Chapter 04: Memory Lane
Octavius managed to wrap a tentacle around Spider-Man's throat while two more kept his hands seperated. "Now I have you." He said ready to rip his head off.
"Put him down!" Octavius turned to see the Powerpuff Girls glaring at him but they didn't try anything due to how Spider-Man was caught.
"I don't think so-." Ock began to say before Spider-Man shot a strand of webbing attaching it to his pants and pulled to show his underwear. "Gah!"
"Tightie Whities?" Spider-Man mocked as Octavius let him go in a panic to pull them up. "That explains everything, Doc."
Ock snarled before he saw Bubbles and Buttercup flying at him so he lashed out with his metallic tentacles and slammed them right through the wall. "Ow that hurt." Bubbles complained.
"Wait, that hurt?" Buttercup looked to see a small scratch on her arm.
"Interesting." Octavius smirked. "So Adamantium can scratch you children."
Blossom focused on what she was feeling earlier as heat beams shot from her eyes surprising Spider-Man and Octavius as he blocked them with his tentacles, but a small amount shot past and hit his eyes.
"Gah!" Octavius covered his eyes in pain.
"I-I didn't mean to hurt him like that." Blossom looked sick as blood dripped from his eyes before he looked at her with his face decaying.
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"AAAAAAHHHHHH!" Momoko screamed as she woke up covered in sweat as she looked around before seeing that she was in her room.
Taking a few deep breaths as she listened to the silence of her home, realizing that no one woke up to her screaming, Momoko broke down crying as she thought about what she did and what she is actually capable off and it scared her.
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"Alright, we need to do something." Peter muttered when he saw Momoko still being quiet three days after the incident with Ock.
"But we tried everything." Karou said with her arms crossed. "Hell, she was happy after school on that day."
"Maybe we can have a night out with her?" Miyako suggested with a smile. "No being superheroes, just us being normal?"
Peter blinked before nodding. "Yeah, that could work, just a break from being a superhero for her."
"Alright, Karou and I will get her tonight and you meet us at the Townsville Mall Peter!" Miyako said as she grabbed Karou and took off.
"Hey, wait!" Karou shouted as she was dragged off.
Peter chuckled before he went to walk back to the lab, only to feel his Spider-Sense go off and he spun around to see a well-built African American with no hair, wearing a black trench coat and an eye-patch.
"Hello Mr. Parker." The man greeted walking up to him.
"Fury." Peter glared at the man, wondering what the hell he was even doing in Japan. "Last time I saw you was when Electro was being locked up, how is he anyways?"
"We're still working to find a cure." Fury reassured him before coming to a complete stop. "But that's not what I'm here for."
"Then what-?" Peter stopped talking as he realized why he would be here. "You want information on the Powerpuff Girls."
Fury nodded.
"Forget it." Peter told him. "You're not getting anything from me... And I thought that SHIELD was an American Government."
"That's the public story." Fury told him gruffly. "The truth is that SHIELD has ties all around the world."
"Well, that's convienient." Peter sarcastically said because one of the things he was looking forward to in Japan was to not deal with SHIELD.
"Parker, these girls have powers that can put the Hulk to shame, so it's natural that we keep an eye on them." Fury told him as he and Peter began to walk through the city, to keep people from eavesdropping. "Do you think anyone could stop them if they go rogue?"
"They won't." Peter told them.
"You don't know that-."
"But I know them." Peter glared at Fury. "They maybe childish, but they are good people with good hearts!"
"So was Electro before he got his powers." Fury said causing Peter to clench his fist.
"That was a low blow, Fury." Peter told him, remembering the Max Dillon he knew.
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A ten year old Peter stopped walking home from school, when he saw a seven year old kid with blonde hair shivering as he sat in an alley. "Hey are you alright?" Peter asked in concern at seeing the kid by himself.
"Y-Yeah." The kid answered before sneezing.
"Where are your parents?"
"I don't have any." The kid said looking down.
Peter wasn't too sure what to do before he held out his hand. "I'm Peter Parker."
The kid looked at him before smiling timidly. "M-Max Dillon."
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"Listen I know Max was your friend." Fury said in a calmer voice. "But the fact remains that he became twisted with his powers and if he escapes he will come after both Spider-Man and Peter Parker since he knows you're identity."
"Great, nice way to remind me that it's my fault." Peter muttered.
