Hey Everyone, Fallen here. I wanted to give a update to everyone. After reading the latest reviews for "Wings of Freedom" I've come to realize that there are things I could change/explain. But first, I wanted to explain the original reason why I wrote the story. It was for my friend to read and enjoy. The input I got for the characters and how they should act were from them because that's what they wanted to see. I'm aware Levi is a bit OC and Kerai isn't fully explained yet. The key word there is 'yet', I've been working on a chapter that explains her background and current choices. Also about how they fell in love, I know that's not how it works in real life but this story if purely fiction. If I was making this a real life kind of thing, I would have expanded them getting to know one another. But also, they didn't fall in love within a week. They became friends in a week-ish, they didn't start dating or liking each other that way for a few months. I get that I can do better, and I'm trying. I love the feedback I get from you guys but if all you can say is negative I'd rather not hear( see) it. I want you guys to continue to give me feedback so that I can improve the story but if it's nothing but hate and criticism then I won't have it.