Carrie walks into the small house, as the camera shows the inside, it's full of figures, paintings, and other things about Jesus.
"Holy shit!" Chris yelled, was this what her house was like?
"Hey, where's your TV?" Emma, a freshman, asked. Carrie blushed from the attention, still not used to having so many people talking and caring about her.
"We don't have a TV, mama says it's from the devil." she answered, the reaction was immediate.
"WHAT!?"
"How do you survive!?"
"Is that why you're always in the library?
"No duh Stacy!"
"Shut up, Claire!"
"Everyone calm down and watch the movie!"
A thumping sound is heard from upstairs and Carrie follows it, and walks into a room, in the room we see Margaret hitting her head against the wall.
Margaret: Oh God, help my child, she is lost.
"She is lost!?" Many women screamed, the others having to cover their ears from the noise.
"What do you mean 'she is lost'!"
" .Hell!"
"Fuck man, what's wrong with you?"
Carrie: Mama, stop it.
She didn't want to upset her, she wanted her to be happy, she didn't want her to hurt herself. But she didn't stop.
Carrie: Mama!
Margaret finally stops hitting her head against the wall, and looks at Carrie.
Carrie: I don't want to upset you.
"You don't need to apologize." Rosie said, smiling at the younger Carrie.
Margaret: So, you're a woman now. And God made Eve from the rib of Adam.-And what Carrie? Say it.
'What is wrong with her?' was everybody's main thought, Carrie needed someone, and her own mother wouldn't even hold her.
Carrie looked nervous, she didn't know what her mama was gonna do, but she had a pretty good idea.
Carrie: No mama.
Margaret: Say it.
Carrie: Talk to me. Please just talk to me.
Margaret didn't say anything, but continued to look at Carrie, who finally gave in.
Carrie: And Eve was weak. I just want to talk to you.
Margaret just continued to talk about the bible.
Margaret: And the first sin was the sin of intercourse.
Carrie nodded and did what she said, thinking it might get her to talk to her.
Carrie: And the first sin was the sin of intercourse. Why didn't you tell me, mama?
Margaret: and God visited Eve with a curse, and the curse, was the curse of blood.
Carrie shook her head, she would say many things for her mother, but not this.
Carrie: I'm not going to say that. That's not even in the Bible.
"YEAH!"
"Go Carrie! Go Carrie!"
"You got this!"
Carrie: It doesn't say that anywhere.
The older female looked up, and held her hands, as if praying.
Margaret: Oh Lord. Help this little girl see the sin of her days and ways. Show her that if she had remained innocent, the curse of blood would not have come upon her as it did on Eve.
Carrie: I'm not Eve, mama. I didn't sin.
Margaret: You showered with those other girls, you had lust-filled thoughts.
People started to mutter about what Margaret was saying and doing, what was wrong with her? Carrie didn't even shower with them!
Carrie: Everyone has to shower mama, everyone. That's just the rules.
Margaret: You must be different, because he can see you.
Carrie: I don't want to be different mama, I want to be like them.
Everyone knew that they had judged her, they shouldn't have. Just because her mother was that way, didn't mean she was the same, they knew that now. They promised themselves that, after this was over, they would get to know Carrie, the real Carrie. Not the one they pretended was with them.
Margaret: He can smell the sin on you. And he will punish you.
Margaret then grabs her Bible, and hits carrie in the face with it, hard.
Silence followed the scene, Margaret grabbed Carrie and slapped her arms, the girl shut her eyes tight and stiffened up. Everybody got out of their shock and were to stop the crazy women, but C did it quicker.
C stood up and took Carrie out of Margarets hold. She held the girl tight, Carrie burying her face in her future selves neck. C glared at Margaret with such intensity and hatred, she could rival Chris.
"Don't fucking touch her!I had to put up with your shit for years until you died! Don't dare hurt her anymore than you've already done!" C sneered at her, then sat down, holding Carrie close, as the Margaret glared at her, and they focused her attention on the movie.
Margaret: I will not let that come down upon you. I will not. Lord have mercy.
Carrie: No, the lord is good. His unfailing love endures forever, and his faithfulness continues through all generations. Psalms 100, verse 5.
Margaret: I'm going to keep you away from that school.
"she can't do that." Rita said.
Carrie: You can't do that.
Carrie panics, and walks down the stairs to get away from her mother, but she followed her down the stairs.
Margaret: We'll pray. We'll pray together. To save our women weak, wicked, sinning souls.
Carrie: You didn't tell me and they laughed. I didn't sin, you sinned.
Margaret gets a stoic look on her face while looking at Carrie, who gulps and looks at her mother in fear.
Margaret: I did not. I did not sin. Go to your closet.
People look confused at her words, but C stiffened and held Carrie closer as she shivered.
Carrie: No mama.
Margaret opens the closet door next to her.
Margaret: Go to your closet, and pray.
Margaret drags a struggling Carrie to the closet, the girl screaming and crying all the way, trying to get away from her so called 'mother'.
Many people cried and tried not to cry out, her mother was forcing her into a closet, like some wild animal.
Carrie: No, no! Get off me! Mama! Stop it!
Many people started to cry, and others glared at Margaret, they wanted to attack her, but then they would be just as bad as her.
Margaret: Go to your closet, and pray for forgiveness.
Carrie: No!
Margaret: You pray.
Carrie: Mama! Help! No, mommy!
It was clear that Carrie was not going to win this fight, so all they could do was watch in shock, horror, and disgust as Margaret tried to put her OWN DAUGHTER in a closet.
Margaret: Come on.
"Great motivation-but she's not an animal!" Tommy said, glaring at the crazy lady, while holding Sue close to him.
Carrie: Please! Help!
Margaret finally gets to the closet and closes it, locking it as well.
Margaret: You pray, little girl. Pray for forgiveness.
Carrie bangs on the door, wanting to get out. Margaret hurts herself while trying to keep the door closed, her sleeve goes down a bit, showing scars on her wrists.
Many people(A/N: Wow I say that a lot!) realized, that Margaret had done that more than a few times.
Carrie: God, you suck!
A thin crack appears on the door. Screen change, you see Margaret looking above her, as she starts to pray. The screen shows Carrie who is in the closet, she looks around her as her eyes land on the Jesus figure.
She starts to pray, but the figure starts to bleed. Carrie tries to pray again, but stops and begins to cry.
Carrie: Help me, help me.
The screen turned black and many turned to see Carrie being held by C, but, she too had tears in her eyes. Sue was being held by Tommy, Rosie being held by S, and Margaret praying to the lord for her daughters forgiveness.
"HOW DARE YOU! YOU BITCH!" Rita screamed, Carrie was always like the daughter she never had, she treasured her life a diamond, how could her own mother treat her this way!
Rita slapped Margaret straight across the face, hard. Everybody cheered for her, and many others stood up to join her, until a certain principle stopped her.
"We can't do this." He explained, "We need to wait, if not, we'll never win over Carrie in the courts eyes." The others reluctantly sat back down, Rita moved and sat on the floor cross legged in front of C and Carrie, giving them both a reassuring smile.
HELLO!
Hope you liked it! I love cake, but I like this story more, maybe….
BUT! I want to tell you guys that are reading my other story, I'm sorry, writers block is a bitch! I don't own Carrie, not the movie, not the book, not even a single freakin' poster! Nothing. Nada. Zip. You get it.
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