"It's not." Fury said looking at him. "But I thought that would've been a point to make that shows no matter how well you know somebody, they can change."
"I'm still not telling you anything." Peter said as walked ahead.
"Then I guess I'll have to do this the old fashioned way." Fury muttered as he left.
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Momoko was sitting in her chair with a tray of Octopus Dogs, trying to forget what happened so she wouldn't have another nightmare, but images of what could've happened kept popping in her head. "Ah, I can't take this." She said wanting to go back to the way she was before the accident.
Looking at the time, Momoko saw that it was Ten 'O' Clock so she turned to go to bed, only to stop when she saw Miyako and Karou outside her window.
"What are you two doing here?" Momoko asked in confusion after she opened the window.
"Kidnapping you for a night out." Miyako said with a laugh at Momoko's befuddled face.
"I don't feel like-." Momoko tried to say, but Karou interrupted her.
"Well, you're still going too." Karou said with a smirk. "Now get some shoes on before we really do kidnap you and we'll head to the mall."
"Come on Momoko, you need this." Miyako said and after a few seconds, Momoko gave a small smile.
"Well, I suppose I could go."
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Peter stared all around at the giant mall that couls easily put the Midtown one to shame as there were a bunch of stores and it was only thanks to the glasses that Prof. Utonium gave him that he was able to read the signs, something he needs to put in his Spider-Man mask.
"Man, now this is cool." Peter muttered as he pulled out his wallet to show American money making his head hang in disappointment. "I've been here for nearly two weeks and I haven't even traded my money for Yen yet."
"There you are!" Turning, Peter gave a small smile when he saw the girls. "Took awhile to find you." Miyako said with a grin.
"Hey girls, so I take it you either kidnapped Momoko or she agreed."
"Well the original plan was to kidnap her." Karou gave a shrug. "But she did agree after we bothered her enough."
"Guys, you don't have to do this." Momoko tried to say, but Miyako interrupted her with an one armed hug.
"Of course we do." Miyako said with a wink. "It's what friends are for."
On seeing that, Peter felt a little off.
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"You don't have to do this." Max muttered as Peter brought him some food and clothes that he figured Max would like.
"It's what friends are for, Max." Peter said with a smile. "I could do more if you let me introduce you to my Aunt May and Uncle Ben."
"N-No." Max shook his head. "I don't want to burden anyone."
"You're not a burden." Peter told him before smiling. "But I suppose you can meet them when you're ready to be helped more."
After a second, Max smiled. "Thanks Peter, it's nice to have a friend."
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A hand waved in front of Peter's face. "You alright?" Karou asked with a raised eyebrow.
Peter laughed and put a hand behind his head. "Sorry for drifting off like that, it's just you guys reminded me of a few people back home just now."
"We did?" Momoko asked in surprise. "Who?"
"Just some old friends." Peter said before smiling. "Now what do you girls have planned?"
A few minutes later, Peter found himself as the pack mule while Momoko and Miyako went clothes shopping and dragged Karou who didn't like that with them, but she didn't say anything because Momoko was acting like her old self.
"I guess I'm doing this because I have no money." Peter muttered without feeling any strain from the many items he was already carrying. 'Thank God I have enhanced strength.'
"So what do you think?" Peter turned to see the girls exiting the Fitting Room dressed up.
Momoko was wearing a black sleeveless dress with four rose designs on it and it cut off at her knees, Miyako was wearing blue dress and tan dress shoes along with some sort of purple stuffed octopus that wore a black hat hanging off her arm and Karou green sleeveless shirt, white pants and a white fedora.
Peter blinked as he saw this. "Nice." He complimented. "I would give two thumbs up, but my hands are kind of tied at the moment."
"Hey Peter, are you going to buy anything?" Momoko asked as they bought the dresses but they were still dressed in them.
"Nah, I'm saving my money for when I need it." Peter lied, not wanting to let them know that he didn't have any money that would be valid here.
"There must be something." Miyako said to him.
"Hmmm... Nope." Peter pretended to think about it. "Now what else?"
"How about the Townsville Mall Cafe?" Momoko suggested feeling her old habit of eating sweets come up.
"Sure thing." Karou told her.
'They really are becoming great friends.' Peter thought with a small smile. 'With how they act, people would mistake them for siblings.'
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"So these officials were arguing over who to arrest me and I needed a way to escape, so I pointed to the left and randomly asked. 'Hey isn't that Charlton Heston?'" Peter told him one of his funniest moments as Spider-Man since they asked about it. "And they all stopped what they were doing and looked leaving me to get away."
