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Great idea on no Sasuke! He was overpowered and a ducheshbag
Well to tell you I think Sasuke is the best person on Naruto. Me killing him off make the story into a "big how did what?"
For example
"Who killed Itachi or did he come back?"
"What happen to the snake sennin?"
"Who will be on team 7 then?"
So yeah that make people open their eyes at a new story that has not been touch before. ^+^
Darrius
Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fan fiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating please and thank you.
Thanks man it's nice to know, since I thought this story wouldn't be THAT big. Don't worry I am going to update this story at least every two weeks or one.
S.O.L
Ok I will tell you this, you need someone to read through this, because its getting really confusing, the grammar needs work, and your "story plot" needs more work as well it is a bit jumpy it needs to be smoothed out so the "story" flows, you seem to be rushing into it,
Create a list of subject's you want Naruto to go though before writing a new chapter having a paragraph or more per subject, its better to plan out what you want to happen in a new chapter, Making sure that this "New" chapter flow with the previous chapter, just get someone to help with the grammar and smoothing it out
Yeah I feel that this chapter is rush and jumping everywhere. Even through the next four will be slow pace AND will "flow".
Naruto made his way to the gates of the Uchiha compound with a serious look on the Genin face. He walks through the empty streets of the once powerful clan. Making his way to the main house Naruto knock on the door.
"Who is it!" A female voice said from inside the house running up to the door.
"Midori it's me Naruto." The clan head said a few seconds later the door open wide enough to let him in. Naruto walk in and hug midori seeing the state of his teammate was in. She then led him into the living room where Shisui was looking over some paperwork.
"Sensei does you got a second to speak." Naruto said shisui nod his head and motion for Naruto to sit down. Naruto gave a bow to him and sit right in front of Shisui. Naruto turn toward Midori who was standing at the doorway. Midori if you don't mind may I speak to Shisui in private. She walks away moving back into one of the room down the hall.
"Now Naruto what is this about?"
"Sensei I just came back from the meeting with the council, and with you two being the last loyal uchiha. They wish for you to join us as the clan head for the Uchiha clan though you have to do something for them." Shisui thought about it knowing something like this may happen but remember something more important.
"C.R.A right"
Naruto nod" Yes they wanted you to be put on C.R.A just like me." He said to Shisui laughing at his face expression when he told him. So Shisui snap out of it standing up "What about Midori."
Naruto sigh "They was trying to turn her into a breed stock." Shisui quickly with though hand sign but Naruto dash forward holding his hands back.
"Naruto let me go now!"
"NO! I am done with what I am saying."
"You said they was trying to turn her into a breed stock!"
"Nothing anymore I took care of that problem." Shisui calm down hearing that but had a mad look on his face with his sharingan spinning wildly. Naruto seeing this took out a piece of paper handing it to Shisui. He grab paper looking over what it was about, reading it he stare at Naruto with a shock face. "Did you and Fugaku really made this?"
"Yes, he had a feeling will happen soon and this is his back up plan if the coup d'état don't work." Shisui stare at Naruto shock of how he knowing about the Uchiha coup before it even happen.
"Did Fugaku tell you?
"No, well I was talking to him I saw his hated for how the clan is being treated." Naruto said looking around the house.
"So you saw right through him, I am impressed that you was able to do it." Shisui gave a quick smile at the fact that a 12-year-old boy was able to see what many don't.
"Call down midori for the next part I need to get her down here." Naruto said grabbing the people again putting it in his pocket. Shisui call Midori down waiting for her to come downstairs. A few minutes later she came down with a sad look on her face. Naruto stood up and walk toward her while Shisui stay sitting down to watch.
"Midori, you may not want to hear or see this right now." Naruto gave the sheet of paper to her not wanting his voice to fail him. Midori look it over before throwing it on the ground with rage grabbing on to Naruto.
"Is this want I am to you? After seeing I am the last of my clan just for you to tell me that I am being giving away." Midori yelled with tears rolling down her face.
