This is chapter 4 and I've got lot of crazy ideas for this story that I can't wait to show you guys.
"Ramen" human speaking
KATON:GOKAKYUU NO JUTSU – jutsus
"Puny humans" – demon speaking
Ramen/ramen- human/demon thought
Chapter 4
Training 2 and meeting the kyuubi
6 months later
Alright naruto lets try this again.
Hai, naruto replied, "KATON:GOKAKYUU NO JUTSU. He shouted then puffed out a giant fireball the size of a small house. "so how did I do sensei?" naruto asked madara who looked pleased.
"Very good naruto, I'm impressed", he replied. So far naruto had learnt two fire jutsus so far which were katon:gokakyuu no jutsu(fire style:Great fireball jutsu) and katon: hosenka no jutsu( fire style: mythical fire phoenix technique), one wind jutsu which was futon: daitoppa(wind style: great breakthrough) and one earth jutsu:- doton: doryuudan(earth style: earth dragon projectile). Naruto had started learning elemental ninjutsu five months ago after madara decided to check his elemental affinity. It was a shocker to madara when he saw that naruto had three natures; fire, wind and earth and they were all primary. He then deduced that fire was from the kyuubi, wind from his father and earth from his mother. Since then he had started training him in his elements though they were offensive.
S o jiji are you going to teach me another awesome jutsu? Naruto asked.
No for now we will focus on your taijutsu training. Madara replied.
"Taijutsu training… aw men but you hit hard. Like really really hard sensei, naruto said remembering their first training session
FLASHBACK
"Alright naruto, give me your best shot. Madara said to naruto who was standing in front of him in a blue training gi.
"HAI MADARA SENSEI HERE I COME… naruto shouted as he ran towards madara and pulled back his right fist to punch him. As he got to madara, madara too pulled back a fist and punchd him in the head. naruto jumped back and shouted
"DAMN YOU HIT HARD FOR AN OLD MAN". 'Damn though it's not has strong as tsunade baa-chan's punch, if not for my high endurance I would have been knocked out'. he thought as he looked as madara again.
Alright here I come again. KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!(SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!) as ten copies of naruto appeared and they all ran towards madara. "Alright boys you know what to do". One naruto said to the others as they all attacked together. U-ZU-MA-KI, the narutos said as they delivered their clone combo, NARUTO RENDAN another naruto jumped up and gave madara a kick to the chest sending him down towards the awaiting ground.
The smoke from the fall cleared to show a naruto clone that poofed away after it looked like it went through a grinder. WHAT! Naruto shouted after he saw madara was still standing in the same spot. How did you do that?
Madara said nothing as he moved to attack. He delivered a hook punch to naruto fac sending him to the wall, didn't give naruto the chance to recover and punched him in the stomach tice and jumped back to observe naruto's reaction.
OWWW…. Naruto groaned as he came out of the debris and held his head. you hit too hard sensei, but I'm just said started. That night naruto went to bed in pain and three cracked ribs, though he was okay in the morning and the good side was that he unlocked his sharingan.
FLASHBACK END
I almost died naruto thought while crying anime tears. Madara sweat dropped and decided to make it interesting for naruto. "Ok let's make it an all out spar. Ninjutsu can be used".
"Yes". Naruto shouted as he pumped his hand in the air, "let's do this" naruto said with a grin as he got into a stance. Madara was the one who created it though he didn't name it. Naruto had begged madara to let him be the one who named it and was still looking for a good name for it.
As the wind blew past which signified for them to start naruto ran towards madara at mid jounin speed and started with a kick. Madara and naruto were exchanging fists until naruto saw it was getting nowhere and jumped back to get some space. He looked at madara with his sharingan activated as he flashed through some handseals, KATON: HOSENKA NO JUTSU shouted as he puffed out small fire balls towards madara. Madara too flashed through some handseals SUITON: MIZURAPPA He shouted as he shot a sream of water towards the fireballs.