"I can't believe they fell for that." Karou laughed at the image that he painted.
"Who said that all officials were smart?" Peter asked with a shrug.
"So any other funny stories?" Miyako asked as Peter thought about it.
"Well there was the time I said said fat jokes against the Kingpin of Crime before finding out that 98% of that 500 lbs was pure muscle." Peter cringed at that memory. "Yeah, maybe something else... Oh right Flint Marko and Alexander O'Hirn, two repeat convicts that always tried to make off with money, but I caught them at least four times before the fifth time happened four days ago. They moved to Japan to get away from me apparently."
"Wow, that's some bad luck." Momoko chuckled as she ate some ice cream.
"Yeah-." Peter stopped talking when he saw Flint and O'Hirn walking through a crowd. "And if I'm right it'll be six times in a few seconds."
"Wait, what?" Karou turned to see the two men walk into a store before there were screams.
"Come on-." Momoko went to stand up, but Peter held up a hand.
"Leave this one to me." Peter had a grin. "These guys are lightweights."
With that he took off and pulled his mask out of his pocket.
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"Is he sure he can handle this?" Miyako asked in concern.
"He said he caught these guys five times already by himself." Karou shrugged and grinned. "But we can watch."
Momoko nodded. "And if he does need help we can change and get there."
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"Come on." Flint said as they finished putting the cash in the bag. "We have it all?"
"We do." Alex confirmed and they went to run only to hear a familiar sound.
Thwip.
A net of webbing blocked their exit.
"Shame on you boys." Spider-Man mocked hanging upside down from a web line. "Trying to rob a sports store? Have you no respect?"
"Ah geez, not the bug again." Flint muttered as he backed up. "I thought you were still resting after that televised fight against that freak of a doctor."
"Bug?" Spider-Man rolled his eyes. "Geez if you want to insult me at least get it right, I'm an Arachnid, now say it with me, Ar-rack-nid. If you do a good job, I promise to let you go."
Alex grabbed a nearby baseball ball and threw it as Spider-Man jumped out of the way.
"Strike One skipper." Spider-Man said as he ducked an attempt at a hit from a baseball bat courtesy of Flint. "Strike two, are you even trying?"
Alex grabbed a Hockey Stick and ran at him, but Spider-Man shot webbing at the ground where he stepped in it and fell flat on his face.
"I think you got something on your shoe, pal." Spider-Man mocked as he did a backflip and landed on Flint's back. "YEEHAW COWBOY, WE HAVE OURSELVES A RODEO!"
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The girls were laughing at the display that Spider-Man was doing as he did more jokes than usual. "Oh man this is great." Karou wiped a tear from her eye.
"Yeah I think his idea is good." Miyako said with a smile.
"Idea?" Momoko stopped laughing and looked at her.
"He's obviously trying to make us laugh right now." Miyako pointed out because this was his attempt at getting Momoko to forget about what happened with Octavius.
After a few seconds, Momoko smiled. "Well it's working."
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"You know, ususally I would already tie you guys up at least two minutes ago." Spider-Man said as he kicked Flint down to where O'Hirn was. "But come on this makes meeting number six guys, reform already, so we can avoid this path in the future and you guys will have a better life."
"Wait until I get my hands on you-." Alex started to say, before Spider-Man covered his mouth with webbing, leaving enough room for him to breathe through his nose.
"If I had a yen for everytime I heard that I would be pretty rich right now." Spider-Man said before chuckling. "And I've only been at this for three months, that shows how many times people say that to me."
Considering that they were stopped, Spider-Man left to change back to his civilian identity.
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"So what did you girls think of the show?" Peter asked hoping that the humor helped a bit.
"Don't you think that was a little harsh?" Momoko asked with a smirk.
"Hey I caught these guys so many times that I feel like a street washer." Peter defended himself. "Plus I'd like to think I used a lot of good jokes tonight."
"I think we should go though." Miyako said sounding a little sad. "After that they should be closing the mall down."
"Sweet." Karou smiled widely. "I have the perfect place to go to!"
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Peter smiled as Karou was showing them a place in the park that showed a good view of the sky as he sat in a tree while they sat on the ground, talking before he was lost in memories again.
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"Did you really have to do that?" A twelve year old Peter asked dryly as he and Max were hiding from Flash Thompson.
