should or shouldn't delete this story. I want to delete it and re write it, but then I want to keep it and add a better story line to it.

So I'm leaving the decision up to you! The public! After some of the negative comments I received on this story, I would like some good feedback for it. I know I need a beta and I am in search of one (If you want, you can help me out). Other than that, I would love for you all to share what you think I should do with the story.

ALSO- if any of you do have an awesome idea for this story and would like to add on or co-write it with me, you can also PM me! Let me know, I would really appreciate the help.

And if you think this story is poop then go check out my two other stories! I'm actually going somewhere with those lol.