"It's been the only way."
"No it was not I know you Naruto you would been able to fight this!"
"Something's you just can't fight Midori.'
"Why did you pick this?" Midori as Naruto who was looking at her confused a little by her words.
"You this marriage thing, you damn well know what I am talking about!" Her eyes then transform into the sharingan with now three tomes' in each eye. Both Naruto and Shisui look shock at it while Midori don't even notice it herself.
Naruto sigh and lower Midori hand from his shirt and hug her "Because even if you don't know it but after these past three months I have falling in love with you and there is no way I will let the council's turn you into a breeding stock." Midori eyes with wide with the passion that Naruto put in word she pushing Naruto away dashing upstairs where she first came from.
"Naruto I think she need time to think about this. Shisui said with a monotone feeling sad about the things his teams have to go though. Naruto look at him and just smile nicely and start to head to the door. "Sensei I will give her two weeks to make up her mind, if she love me or not I will protect her even if I have to fight the whole council body." He said closing the door behind him walking away from this empty place.
"Well then that went great if you ask me."
Naruto smile a little hearing his mentor voice after so long." I could have been worse, but anyways anything you found about the transformation?
"I think so if I unlock your potential."
"Ok this what are you talking about unlock thing?" Naruto said waving to the people in the streets he walks by.
"Well first off it's a technique that releases an unknown amount of hidden power within a person. When a guardian of a plant [Kami or guru] do it it's give the person a 4x boost, If a kai [supreme kai] do it it's became 8x but if a god of destruction do it will release so of our OWN godly power into a being making them gain a 10x boost to power. Beerus said taking a break after explaining it to Naruto. Naruto finally made it in his house and sat down on his couch shock at the power up he could get. "Now what about the item? He said out loud not thinking no one is inside with him.
Naruto nod at this and hop up walking into his bathroom looking at himself in a mirror. "Let's do the unlock thing the first chance we get out the village."
Beerus seeing reason gave him a quick groan and with back to work for what's going to happen tonight. "Ok ask your Hokage to let you out the village for the week since you got the two weeks break from the team." Naruto put on a white shirt and black pants with white combat shoes and headed out the door to the Hokage's mansion.
As Naruto make his way to the front desk, he stop and knock on the desk getting the woman attentions. She gave Naruto a wide smile "Hello Toukai-san what may I help you with?"
"I will like to speak with the Hokage about a matter that I am having." Naruto said with a smile on his face. He took a second to look at the woman in front of him she was a very tall, slender woman with long pink hair past her waist with locks of hair that frame her face down to her chin, large breasts that seem to be C-cup, a high forehead, and light green eyes that have long, voluminous lashes. She has a narrow waist that makes her almost built like an hourglass. She wears a white qipao dress with three red circular designs at the bottom of the front of her dress as well as the back. Underneath the dress, she wears pink ¾-length pants along with brown sandals.
Smiling to himself he see the woman was done with her phone call with the Hokage and lean into the desk. "May I ask what did he say?" He said looking into her eyes with a charming smile making the woman blush a little.
"H-He said gives him a minute to get ready." She look down at her paperwork going back to writing things down, Naruto then grab her chin making her look at him. "I never got your name though it much be something a beautiful as your appearances. Her face became red at the teasing she was getting. "It's Mebuki Haruno Toukai-san?" Naruto wave her off getting inches away from her face. "How about you just call me Naruto-Kun."
She began to rub her knees together feeling a little wet from this treatment not feeling this way for a while. Before Naruto could final attack on the woman in front of him but was stop by footsteps coming downstairs.
The ANBU with the mask and the codename Neko gave a slight dip of her head that caused her long, purple hair to move with the flow of her motions. "Toukai-sama the Hokage has sent me down here to bring you to his office." She said waiting for Naruto. Naruto sigh a little mad that he can't finish. He turns to face Mebuki again and give her a large smile." Let's finish is up after I get done with my meeting." She nods at him rushing through her paperwork waiting for his return.