"I don't like people like him." Max answered plainly before smiling. "Plus it was just a joy buzzer."
"That you rewired to work like a Taser." Peter deadpanned as Max laughed.
"Alright you two, it's safe to come out again." A female voice called out and both Peter and Max poked their heads out of their hiding spot to see a twelve year old blonde girl wearing an orange hoodie and glasses.
"Thank's Gwen." Peter said with a smile. "Where's Harry?"
"Not far behind." Gwen Stacy remarked as a panting twelve year old ran up to them with light auburn hair, wearing a green shirt and blue jeans.
"Are you sure you're not on the track team?" Harry asked Gwen as he had his hands on his knees in exhaustion.
"I jog with my Dad every morning." Gwen answered with a smile. "Something you three should do."
"Yeah, I would but I work a lot at home." Peter lied.
"I have studying to do." Harry said quickly.
"I exercise enough." Max answered.
"You three are lazy." Gwen deadpanned causing them to laugh and after a few seconds she joined in.
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'These three remind me of Max, Harry and Gwen very easily.' Peter thought to himself as he came out of his memories just in time to hear a question.
"Hey Peter, why do you joke around in a fight anyways?" Momoko asked curiously.
"Yeah, I want to know that as well." Miyako turned to him.
Karou chuckled. "I think that would be interesting to hear."
"Well, it's a good coping mechanism." Peter said with a shrug. "When I first started out, I was so scared that I started to make jokes to calm myself. It's weird but it works and annoys the bad guys enough to where they're sloppy and less likely to hit me."
"Huh." Karou said not having expected that before Miyako looked at the time.
"It's three in the morning."
"It is?" Momoko asked in shock before yawning.
"Yeah, we should head home." Peter said with a small yawn of his own. "Thank God there's no school tomorrow."
"Alright, see you!" Karou took off running, to get home before her brothers looked in on her.
"Bye!" Miyako waved.
Peter was about to walk off when he noticed Momoko not moving and he sighed. "You're still thinking about it aren't you?"
Momoko jumped because she thought Peter left already. "Um... Yes." She admitted with a sigh. "I know I shouldn't focus on it but I can't help it."
After a seconds, Peter came to a decision. "When I first started I treated it like a game to and just like you I had a wake up call."
Raising an eyebrow in confusion, Momoko looked at him.
"I had a friend named Max Dillon and while I was out web swinging in New York he got caught up in some bad stuff and in my few moments of arrogance I thought I could handle it without any problems."
"What happened?" Momoko asked.
"... Max died." Peter said causing Momoko's eyes to widen in shock. 'Or at least the Max I knew.' "That was my wake-up call to treat this seriously and while I wish you you or the others didn't have a wake-up call like what happened with Ock, I think you three needed it to avoid something like that happening again."
"Sorry." Momoko apologized to him.
"For what?" Peter chuckled. "You didn't do anything."
"No, for acting like how I did."
"So you're going to be back to Hyper Blossom?"
Momoko gave him a weird look. "... Hyper Blossom?" She asked in confusion.
"Well yeah, because you're so damned hyper." Peter remarked dryly. "But you wouldn't be you if you weren't."
"... Thanks." Momoko said as Peter chuckled.
"Yeah, well see you tomorrrow."
As Peter left, Momoko looked up at the sky feeling better.
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Flint Marko was in a seperate cell than his partner O'Hirn this time before he saw someone outside of it. "Go away." He muttered wanting the night to be over.
"You got caught by the bug again." The figure stated causing Flint to glare.
"What's it to you?" Flint asked in anger. "That bug is always messing with my big score!"
"Because he has powers while you don't." The figure said as he placed a hand on the bars before ripping them off, surprising Flint. "What about if you did as well?"
Flint gave him a cautious look. "What's the catch?" He asked thinking about it. "I can already tell you wouldn't be offering this out of the goodness of your heart."
The man chuckled. "The catch is simple, destroy Spider-Man once you get your powers."
Flint was about to say that he was just interested in his big score and he's not a killer before he thought about all the times Spider-Man got in his way and how he humiliated Flint earlier that night.
Coming to a decision, Flint looked the man in the eyes. "I'm in."
The man smiled. "Then follow me."
"What about O'Hirn?" Flint asked about his friend and partner.
"Oh he'll be fine."
