Hey everyone!
Sorry for the late update, I have been so busy lately. Anyway I would like to thank everyone for their honest opinion. I think I have to do a chapter retraction of Chapter five. I have made so much errors. I guess I didn't edit as well as I am suppose to, sorry.
I should have left a note about Nessie being the only female half vampire. I know I broke away from Breaking Dawn but I just wanted her to be more unique than she already is. Anyway here is chapter six, enjoy!!!
Chapter Six
Hunting
Renessmee's Point of View…
"What's the matter Jake?" I asked as I approached Jacob who was still standing by the door way. I saw him closed his eyes and bit his lower lip. "Is everything alright?" I wrapped my arms around his waist. He then pulled me into one of his bear hugs.
"Billy is sick Nessie. I have to go and see him." Jacob said in a whisper.
"Sick from what?" I asked. His eyes flickered towards my father. I turned and saw my father nod his head. Jacob brushed my right cheek with his warm left hand.
"Rachel just called me and told me that Paul had taken our dad to the hospital last night because he had a heart attack." Jacob replied with a heavy sigh.
"I'm sorry to hear that Jake." I said in a whisper. I don't know what to say to him. I've never been in this situation before or ever will, except for grandpa Charlie.
"I have to go to La Push for a couple of days, for at least a week, I want to help Paul and Rachel out for a little while." he said kissing the top of my forehead. I saw him wrinkled his nose. Oh right, my father had just kissed the top of my head.
"I'll come with you." I quickly replied.
"Nessie, you need to go to school." he replied.
"I want to see Billy." I protested as I let go of his waist.
"Ness, you need to enjoy your first time around in high school. You can never take back your first real high school experience." he said holding both of my hands and kissed them.
"But… but I want to go with you." I said in a whisper.
"I'll be back sooner than you realize." he said pulling me back into a hug.
"So when are you leaving?" I asked meeting his torn eyes.
"Tonight," he whispered. My eyes began to water. Jacob and I have not yet been separated since I was born. I felt Jacob wiped the tears off my cheeks and kissed my lips. "the sooner I leave the sooner I can come back." he whispered with his lips still inches away from mine. I tightened our hug.
"I'll miss you," I said in a whisper.
"I'll miss you too," he replied and kissed my lips once again. "I love you."
"I love you too." I replied forgetting that my father was in the room with us.
Jacob had left for La Push lastnight. I have asked my father if I can take a day off from school. Of course, my father allowed me to take the day off. And of course, the rest of my family stayed home as well. I have spent the entire day listening to my father playing the piano. My mother spent the whole day cooking and cleaning the house. Uncle Jasper spent the day in the garage with Aunt Rosalie, assisting her on tuning his motorcycle. Aunt Rosalie also worked on my father's cars. Aunt Alice was in the other house, designing new outfits for everyone. Grandma Esme went to work, restoring an 1800's Victorian home in Denali while grandpa Carlisle went to work in the hospital.
"Hey Ness," says Uncle Emmett as he stood in the doorway of my room.
"Hey Uncle Em," I replied.
"Want to go hunting with me? Everyone else went yesterday and I don't want to go alone." he said with a goofy smile appearing across his face. Everyone went hunting after school yesterday while I went to my audition that ended up in disaster.
I let out a sigh and nod my head.
"Cool!" he exclaimed. "I'll meet you downstairs." he said and disappeared after closing the door behind him.
I placed my books away and walked inside my walk in closet and changed into a pair of brown shorts and a pink muscle shirt. I slipped on my brown tennis shoes and pulled my hair up in a messy ponytail and sped downstairs.
"Have fun hunting," my dad said still pressing the keys on his piano.
"We'll be back daddy," I said kissing his left cheek. I turned to my mom who appeared next o me. "Bye mom." I said kissing her cheek as well. I turned to Uncle Emmett who was waiting for me by the front door. We both hopped inside his monster truck and he drove to the woods twenty minutes away just in the borderline of Denali and Fairbanks.
"So what do you want to catch today?" Uncle Emmett enthusiastically asked as we ran near the peak of the mountain. "Mountain lion? Grizzly bear?"
"Mountain lion sounds appetizing." I replied showing him a smile.
"Your definitely Edward's daughter." he laughed. I saw him smiled when we heard a grizzly bear's roar. "Hmn… probably a mile away." he excitedly said as turned to me.
"Go… I'll manage." I said. He smiled and crouch down a sped away.
I closed my eyes and tried to focus on my first victim. I heard a family of elk a few feet away. Nah, I'm not in a mood for that. I took a deep breath and a mountain lion's scent caught my attention. I crouch down and sped a few feet away where a mountain lion was lying down on the grass enjoying the sun. I snuck up behind him and wrapped my arms around him pinning him down on the ground. The mountain lion struggled but I was stronger. He must be young because he's not that strong. I quickly took my teeth and sunk it in its neck.
Hmn… appetizing.
After draining the mountain lion's blood, I left its lifeless body on the ground. I then sat down on a boulder near by. I could hear grizzly bears fearing for their lives. I am guessing Uncle Emmett is having fun. I felt my cellphone vibrating inside my short's pocket. I looked at the call ID and it was Jacob, "Hey baby," I answered.
"Hey," Jacob replied in tired tone of a voice. "I made it."