Walking down the hall to the Hokage office was met in silence with Naruto with a huge grin on his face. He made his way in the office and his smiles completely drop to a frown. Standing in the room was the Hokage and behind him was his the toad sage and his wife Kushina. Looking to the side of the room he said Ryu Hyuuga someone he thought he would never see again and his sister Mito.
"Did I come at the wrong time Hokage-sama?" Naruto question seeing as he was not warn about this. Minato shook his head waving Naruto to sit down while the two stare at each other. "So what may I help you with Naruto-and." Minato asks with a smile on his face.
"I wish for a week training trip outside of the village." Shocking people in the room even the Anbu guards. Jiraiya quickly jump to the punch speaking his opinions "You can't just walk up it her-
"I wasn't talking to you Jiraiya." Naruto said cutting off Jiraiya before he could even finish his sentence. Kushina summon her chains holding Jiraiya back from attacking Naruto. You're lucky she holding me back kid!"
"No you should be greatful since you was about to assault a leaf ninja and ALSO a clan head." Naruto said with anger in his voice having his Ki make a faint aura around him. Minato seeing Naruto anger going up he quickly writes a permission to be out the village and head it to him. Naruto smiles at this and took the paper and headed for the door.
"Just to let you know Naruto not all your battles going to be easy like this one."
"Don't worry I know." With that he left the room leaving nothing but silences. Heading back to the front desk he notice that Mebuki was already waiting for him at the door with a lust written on her face. Naruto frown became a smile approaching the woman grabbing her hand. "Should we go to my place? "She nod and they both disappear from sight for the rest of the day.
[Since she is not that important it will not be lemon and yes she is not in the harem just a "sex friend."]
Naruto woke up sitting up in his bed to see a naked Mebuki lying beside him with a happy smile on her face. He got out of bed putting on his clothes and went to wake up Mebuki. She moans as she sat up looking at Naruto with sleepy eyes. "What is it baby." She said hardly keeping her eyes open looking at him.
"I have to go I need to leave for a mission."
"Oh ok see you around. "And with that she fall right back on the bed going back to her bliss sleep. Naruto laughs at it and grabs the scroll and opens his door and closes it behind him. He stops and thought to himself.
"Did you wear a condom?"
"What's a condom?"
"Hahahahahahahahaha!" All he hear was laughing from beerus while he slowly walk toward the east gates
{AN-I think I am going to do it, Do you want me too?"}
"Lord Beerus what's happened to me yesterday?" Naruto thought to himself.
"When I was working on unlocking your potential this is a side effect."
"Side effect?"
"Yes you becoming more how can I say this arrogant."
"Ok never mind that Lord Beerus so where do you think my power level will be after the unlock thing?" Naruto asks the god of destruction as he hand the papers to the guards at the gates who check them over before nodding at him.
"Your power levels around 16,000,000 so a 10x boost will put you too 24,000,000 which is around the same level as cell perfect form." He listen to his teacher while flying through trees reaching the outskirts of the town of tsuki which was busy with people running back and forward kids playing around in the streets.
"Ok Lord Beerus do it now I am far enough from the village." Naruto waited not hearing anything from Lord Beerus before getting knocked off his feet by his Ki oozing off his body. His once purple aura started to change into a blood red aura taking over shocking the ground where he lay. He let out a quick yelled shooting a beam of light where he was. He teleports away from there with the rest of the strength he got left and passes out on the cold hard ground.
He slowly made his way to his feet after the long day rest he took from the unlock potential. He looks around seeing a huge rock he raised his hand at it shooting a weak Ki blast at it. It made contact and blow it up in a blast. "This is amazing!" He then start to power up making his blood red aura come out again blasting everything ten feet from him away.