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Peter snuck back into the lab as he thought about what he just told Momoko about Max dying and he sighed because it was true.
Max Dillon died and Electro was born.
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~A Month 1/2 ago~
"Evening Chaps." Spider-Man greeted with a bad impersanation of a British Official as he webbed some thugs to the ground. "How's it going tonight? Anyone watch the football game on the telly?"
"Get him!"
"Get him? Wooboy you should me a script writer." Spider-Man mocked jumping over them. "That was the most original line I've heard!"
While mocking them, Spider-Man saw Max walking by the alley out of the corner of his eyes and his eyes widened when he saw Max carrying a gun.
'What the-?' He was cut off by his Spider-Sense blaring and was hit upside the head.
"Got him!"
"No you don't." Spider-Man shot a strand of webbing at a trash can before pulling it and the trash can slammed into the last few thugs before he webbed them to the ground. "Now that this is over, tally-ho!"
But now he was hoping to find Max again because the thought of him with a gun scared Spider-Man.
Finding him easily, Spider-Man was surprised to see him pointing a gun at an elderly man in a white suit with silver hair, in a power plant so he reacted by knocking the gun out of his hand with a strand of webbing.
"You know normally I would pounce on people for doing stuff like this, but I don't really know what's going on here, you mind telling me?" Spider-Man asked careful to try and keep his identity a secret.
"Stay out of this!" Max shouted as he glared at the elderly man. "I'm after him!"
"Why?" Spider-Man asked in confusion as he looked at the man. "He's just an old man, not really much to be angry about right?"
"Not much?" Max was in a fit of rage. "This is Silvermane Manfredi the one responsible for my parent's deaths!"
Now Spider-Man understood what was happening. "Kid, trust me nothing good can come out of what you were about to do-."
"Like you would know." Max glared at Spider-Man before he saw Silvermane smirking. "What are you smiling at you old fossil?!"
"Just the fact that I like to finish the job." Silvermane pushed a button and hearing a beeping noise behind them, Spider-Man and Max turned to see a bomb on a generator.
"Crap!" Spider-Man grabbed Max and began to swing away but Max kicked at him.
"Not until he's dead-." Max cried out but by kicking Spider-Man he caused the web head to lose his hold.
"MAX!" Spider-Man shouted as Max fell and he recognized the frantic voice.
"P-Peter?" Max asked before the generator blew up and he was engulfed in a mixture of flames and electricity.
Looking at the mess in sheer horror, Spider-Man saw Silvermane leaving. "Oh no you don't." Spider-Man snarled as he went after him, intent on putting him in jail forever.
If he stayed he would've noticed a hand shoot out of the flames, blue electricity sparking around it as a now bald Max Dillon showed a scarred face screaming in agony.
On making it out of the flames, Max saw his reflection and he gritted his teeth wanting something to blame before his eyes widened.
'Peter. He was a vigilante, he could've stopped Silvermane... He could've saved me.' Max thought in anger as more electricity sparked off of him in response to his anger. 'I'LL KILL HIM!'
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Spider-Man landed on the limo that Silvermane was using in Times Square and he glared through the windshield. "You're not getting away old man."
"Shoot him you idiots!" Silvermane shouted as a bunch of thugs pulled out semi-automatic machine guns.
"Yeah, you may have been a great crime lord in the 40's but this is a new time." Spider-Man stated knocking the thugs back without trying. "And you're just a joke now."
"Look, I'll pay you whatever you want." Silvermane tried to say but Spider-Man shot a glob of webbing at him.
"No you won't." Spider-Man said before his spider-sense went off very loudly and he jumped as a blue beam hit the car, causing it to explode and Silvermane died inside of it.
"What the?" Spider-Man turned only to step back in surprise when he saw a bald Max with ragged clothing that barely covered him and electricity sparking off of him. "Max?"
"Die, Peter Parker!" Max screamed as electricity shot at him and Spider-Man zipped up to a building.
"Whoa! Max, we're friends remember?" Spider-Man asked sounding relieved and worried.
He was relieved that Max was alive but he was worried that these new powers changed Max's outlook.
"Friends?" Max shot more electricity at Spider-Man as he jumped into the air and used his webs to stay airborne. "Friends don't keep secrets like this from each other Pete! Friends don't let friends get hurt like you just did!"
"But Max-."
"MAX DILLON IS DEAD!" Max shouted as electricity shot from the various objects around him before his whole body started to glow blue. "CALL ME ELECTRO!"