The fire balls and water met halfway and hit each other creating a small mist that covered both madara and naruto. Naruto tried to use his advanced hearing to try and hears madara's footsteps. But he heard nothing he then felt pain in his back as he flew out of the mist and crashed into a wall.
damn his fast and this mist isn't doing me any good, naruto thought as he flashed through some hand seals FUUTON: DAITOPPA He shouted as he blew out a big gust of wind that took away the mist which revealed nothing. Madara wasn't there.
"You are too slow", a voice said behind him. Naruto turned around to punch punch him but hit nothing but air.
"As I said you are too slow" madara said as he was standing a few feet from him with his hands folded.
I'll show you whose slow you old geezer, naruto shouted as he whipped out a kunai. Being called slow was one thing, but been called slow by an old man like madara who was about more than hundred years was another thing that gave naruto's pride a huge hit. He flashed through some hand seals and shouted KATON: GOKAKYUU NO JUTSU As a flazing giant fireball ran towards madara. Madara flashed through his own seals at moderate speed and shouted SUITON: MIZUDEPPOU NO JUTSU( WATER STYLE: WATER STYLE: WATER PISTOL JUTSU) As he shot out balls of water at the fireball which created another small mist. Out of the mist a kunai came out with visible chakra coated on it. Madara caught it by it's handle and looked at it.
"Nice, channeling wind chakra into your kunai to make it sharper" . Impressive but not enough. Madara said as he threw the kunai back at naruto and flash through three hand seals, KAGE KUNAI BUNSHIN NO JUTSU, As the kunai multiplied into fifty.
Naruto was already prepared and ran through some seals FUUTON DAITOPPA , As a gush of wind blew the kunai back at madara. He dodged everything while staying on the same spot. Naruto rushed back at madara and engaged him in taijutsu. He delivered a leg sweep and while madara jumped over it, he tried to hit him with an uppercut while he was in the air, but missed. Madara taking advantage immediately hit naruto in the chest with a direct punch. Naruto quickly whipped out a kunai and threw it at madara. Madara caught it and said to him "that was too predictable".
"that was what I was hoping for" naruto said to him.
Madara looked at the kunai and saw that it had a paper bomb on its that was about to go off.
Naruto watched as he saw the bomb exploded and was waiting for its results meanwhile forming stratigies in his head as he knew that wouldn't take madara down. The smoke cleared to show madara wasn't there but a few feet away from the explosion site.
That's enough, madara said to naruto.
Why couldn't handle my awesomeness?
No I've just did that spar to grade your skills if it was a real battle though I am old and lost some of my strength, you would have been begging for your life.
Hn, as if, naruto replied.
Anyway in ninjutsu I will say you are low jonin, taijutsu: high chunin, speed: low jonin, reflex: I'll say mid jonin, analytical sense: mid jonin. I'll have to start you on genjutsu and kenjutsu training and maybe on fuinjutsu, but in all I'll say you are mid jounin and should be able to match a normal jounin in a one on one battle.
Awesome!, was all naruto was able to say.
5 months later
Naruto was meditating in his room. Madar had said he had come far and should be able to take on three anbu squads and jounins on his own. Madara had also wanted him to meet the kyuubi. Suddenly naruto found himself in a sewer.
Sewer naruto thought. What am I doing in a sewer?. How did madara jiji throw me into a sewer without me knowing? I swear when I get back I will prank him him with that pipe he normally smokes. But I better find my way out naruto said as he followed a red light that was emitting from the depth of the sewer. Naruto followed it until he led him to a big cage that was as big as the hokage monument and its gates were being held by a single paper.
Wow..! giant metal gates held by a piece of paper glued to it. Must be a very strong glue, I wonder what type, naruto thought.
"So my jailer comes to visit me" a loud voice said from with the cage.
I want to continue but school would soon start, but I'll try to be updating every Sunday when I get the chance. I felt I should get naruto to meet the kyuubi early because it's also going to be part of naruto abilities.
I'm thinking , should I of which summon I should give naruto. He doesn't have the toad's anymore. I'll explain in chapter five. So I'm thinking demon fox, eagle, tigers or am open for suggestions. Thanks.