"When you're done with your check I need you to go back to that town you was just in." Naruto nod to himself and then power his Ki up again dashing into the forests in the way he remember the town. When he got there he saw a three-man group of one jonin and two Genin who was causing mayhem around the city. He watch them go into a bar and start to order drinks and mess with the others. Seeing enough Naruto walk into the building and walk to their table, they all stop and look at Naruto scanning him. "Who is you kid?" One of the chunin said taking a sip of the sake he goes in front of him.
"No of your concern weakling." Naruto said before going right back at staring at the leader. "Watch out Naruto some how I sense something strange about this person." Naruto eyes with wide then with back to normal the one chunin he call a weakling jump up and went to attack Naruto.
Naruto move to the side kicking the man in the ribs making him fall to his knees holding himself in pain. His one friend declare to attack to revenge his friend but Naruto snap his eyes at him charging up a Ki blast slamming it in the do chest blowing him up into nothing but ashes. The last jonin who was looking at his teammates died with any mercy or last words. The man is a large muscle man, with dark eyes and black hair that spikes out at the back from underneath his bandanna-styled forehead protector. He also has narrow cheeks, and a thin nose. He wears the red Iwagakure uniform, which has no sleeves, underneath his flak jacket.
"So how about you go screaming and I will let you live." Naruto said with a smirk on a Ki ball in his hand glowing bright red. The man laugh at Naruto making him anger he released the Ki blast at the iwa jonin and walk away.
"I wish he would had put a figh-" Naruto suddenly pick up by his leg and toss into a nearby building causing people inside he flee in fear. Naruto rise up and got into his fighting stance walking for the man to appear. Soon the Jonin came from behind the smoke with a smirk just as Naruto did early.
"How the hell did you survive?" Naruto said having his Ki cover his body getting ready for the fight.
"Did you think they let me be a jonin for no reason? My bloodline allows me to turn my skin into a black metal substance. So No matter what you can't defeat me kid." He laugh and dash forward Naruto throwing a punch at his chest. Naruto grabbed his hand and toss the man in the air groaning hard. He recovery and his who body became pitch black letting him fall to the ground faster going for a drive kick at Naruto. He quickly roll out the way of the kick that was soon in the ground from it impact.
They both stood there looking at each other laughing a little bit. Naruto Toukai."
"Fisheye Greed." The iwa Jonin said with a smirk.
"Don't worry I won't go easy on you anymore."
Ishiyo raised an eyebrow at the blonde's words. "Do you honestly think you can defeat me? Just because you beat two mid-level chunin don't mean you can match me.
"You not be around the same level of these two idiot only difference is you think before you act." Naruto pointed out with a sardonic grin.
"It matters not," Ishiyo said with a nonchalant shrug. "We have Genin being made to this day they can be replaced with your head!"
"Yeah, I think I'm goanna pass," Naruto replied. There was a small frown marring his face. The man's callousness towards his now deceased subordinates bothered the blond. "You see I have a honor as a leaf ninja to respect my friend!"
"Then I suppose this conversation is over," Ishiyo said with a glare. "It's time for you to come with me to iwa then."
He dashed forward. He was much faster than Naruto thought he would be. The pair soon began trading blows as they closed the distance between each other. Naruto launched several Ki punches towards Ishiyo who blocked those as he could.
Ishiyo took a single step back, before snapping his right leg up in a heel kick that would have caught Naruto in the chest, had the blond not managed to twist his torso out of the way. In retaliation, the head of the Toukai tried to grab the extended leg so he could break it at the joints, but his opponent harden his leg making it impossible.
Leaning back ever so slightly, the foot missed Naruto's face by mere millimeters. Naruto then spin in a break-neck speed with a Ki blast hitting Ishiyo side making the man slide back from him.
As Naruto came back up he decided that he had enough of getting attacked and it was time to take the fight to Ishiyo. Naruto dash out the broken building into the streets that had been empty with Ishiyo following from behind he match Naruto speed running beside him they both move five feet away from each other. Ishiyo with through hand seals as Naruto watch him. "Earth release rock pillar!" He created some rock pillars that will protrude from the ground that was following Naruto. Naruto just in the air shooting Ki blasts at them destroying them but leaving a small crater there.
