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"Well, let's walk and talk." Freddy said as a door opened up behind him, which he raised his hand to.
Foxy disdainfully got up from his position and stretched, Freddy began to walk through the door, followed by Spring, Chica, and Bonnie, then Jacks and Foxy Through the door, there was a wide, giant facility, with a cat walk, which they trekked on. Spring looked back at Jacks with a thoughtful expression, something that doesn't happen very often. He backed up to Jacks, and gave him a nudge on the shoulder.
"Hey buddy, how you doin'" Spring said, trying to ease Jacks' mind.
"How did you get here?" Jacks said, ignoring Spring's question.
"Jacks, I….." He was cut off by Freddy raising his arms to the wide facility.
"This, my friend, is Fazbear H.Q., here we is where you will be traini…" He was now cut off by Spring.
"Freddy, cool it a bit." Spring said lowly.
"Ah yes, I forgot that you still want to know why you're here, come come!" He motioned toward a stairwell, they all walked down, tromping every step.
The place was concrete, completely drab, dull, and dark.
(Not much different from home…) Jacks thought to himself.
They walked more through stone hallways and metal doorways, it was like Jacks could feel the depression in the room, until they came across a door different from every other. It opened when Freddy walk toward it.
Inside the room, there were three people. One wearing a shining, silver armor, one with a jagged cape, and one with bulky, black, rustic looking armor. They were all bending over a table.
"Knight, Rook, Bishop, there is a disturbance in area seven, probably just Sin, go take care of it." Freddy said, taking on a more serious persona.
They all were wearing some kind of helmet, so Jack's couldn't make out their faces when they turned around. They all nodded to Freddy and in the blink of an eye they all ran to the left hallway.
(This is some comic book shit.) Jacks thought to himself.
He couldn't help but feel some sort of excitement over all of the confusion.
(This has to be a lucid dream, no way all this confusing shit would be happening.) Jacks continued his thoughts.
Freddy grabbed something from the table before throwing it above everyone else's head, over to Jacks, who caught it.
It was his dagger.
Jacks stared at the sheathed blade for a few seconds before putting it in his belt loop.
"Now that you're settled in." Freddy said happily.
"I'm not." Jacks retorted.
"And all of your questions answered." Freddy continued.
"They are not." Jacks once again spoke.
"Why don't I tell you why you are here?" Freddy finished.
"Please do." Foxy spoke up, still crossing his arms.
"I'll tell them." Spring spoke.
"We are, not a very big group, to say the least. The only reason for that being, there aren't many people who can fit the job description."
Foxy and Jacks stood there in silence, their emotions a mixture of anger, excitement, and awe.
"That beast you saw, that was what we call a Sin." Spring continued, placing his hand over the table, causing a photo of a Sin to appear.
"Sin are the main thing we fight against, we have been fighting them for a very, very long time. Crossing generations even." Everyone leaned over at the photo.
"There has always been a team of friends to take on this scourge on the world, you have seen what they can do with your own eyes."
"There have been three powerful people, with powerful powers filled with power."
"This power they have, is called the OverLoad."
"What happened yesterday was, uh, call it a control experiment."
"I recorded info on every murder that had happened, and when it got to….." Spring paused a second.
"When it got to the latest victim, I knew it had to be Sin."
"I've known you both for a very long time, you two had the most compatibility from anything I'd ever seen."
"I knew, that you two had OverLoads, that you two, were going to be the next in line."
"So I forged a plan, to be sure. I told Foxy of the murders the night of the plans undergoing, I knew he would try to be a hero."
"We lured out the Sin with a helpless victim near your residence, it took some time, but it worked."
"That helpless victim, was our very own Bonnie."
"I informed Bonnie to sound as *frightened* as possible, to draw Foxy out."
"Once Foxy left, Freddy went and slammed the cellar door shut multiple times to wake you up."
"Then, it got a bit out of control when the Sin nearly killed Foxy, luckily you were there to stab the shit out of it."
"Then blah blah blah, Foxy knocked out blah blah." Spring joked.
"But then, when you picked up the dagger again, I could feel the energy pulse from my position on the rooftop!"
"Then I knew that my suspicions were confirmed, you are an OverLoad!"
"It wasn't as hard to unveil Foxy's, he obtained it the moment I told him of Maria, I could feel it."
Foxy clenched his fist.
"The cops you saw were Freddy and Chica, and the S.W.A.T., those three warriors you saw in disguise."
"They all showered the thing with bullets until it died, we just barely got away with passing it off as an alley shooting."
"And you know the rest, so, I know you still have even more questions, but I need to ask this now."
"Will you become the next Knight?"
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