Alright guys I got someone saying in the reviews how bad the story is before it gets off the ground so I am here to clear a few things up.
First of all the canon characters are not weak or pathetic in anyway. They just fear the Sin's because they are known killers and are supernatural entities basically. So are you going to try arresting them for doing their job?
Second I hold a firm belief that no one is truly innocent in this world. We all have done things we are not proud of and keep to ourselves like in this story. A corrupt politician's staff had to know what was going on so not doing anything about it is the almost the same as doing it yourself if you had the chance to stop it. So no the maid was not a complete innocent.
And let's be honest how many stories have there been about a former enemy like Nightmare Moon and Sombra making a comeback to try and take over Equestria and have actually been very good? A lot that's how many.
Also to get out there each of the Sin's kill a specific type of evil. Greed kills well the greedy corrupt bastard's and he would know who they are because he is the SIN OF GREED! Lust kill's rapist and pedophiles, Sloth kills lowlifes who let others do their dirty work for them, Wrath kills most murderers, Envy kills people who commit crimes of jealousy or to just spite someone, Gluttony kills those who gorge themselves on wrongfully obtained treasures, and pride kills those who think themselves above everyone else (*cough* Blueblood *cough*)
So I just want to say let the story get more than two chapters out before just flaming it. I don't mind the flames but just let the story get a little off the ground first. I hope that answers any questions you all may have. If ya got anymore than send me a PM. Nicranger out.