Naruto stop and begin to channel Ki into both of his hands. "DOUBLE SUNDAY!" rises both of his arms up and charges two red energy spheres. He then brings his hands forward and fires the energy spheres in the form of two energy waves at him. He covers himself in metal again letting the beams at the building behind him.
"Hehehe how things are going we going to destroy this town before one of us die." Ishiyo said laughing looking at the smoke rising in the air. Naruto just smile and reply" Well don't worry about it since you will be the one dyeing!"
Ishiyo grit his teeth. "That does it! I've had it up to here with you! Ishiyo shot forward, his speed having increased to the point where it looked like he had blurred out of existence. He appeared right before Naruto with a large smirk, and sent his metal punch to the blonde's face, expecting him to fly.
What he got was Naruto's image just faded.
Eyes widening in surprise Before Ishiyo knew what him, he was sent flying from a Ki punch to the back. Naruto jump how in the air charging Ki to a level where clouds start to break apart.
"This is the end!" Naruto shouted as he puts his hands together in front of himself and charges a large, Red energy sphere. Then, he spreads his arms out at his sides, splitting the single sphere into two, and finally throws his hands downward. Ishiyo saw in coming and try to catch it with his body armor covering him. After struggling for a few seconds the blast soon blow up taking him out. Naruto land back onto the ground with a sigh looking at the damage the two did.
"Wow Hokage-sama is not going to be happy about this." Naruto quickly walk out the town like nothing happen. While under the smoke Ishiyo raise up with blood dripping all over his body he with trough hand sign and summon a Mole. He wrote down info about what just happen and gave it to it." Hehehe you think I will let you win like that Naruto." He falls on his back with a smile on his face. Out of nowhere a woman appeared in front of him he groan raising his head up to look at her. She had an extremely long, sweeping red hair that touched the ground. With two horn like protrusions which stuck out from her head Her eyebrows were cut very short — a symbol of nobility, and she wore a dark shade of lipstick on her lips and a dark shade of nail polish on her long fingernails. She wore the transitional black high-collared kimono, which was adorned with red intricate lines and tomoe running down the center and edges of the gown.
"W-W-Who the hell is you?" He said weakly at the woman who just stares at him with wonder. The unknown woman raised her hand at the man who look confused at the red hair `actions.
"Do you want revenge for what he did to you?" The red hair woman said in an emotionless tone. Ishiyo eyebrows with up before thinking it over he push his way to his feet breathing hard he grab the woman hand. Soon their hands start to glow with making Ishiyo freak-out a little but stop after feeling himself get heal. On his forehead he gain two dots that was two inches away from each other.
Four days has passed since that big fight and now our hero of the book was heading home thinking about this week break.
"Ok we got nothing done this week." Naruto said with tears going down his eyes.
"No shit we got into a fight then you went off and played around the whole time." Beerus said with a sweat drop as he took a bite of pudding. Naruto sigh knowing it was right and the only thing he got done was getting his Ki control down. As the god of destruction in training reach the gates he had his ninja ID check by the guards and went on his way to the Uchiha mansion.
"Don't you have to report to the Hokage?"
"Nope don't worry about it I will just say I forgot." As he kept walking toward his location he was going. He soon reach the front gate and just jump over it hearing fighting from inside. The Ki user landed on a fence and saw Shisui teaching Midori a new technique.
Midori with through her hand signs and creates a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying at the dummy's burning them. Naruto clapped gaining their attentions with a smile forming on his mouth. "Someone has been training hard in this week." Naruto jump off the fence walking toward them. Midori and Shisui look at each other before the new head of the Uchiha clan nod his head walking toward him.
