Hey guys I don't know if you read the reviews but there is a reader who goes by Novrier who for some reason been leaving these paragraphs of everything wrong with my story that does not follow the show or manga he has done this twice now so I want to say it I'm not following cannon I'm having fun and while somethings stay the same not everything will if you do not like my story you can leave i won't stop you but to everyone who DO like it enjoy the newest chapter of the demons son
"what" talking
'who' thinking
"were" justu/ demon form
I do not own Naruto it be a far better story if i did
Naruto groaned as he slowly opened his eyes instead of seeing the white ceilings of the hospital he was staring at cave ceiling with a groan he got up wondering were he was, just then did he remember what happened he looked down surprising there wasn't even a mark like it never happened he even wondered if it was just a dream till he remembered the pain making his tails' hair stand on end wait... TAILS?!
"What the hell?!" Naruto turned his head around and saw three fox tails swishing around, Naruto was panicking his mind running a mile a minute his thoughts were soon broken as he heard someone coming.
"Well look who is awake did you sleep well Naruto?" Naruto looked who was talking to him he saw not one but three people two female and one male.
"who are you and how do you know my name?" Naruto said cautiously he took a look at them the male who was taller then him he had spiky brown hair blood red eyes, wearing a black sleeveless shirt with red straps across it making a X, green camo pants, and black boots, he then looked at the females he looked at the first one who was just as tall as the boy she had long black hair that came down to the middle of her back with purple eyes, she wore a purple kimono with a red ribbon that her katana was attached to the sheath and handle were black, he then he looked at the last woman she was taller then the other two she had long orange hair that reached to her butt she had yellow eyes and wore a red kimono with a red ribbon.
"please sit down Naruto i can explain everything we are not here to hurt you." the orange haired woman said even though Naruto didn't believe her he didn't have a choice so he sighed and sat down, the other three sat down as well.
"Before we start what can you remember?" the orange haired woman asked.
"I remember a mob following me and they set me on fire." Naruto said with a shiver from the memory the orange haired woman nodded.
"Well Naruto before i explain what happened we must start at the beginning." She explained to Naruto what really happened to the kyuubi and who his parents were (i was lazy sue me) it was a lot for Naruto to take in
"W-wait you mean that my father was Minato the 4th hokage?" Naruto asked getting a nod.
"Yes and when he sealed the kyuubi inside you he also put some of his chakra into the seal to protect you in case i was to escape but when you were attacked he had lost all faith in the village asking me to save you." This had shocked Naruto the lady in front of him was the kyuubi but how?
"Wait if your kyuubi how are you out of me i thought you said it killed my mother when you left her."
"while it is true a human would die but you are not human anymore."
"what do you mean?!" This was really starting to get to him what does she mean is he really a monster like they said before he could voice what he was thinking the dark haired girl decided to speak.
"Naruto please calm down you are not a monster like those idiot villages" her voice came out so softly and soothing, he took a breath letting the kyuubi explain.
"You see Naruto for me to escape I had to change a part of your dna to turn you into a half demon so your body could survive" that's when the boy spoke.
"basically if they did a blood test on you now it will show the kyuubi is your mother." Naruto nodded knowing at least the reason for his new form.
"ok I can understand this now but what are we going to do now?" Naruto asked curiously.
"I am going to train you in your new form along with these two" she pointed to the boy
"My names James I'm a demon hound we are trained to control elemental chakra since you are now the kyuubi's son you now hold every element." James snapped his fingers and made a small flame appear, she then pointed to the girl.
"My name is Kira i'm a shadow demon we are to use swords and can manipulate our shadows." She finished by showing Naruto her blade.
"Wait so you can use shadows like Shikamaru?" Naruto asked making kari laugh
"The Nara's know a butchered version we can do so much more." She said as she made her hand sink into the shadow on the floor and grab Naruto's leg making him freak a little bit.
"Naruto I know this is a lot to understand but I wish to train you so you can be stronger so no longer can those villager harm you but to do that we need to travel so no one can see us and try to kill you thinking I'm controlling you." said the Kyuubi, Naruto's mind was in over drive trying to figure out what to do should he stay with the villagers even though they would probably stop him from getting stronger why would they but these three in front of him wanted to help he knew they weren't lieing to him so he finally decided.
"Alright I will go with you but what about jiji he will no dout be looking for me?" Naruto questioned.
"Do not worry I will handle it now we will be heading out to start your train so be ready" the kyuubi said as they all stood up an d the kyuubi vanished in a circle of flames.
Well guys i hope you like how this is going also i want to make this kinda a story with the fans making it so heres what i want to ask
Who should naruto be with? (if you want a male changed fem could you add a female name for them)
Should naruto be against the village or fight for it?
Please i would love your answer in this