A reviewer, SPaladin, gave me advice for all of my poems after I asked him to do so when I saw his review on one of them. This is the product of some inspiration that his advice gave me.
Mother
A beast that calls for blood
Mother
Says my existence is proved by death
Mother
Whom I both serve and fight with every breath
Me
A boy who is both a cage and the caged
Me
A boy who's mother prevents his sleep
Me
A boy with nobody to hear him cry
Family
A word used to describe those you love
Family
A word I use to describe only myself
Family
A word that has no use to me
Me
A boy broken by his mother
Me
A boy who does not know the word on his forehead
Me
A broken boy who needs someone to fix him
Naruto
A boy like me
Naruto
A boy somehow happy
Naruto
The boy who will fix me
Me
A boy who learned to be happy
Me
A boy who learned to be family
Me
A boy who learned to be himself
Please review with advice and comments. Have a nice day.