"Hello Naruto where have you been this week, I have been looking all over for you." Shisui said with a small smile on his face. Naruto stare at Shisui for second before he too start to smile. "I left the village for a week, had to take care of someone business."
"Had she made up her mind yet? Our young Genin asks looking at Shisui for an answer. Shisui nod at Naruto and started to lead him over to her. They stare at each other not knowing what to say. Soon Midori broke the silence and bow her head at Naruto. When I ran away from you after you told me you love me I don't know what to say… but now I do." Midori said with a soft smile the Genin kiss Naruto on the lips. Shocking Toukai, Shisui stood back with a pervert smirk on his face. "Well somebody is bold?" laughing at his own joke.
Before the two can continue on three ANBU members appeared around the two. Toukai-sama, The Hokage wishes for you to come meet him in his office right now. If you do resisted we do have permission to drag you in." The ANBU with the dog mask said with the other reaching for their tantō or katana. Naruto let go of Midori and watch forward toward them with an angry look.
"Ok here I come but I just want to tell you all something." The ANBU perk up waiting for Naruto to finish, but was met with getting blew back by Naruto pushing out a small amount of Ki. "I won't be so nice with that threat of yours." After that the angry clan leader left the area going to the Hokage mansion. Leaving Shisui and Midori there were watching the whole thing staring in shock.
"Shisui-sensei what's happening to Naruto-kun?" Said the confused female Genin. Shisui just look forward with a frown on his face. "I don't know Midori but I feel something big is going to happen again.
"And I hope we are ready for it."
As Naruto enters the mansion he said Mebuki at the desk checking papers for a man who making jokes before going to sit down. Naruto walk forward and they both look at each other and smile. Naruto look down and noticed the ring she had on." I see you're getting marry." He said teasing her.
She blush lightly holding her hand up and show him. "Well news been going around about you and the Uchiha girl." Naruto laugh rubbing the back of his head with her statement.
"Well then I guess you're right but remember he will never be as great as me." Walking away from the desk happy about getting the last word he heading upstairs to Minato office he know two times before going in.
"You call for me Hokage-sama." Naruto said sitting down in the chair getting comfortable in it. Minato just put up a book next to him and flips through it and gave it to Naruto. He grabs the book from Minato and started to read it out long.
Name: Naruto Toukai
Current Rank: Genin
Threat Level: A-Rank, Engage with Caution
Naruto skipped the part featuring his physical details and focused on his description.
Description: Naruto Toukai his unknown bloodline that never been seen before. His skill in Taijutsu and his prodigious usage of his bloodline allowed him to survive an encounter with Greed a rank jonin from Iwa and destroy a half of a town in a battle with him. Engage this shinobi with caution.
Alias: Destruction Prince
Naruto heard Beerus in his mind laughing "BINGO! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
"Now Naruto WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!" Minato yelled with Killer instinct flowing off him with anger. "You leave the village for ONE fucking week and almost destroy a whole town!"
The Destruction Prince sat there unfazed by Minato anger and just sigh to himself. Thinking of what he can say to Minato but a great idea came to mind.
"Don't say it that's the dumbest thing I ever will see or hear."
"TOO LATE!"
"Hokage-sama it was iwa fault they attack me first because they said I look like you and they don't want to risked another "Yellow Flash" to appeared." Naruto said with a grin on his face knowing that this going to work whole Beerus was just floating around his mind dazing off to sleep.
The fourth Hokage calm down after hearing that and with back into his sit nodding his head at that." I understand a little but please next time try not to destroy a town just to beat one person." Naruto just sweat drop at that and look at Minato with a blank face.
"Ok got you boss, can I go now?"
"One more thing you got four months until the Chunin exams."
"Where is it?"
"The village hidden in the clouds."
0O0 OMG they are going to the cloud for the chunin exams you may have thought I was sending them to suna or Iwa huh?
Ok here is the lineup for the next four chapters
in the cloud
test a race though back
stage Uchiha true skill
month training before finals