Wow I just started and I have five favorites, so I am gonna try my best to write a better story.
NOVRIER:- Thanks I will try to improve on my storyline though it won't end up as other naruto meets madara fan fictions and his rinnegan will be slightly twitched. Though it will have the deva and the rest paths abilities, it won't have the power over life and death like the normal rinnegan. Thanks.
This is chapter 3
Training
I have been waiting for you the old man said with a smile.
Are you madara jiji ? naruto asked.
Yes I am my grandson, madara answered with a smile.
Naruto then asked with a frown, then why weren't you there for me when I was little, when I needed a family the most?.
Madara then frowned and replied I never knew you were alive. My wife, your grandmother and father's mother left me when your father was three, so I never knew how he looked like as he grew.
Naruto looked up at him and asked why did baa- chan leave you?
Madara then sighed and replied she never agreed with the way I looked at life at life. She always said that peace can be achieved through love and no matter what that pain will always exist no matter what I do to stop it-
But wasn't she right , I mean can't peace be achieved through love though pain will always exist?
No , peace can never be achieved through love and I am not talking about peace between villages, I'm also talking about peace within us humans and with my plans no one will ever experience pain again, I will create a world where everyone's dream will come true. The shinobi nations will be united under one flag and with my moon eye plans it will be possible.
He was interrupted again by a naruto who looked excited, oh.. oh.. can I be the one to draw our flag symbol? can it be a bowl of steaming ramen with the sharingan tomoes on it or two bowls of ramen with our names on it or-
For goodness sake naruto stop interrupting me and no you are not designing our symbol or putting ramen on it, you can't even draw the hidden villages symbols, naruto you got an F. Naruto pouted and folded his hands.
Naruto then got serious and asked if I am an uchiha, then why do I have blonde hair because if I can remember atmthe academy we were taught all uchiha had raven hair. Madara smiled and said well it's a trait from your baa-chan.
Well could you tell tell me about my parents. Madara chuckled and said I don't really know much about your mother and father. Though I'll tell you your father was a hated man around the elemental nations especially in iwa and kumo because of he single handedly killed most of their ninjas durning the third shinobi war. You know him as the yondaime hokage, namikaze minato or I'll just say uchiha minato the man who sealed the kyubbi in you.
Naruto was torn within him. He was happy that he was the son of a powerful man and from a clan and angry that it was his own father that sealed the kyubbi in him. What about my mother?
Your mother was not from konoha. She was from uzushio though it was destroyed in the second shinobi war by a combination attack on it both by iwa and kumo. She was the only survivor due to the fact that she was in konoha at that time. She and your father were in the academy together though they became friends when he saved her from being kidnapped by a kumo nin. I think that the basic information I know. The sandaime hokage should have told you.
Well he said he didn't know them, but why would he lie to me. That I do not know. Well get ready for bed because your training starts tomorrow and I promise you I won't go easy on you, madara said with an evil smile that promised pain, lots of it, but naruto was oblivious to it as he started shouting and jumping on the balls of his feet oh boy! Oh boy!.
Zetsu will show you to your room madara said as a white zetsu came out of the ground and stood behind him. Naruto wanted to ask him how he did it but kept that for later due to him being tired from the day's activities.
He yawned and said goodnight jiji waving at madara while following white zetsu.
You are not gonna tell him, black zetsu said . I thought you wanted to make him have your revenge on konoha and what better way than telling him.
Madara turned to face him and said not now zetsu, I want him to first concentrate on his training, then at the end of the first year of his training I will tell him about konoha and their despicable ways which will make him hate them more. He may not show it but I know he hates konoha, I can see it in his eyes.
TIME SKIP 3DAYS LATER
KONOHA COUNCIL HALL
Tsunade had a lot of tick marks on her face which showed she was really angry. The civilian council had called for a meeting yet for the past thirty minutes they have been doing nothing but arguing .
All right that enough she shouted as she banged her hands on her table while producing killer intent that though not much was enough to make the civilians whimper and the shinobi council flinch. The hidden anbu to were getting uncomfortable as it felt like their breaths were being drawn from them, but exhaled a sigh of relief when she stopped.
Now can someone tell me why I was summoned here, she said with anger in her voice.
Not wanting to make tsunade angry due to stories of how legendary her strength and temper was, a woman that had pink hair stood up and said tsunade sama, we are here to decide about the rank of the demon in the bingo book and the civilian council have decided on s rank. Tsunade then released another wave of killer intent though that one lasted for only a second. Haruno-san how dare you decide on a matter that demands a general meeting with the civilians. Try that again and I will put you and your co civilians in jail. Now it will be a council meeting, we'll start with the elders, then the shinobi council.
Danzo- s rank
Homura- a rank
Koharu- s rank
Hiashi- s rank he had always disliked naruto
Inochi- a rank had no reason to hate him
Chouza- a rank
Shikaku- troublesome a rank
Shibi- a rank
Tsume- a rank
Civilian council(6)- s rank
That leaves it at 8 s rank and six a rank that puts naruto as s rank in the bingo book, danzo said. Tsunade's eyes became moist though no one could see it, naruto please forgive me, she thought. As she stood up and walked away.
OTO(UNKNOWN LOCATION)
Orochimaru was overseeing sasuke's training as he watched try to improve on the number of times he could use the chidori. He could now use it five times before chakra exhaustion.
Orochimaru- sama naruto kun left the leaf three days ago and now he is missing though konoha thinks akatsuki got him.
Orochimaru swore and said to kabuto, keep your eye on the lookout for the brat. If akatsuki got him it means that all my plans are ruined. I hope time runs faster so as sasuke kun's body will be ready so as that soon as he kill itachi and gets the mangekou sharingan I will take over his body and achieve my dream of immortality.
Yes orochimaru sama.
MADARA'S HIDEOUT
696, 697, 698, 699, Pants 700. Naruto collapsed on the floor twitching. Madara who was sitting on him meditating opened an eye why did you stop you were supposed to do 1000 pushups. Damn naruto swore this was supposed to be training not torture, for an old gramps you sure are heavy naruto told him.
Madara stood up and said for such childish exercise and you complain what will you do when the real deal starts.
Naruto cried anime tears childish exercises. He woke me up at 3 in the morning, what kind of human wakes up at 3. Had me do 100 laps around the hideout which is about 30,000 meters according to zetsu, 1000 situps and 2500 squats and now I have to complete this 1000 pushups and still have 2000 pull ups to do and as now forbidden me from eating ramen now forcing me to eat vegetables, seriously in my own opinion any food that is green is unhealthy and sick. Is he training me for some kind of muscle weight competition or what.
If you finish this exercise I'll buy you as many ramen as you want. Madara told him.
Naruto eyes lit up as madara said the magic words. All right jiji lets do this naruto shouted with renewed fire, 701, 702, 703, 704, 705….
Zetsu came up behind madara and whispered, you are not getting him the ramen are you?
No I hate ramen madara whispered back.
So what do you guys think. It's a 1,564 word chapter. Madara is pretty evil right and what secret does madara want to tell naruto.
read and review and please no flaming, ice ranger out.