"How's Billy?" I asked. There was a long pause. I could hear Paul's voice in the background asking Jacob what he wants to eat.
"Anything you can get, I'm not picky." I heard Jacob replied. "Billy is doing a little better. He's awake." I hope Billy will be alright and recover soon. "Oh Charlie said hi to everybody. He was leaving as I was entering the hospital."
"Please tell him hi and that I missed him." I missed grandpa Charlie. We had fun camping last summer in Denali with mom and dad. I missed fishing with him and Billy, when we used to live in Forks, in the boat that was once owned by Sue Clearwater's late husband, Harry. She gave the fishing boat to both Billy and Charlie. On the weekends Charlie would come and pick me up and take me fishing with him and Billy along with Jake.
"I will," Jake replied. "Listen Nessie, I have to go honey. Rachel is going home to get the kids from Seth. He's babysitting them."
"Oh, alright. I'll talk to you soon?" I chuckled.
Seth is a horrible baby sitter. He has an attention span of a two year old. He gets distracted easily. I remembered when Seth babysat both Clair and I. Clair was a toddler when Quail, one of Jacob's best friend, had imprinted on her. Talk about weird imprinting. Both of them imprinted on toddlers. Clair is now thirteen and Quail is keeping his eyes on her. He makes sure she's safe and happy every waking days. He has yet to tell her about the whole imprinting business.
Well, Jacob and Quail went to the garage to work on Quail's truck. Seth was inside house where he was watching both Clair and I. Clair and I was having a tea party, Clair was five and I was two but physically five years old as well. We had asked Seth to join our tea party and he agreed. Clair and I placed a crown of roses on top of his head and braided his long black silky hair. While we braided his hair, Seth decided to turn the TV on and a football game was on. I didn't remember the rest but all I remembered was, When Quail and Jacob had finished working on the truck, they found Seth watching the game and both Clair and I gone.
Jacob told me that when Quail found out that both Clair and I disappeared he was frantic. He knows I would be okay but Clair was human and defenseless. They have searched the entire house and we were no where to be found, until Quail found the backdoor of his home open. There Jacob tracked my scent and found Clair and I on the beach picking out colorful rocks.
"I'll call you soon, I love you." he said in a whisper.
"I love you too," I replied and heard a click on the other line. I sighed and placed my cellphone back inside my short's pocket. Just a few more days until Jake comes back home. I heard a load growl behind me. I turned around and there, standing directly in front of me, is a humongous mountain lion. Judging from its size, its a female, with claws aiming for me. I then heard a wolf's howl. I saw a humongous black wolf launching towards the mountain lion. I watched the two of them wrestled on the ground. I saw the wolf took a mouthful of the mountain lion's neck instantly killing it. I took a step back afraid of the humongous wolf.
It's not just an ordinary wolf, it's a werewolf.
A werewolf matching Jacob's size. The werewolf turned towards me with its chocolate brown eyes curiously examining me. I took a deep breath trying to calm myself not showing any fear. The werewolf took a couple of steps closer to me. There, his scent was too overpowering. The nonexistent venoms inside my mouth uncontrollably began to boil. "Peyton?" I asked in a whisper. The wolf blinked and took a couple of steps closer to me. "Is that you?" I asked taking a couple of steps closer to him, trying to fight the thirst but something was drawing me towards him.
"Nessie, run!" I heard Uncle Emmett yelled appearing behind the werewolf. The werewolf met Uncle Emmett's eyes and ran away.
"Uncle Emmett, stop!" I yelled. Uncle Emmett appeared beside me grabbing my hand. I watched the wolf disappeared from the forest.
Can it be? Could that have been Peyton? Smells like him too.
"Lets go!" Uncle Emmett said slinging me on his back and ran back to the truck. He then held the passenger's door open and I jumped inside. He quickly appeared on the driver's side. "Are you alright Nessie?" he asked.
I nod my head.
"Why didn't you run away from that massive wolf!" he snapped as he turns the ignition of the truck on. "You know better than to stand there and have the wolf launch at you!"
"He wasn't going to attack me, he actually saved me from a huge mountain lion." I quickly replied.
"He?" Uncle Emmett asked with his right eyebrow raised.
"Yes, it's a he." I replied putting my seatbelt on. I have been so used into safety because of grandpa Charlie. Growing up, he would always remind me to put my seatbelt on. Uncle Emmett on the other hand doesn't abide to any safety rules.
"Your trying to say is that… that was a werewolf?" he asked as he began to drive away after he heard the click of my seatbelt.
"Yes," I replied in a whisper. I know that scent from anywhere. It IS Peyton! But did Uncle Emmett and I just exposed our family to him? Did I just made a big mistake by recognizing him? "Uncle Em?" I asked.
"Yeah Ness?" he asked as he continued to drive.
"Your going to tell daddy about what just happened aren't you?" I heard him let out a heavy sigh.
"Yeah, you know your dad would rip me into pieces if I don't tell him about it." he chuckled. "Plus I can never keep my thoughts to myself whenever he's around."
"Yeah," I sighed. If Peyton was a werewolf, what does this mean? Is he protecting something from my family and I just like with the Quileute back in Forks? If werewolves were vampire's main nemesis why didn't he try to attack me?
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