So I'm back because I have more free time. One comment caught me off guard. It said that if I include rapes into a hurt , HURT genre fan fiction story then I shouldn't write at all. WTF? A sad story must have sad moments that's why it's sad. And Naruto's growth was stunted yeah. But remember , he's a prodigy just as Minato. He's his son so he knows much of the stuff:politics , sex , math's you name it etc… But I'm getting of topic. This flame will be sent to the Deepest pits of hell and purified there. Then it will be sent to heat Naruto's apparently dead body to heat it up. And finally the pure flame which was heating a dead man's body will be sent to flame trashcan. Be grateful little flame. You are the first flame in this trashcan! May you enjoy your doomed eternity with other flames which will be in this trashcan. Hopefully , soon enough. Oh well , onto the story. And to gloat: I'm writing with no plot just writing on the fly. Again I'm sorry for my bad English. Of fu**! Again getting off the topic! On to the story:
"Simple human talking or jutsus"
'Simple human thinking"
"Demon thinking"
"Demon talking or jutsus"
Chapter 3: Second Chances
Hokage arrived at the scene with tearful eyes. He ran to the boy and took him into his arms. He tried listening to his heartbeat: he heard none. He tried feeling his pulse: he felt none. He put his head near his mouth and tried to hear his breathing: he heard none. A shocked look appeared on old hokage's face. He… reall…. Really… was….d.d..dd….DEAD! Naruto really was dead! He couldn't believe that Naruto had died. He lifted the dead boy and with small steps Hiruzen took off to the village.
****In pure world(afterlife)****
Naruto opened his eyes and he saw white. He blinked and then he registered where he was. He was in heaven. There were some ancient buildings calm aura , birds chirping , beautiful sakura trees and runes floating. Suddenly he felt a presence right behind him. He turned around and saw a most beautiful woman in his entire life. She had golden hair which was tied in a bun. Her eyes were shining silver. She had full cherry red lips , And her curves… next was her bust. It was friggin F! She had a round shaped butt and long slender legs. It's like she was a goddess! Little did Naruto knew it WAS a goddess. He tried to speak but couldn't because of pressure radiating off her. It's like he was paralyzed. Her presence radiated such power that his knees bended and he fell on his knees and hands. He started dripping sweat and tried to take a breath but couldn't. The pressure then got stronger and he couldn't hold on. He fell on his front and tried to move , only a little. But the pressure got stronger and stronger. It's like whole Konoha fell on top on him. He tried to take some air into his system but it was for naught: he couldn't even move his mouth. It was like he was full-body paralyzed. Then suddenly , the pressure stopped. He started taking huge gulps of air and started to cough. He then rose up and asked"who are you lady?" The woman just looked at him emotionlessly and didn't say a word. She just raised her hand and a mirror materialized from thin air. He went closer to the mirror and started looking what the mirror showed. It showed his worst mistake ever. It was showing him , fucking Kyuubi as she cried hysterically for him to stop. Then the mirror shattered and it's parts just turned to dust which faded away. He heard that woman walking towards him and turned himself so it would be face to face. He couldn't react when she slapped him with such force , it put Tsunade's power in shame. He crashed into a building then into another then another then he hit a big wall. But it also almost shattered. He was disorientated from the slap and the impacts with pure granite walls. He tried to sit up but then , a mysterious woman appeared from nothing and put a foot on his chest preventing him from getting up. "You lowly insect. You are completely insane. You are ignorant , stupid and hateful little boy. And to think that Hagoromo said that YOU will be a child of prophecy. You are nothing more than little runt who doesn't know how world goes. Tell me , WHY I shouldn't just send you to hell?" she asked. Naruto almost pissed his pants when he heard the woman talk. It was angelic yet with unearthly authority and unimaginable amount of power. "I don't know lady. I deserve to be sent to the darkest pits of hell. For what I've done to Kyuubi-chan." He said looking straight to the gods eyes. She tried looking for any signs of lying in his eyes but she found none. "No. You were given a second chance to settle things. If you didn't force yourself to Akami-chan and didn't die , the world would be free. Look what mistake you made when you died. She again created a mirror. It showed….His homeland. It was in ruins , war shouts were everywhere. Blood and bodies were everywhere. Every city , every house was in ruins. It was a total disorder. And the main antagonist was a man with red samurai armor , and red eyes. He stood on a massive ten tailed monster and laughed insanely as the monster crushed everyone in it's way. The remaining shinobi tried to use every jutsu they had. But it was for naught. The monster didn't even flinch as the fireballs , stone walls and wind blades were connected with it's body. It just shrugged all attacks off like it was nothing. It was a total horror. He took his eyes away from the mirror and asked" did this happen because I died?" "The woman just nodded" Yes , you ar-no , you were child of prophecy who was supposed to stop that madman and that beast. But you died and nothing can be changed. You caused this world to be in a grasp of a maniac , now , all world suffers because of you mistake." Naruto looked shocked , and he hung his head in shame. Tears welled up from his eyes and few moments it started to drip on the floor. He cried silently: for his world , for his friends , for his closest people , for his mistake. He was surprised when the woman lifted his head by his chin and she said" There's still hope. You are forgiven for your sins because you have a pure heart. What you did , was because of the pain you felt from villagers. Now tell me: do you want to go back and save the earth?" "Naruto froze"Is..iiss… is that possible?" He looked shocked: an unknown and powerful woman was offering him a second chance" Then I want back. I want to save the world. I want to protect my precious people. I want to make up for Kyuubi-chan." "Then you may go back" And with that she grabbed his head softly and kissed him on the forehead. White aura surrounded him and he started to close his eyes when he heard: " she is in her secret hideout in the centre of training ground 44. By the way , I am Kami and we will see each other soon. "At these words , Naruto's eyes widened and he wanted to say:WHAT? But he was gone from the heavens as the energy teleported him home.
AAAAAAAnd cut! Phew…. It was tiresome for me to write. Remember that I'm still not good at writing so I am posting chapter by chapter. And regrettably , slowly. Oh well , everyone learns and so do I. Well good luck everyone.