Feeling his Spider-Sense going haywire, Spider-Man moved as the newly dubbed Electro snapped his fingers and various objects exploded and he was trying to stay one step ahead of each explosion before one caught him and he was knocked into a building as Electro flew in, sparks travelling through the floor, walls and ceiling.
"Max this isn't you-."
"I told you, that there is no Max." Electro said as Spider-Man was trying to figure out a way to get through to him before he saw sprinklers on the roof.
"Then I'm sorry for this." Spider-Man moved as Electro shot a blast at him and he did a flip before twisting his body into the air at an impossible angle to dodge another blast.
Seeing Spider-Man reach the fire alarm, Electro took notice of the sprinklers and he thought about the possibility that could happen. "NO-!"
He was too late as Spider-Man pulled it and the water shot out electrocuting him as he screamed in agony before falling down, his ragged clothing gone, so Spider-Man made a coat of webbing to cover him up.
'I'm sorry Max.' Spider-Man thought before he heard sirens and he took off before anyone saw him.
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Peter sighed as he sat on his bed. 'It's almost been two months since that happened.' He thought as he looked at his hands. 'One of my best friends became a super-villain because of my screw up.'
Shaking his head, Peter laid down and closed his eyes, determined not to think about it for now.
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Meanwhile in a prison located somewhere in New York, Max woke up groggily. "W-Where am I?" He muttered before memories rushed through him. "Peter... I'LL KILL THAT DAMNED TRAITOR!" He roared before water gushed into his prison short-circuiting him, as he fell into the depths of unconsciousness again.
To Be Continued...
Alright, I'm going to focus on my other stories before typing the next chapter to this but I hope you liked the twist I made with Electro. Along with Sandman coming in soon.
If I'm being honest, I didn't expect this story to go well but I'm happy it did and I guess I can be proud to do the first PPGZ and Spider-Man x-over!
Alright, that's enough out of me, review time!
Coldblue: I think it should be awhile for the Iron Spider, maybe after a cameo of Iron Man he gets to work on it. I'm glad the Web Grenades are good, I'll admit I got the inspiration of the Bang Baby Capsule that Gear made in Static Shock, only they shoot webs out, instead of metal tentacles. I plan to have him improve his web shooters to where he adds the Taser web and some stingers that he could shoot to inject Anasteshia into his enemies. The Spider Tracers will most likely be next on his list though. 1) Of course Blackcat will appear in Spider-Man and I think it would be funny for the Girl's reactions in this due to her kissing him. 2) I planned to have Daredevil in Japan sometime and I was going to use the Hand excuse for him to know Japanese... Then again Canon Daredevil knows Japanese pretty well. 3) And I want to make the power-up slow and believable so I don't make an overpowered Spider-Man out of nowhere. 4) They will get bad press soon, just let me think of a believable way for it to happen.
NightMaster000: Thanks, the way I see it it's believable for Mojo to act like this in the beginning because the Black Z-Ray just turned him into what he is now, but overtime it does more, making him smarter and more deadly, that's the way I see it working. And I will keep the humor in it because it was pretty fun to type that. I'm hoping that I do HIM pretty well considering he is and will always be the greatest threat that the PPG face and maybe I can bring in Dr. Strange during the HIM cameo considering HIM is a demon and Dr. Strange fights them... Or Ghost Rider could work... Maybe HIM makes a deal with Blackheart and that could bring Ghost Rider in... Too many ideas. And I gave them a small weakness to Adamantium to where it could scratch them, so that way they can get hurt and I did it so they wouldn't be overpowered because otherwise there's no challenge to them. I think that creatures powered by Black Z-Rays are a part of their weakness as well considering how they could get hurt by these villains. It wouldn't be Spider-Man without him having to deal with Jameson's propaganda am I right? And I needed to make a realistic approach and I figured that Blossom almost blinding Octavius would be perfect. As for the harem idea... I'll put it up to a vote.
Kirbymaniac2: Like I just told NightMaster000, I'll put it up to a vote.
Alright now here's two questions.
1) Should I have the Z-Ray effect Spider-Man turning him into the Man-Spider at one point and the girls have to fight him after they realize what happened?
2) Now as for the new poll I just put up, should I pair Spider-Man with only one of the girls if I do so at all or do a harem with all three? Some people are asking about that so I'm putting the poll on my profile for a vote!