Guess Who's Back?! Back Again?! Cookie's Back! Tell a friend!
Sorry bout the name change. I just like this one better.
Wow, I'm only on chapter 3? Oh well...
Um, well in kinda sad I've only gotten a few reviews. I really wanna make this chapter long then leave a huge cliff-hanger at the end, and, I'm sorry, but I probably will. I don't know any other way to write. And I haven't written in forever because I'm in a theatre group and have to rehears all the time. I have 4 truckloads of homework. I am just really stressed out all the time. But
I'm sorry, I'll try to write more often.
Oh, and I got some questions in some of my few reviews.
Well let's see. Alice doesn't have a new power; she has just developed her power so that she can transmit her visions from the future (or in this case, the past) onto the TV screen so everyone can see them.
I also had thought of a sequence where Bella and Max actually met, but it wasn't very good and it eased the shock of Max suddenly being there, but if you all want to read it I'll squeeze it into this chapter.
If there is any more confusion please post your questions in your review. Thanks for reading!
(Disclaimer: I don't own them, blah, blah, blah.)
You May Forget me
Chapter 3: Do something for me
"OH, Alice," Bella beamed. "Show them how Max and I met."
(AN: I know it's not the best input, but seriously…)
On Screen
Bella was walking through the woods to her meadow.
It was October 31; Halloween. Bella had always imagined spending Halloween with Edward. Maybe they'd all go trick-or-treating, or maybe they'd watch all the kids dressed up as vampires. She didn't know, and now she never would.
When she reached her meadow she was surprised to see a blond girl standing there. The girl turned. Bella noticed the girl was fiercely pretty, but also unkempt. She looked like she hadn't bathed in days. She had all types of bruises and cuts. She looked at Bella as thought she'd just been caught killing someone. She didn't really get a chance to see more of the girl because she turned to run away.
As soon as Bella had seen the girl she had been wishing she would leave so she could wallow in her despair alone. So she surprised herself by yelling "Hey, wait!" She was also surprised that the girl stopped. She turned to look at Bella again. She noticed she looked… well, broken. She had tear streaks down her face. She was thin as though she hadn't eaten in awhile. She was in large baggy clothes as if she didn't care what she looked like, and only wanted to be comfortable.
The girl could see, very clearly, that Bella was hurt, and had been for a while. The girl sighed, and sat down in the grass. Bella watched in awe as the girl reached in to her bag and pulled out a napkin. It had two homemade cookies in it. The girl took a bite out of one and held out the other to Bella.
"Wanna talk about it?" She said.
Bella stared at her, and then burst into tears.
(A/N: Okay, I know that wasn't that good, but It's all I could think Of. And I know Max is extremely O.O.F, but that's the best I could do.
Off Screen
"And then you just poured it all out to her?" Emmet asked. "Didn't you think about exposing us?"
"I felt I could trust her." Bella replied. "Like she'd understand, and keep our secret."
She was going to say something else when Renesmee asked "What happened to Max since the last time you saw her?" looking at her mother then at Alice. "Um, well let's see." Alice closed her eyes and the TV lit up again.
On Screen
Max sauntered in the house the government provided from them.
After her speech, pollution in American, and all over the world, decreased. To thank the flock, the government gave them just about everything they wanted. They got all sorts of new customized clothes, a house of their own where they all had their own rooms and a car large enough to carry all of them Dr. Martinez, Ella, and Jeb.
Nudge appeared at the indoor-balcony of their large house. "MAX IS BACK!" Nudge announced. She ran to her, hugging her tightly. "I told them you would be home soon, but they didn't listen." Nudge's power had developed so that she was now able to see visions. "Max is here?" Gazzy rushed in asking, skidding to a stop. "Max is here," Iggy said, crashing in behind him, causing them both to fall. Iggy was up first, ran to Max, hugging her practically knocking her over. Gazzy pulled him away and hugged her also. Angel appeared at the stairs. "Hey, Max, um, to celebrate your return, you should go out to the back yard." (A/N: I haven't really taken to thought how old they are now so, here are the ages. Angel: 8, Gazzy: 10, Nudge: 14, Iggy, Fang, Max: 16)
"The backyard?" Max dropped her bags. Iggy and Gazzy quickly grabbed them and ran upstairs. "I really just wanna go to bed."
"Oh, no no no," Nudge protested. "You should go outside and get some fresh air."
"I've had fresh air all day-"
"Yea," Iggy said, pushing her towards the back door. "But that wasn't 'backyard at home' air. That was, uh, 'not home air' so yea." He pushed her outside, and closed the door.
"Can I get a beverage?" Max yelled at the closed door. A hand shot out and handed her a bottle of Coke.
"I like Pepsi…" The hand snatched the bottle and handed her Pepsi.
"Thanks."
"You're welcome," Gazzy's voice came through the door.
"Dang it! Gazzy shut up!" Iggy yelled at him.
"Both of you shut up! We can't stand her and listen to them talk! That's RUDE!" Nudge yelled.
They're voices faded.
"Did you put all this together?" Max asked, as she turned around to face Fang.
Flashback
(A/N: If you've read "More Alike Than They Seem" this next part may seem a lot like it. I'm sorry; I just like writing this fluff-ish stuff)
"So, we're not going to talk about it?!" Max was yelling at Fang who was sitting on his bed in his room.
"Max, seriously,… no."
Max threw up her hands, and groaned.
"Fang, I am so sick of this. I'm tired of trying to talk to you and failing because you crawl into your 'Fang cave' and ignore whatever I say."
She sighed.
"I just don't see how you can say you love me, and treat me like everyone else."
Fang looked up at her apologetically.
"Max, there are just things about me that you just wouldn't understand…"
She sat down beside him. "Try me.."
Fang shook his head.
A look of despair crossed her face. She got up and left him there.
End Flashback
He looked at her with pain in his eyes.
"I missed you…"
"You could've fooled me-"
"Please," He interrupted, pleading, yet somewhat firm. "Let me finish."
She stood silently.
"I did miss you Max, and I do love you."
He walked toward her, until he was right in front of her. He held her shoulders.
"I love you, and need you, more than you'll ever know," He looked into her eyes.
"But I'll try to show you…," He reached into his back pocket.
"Let's try again. But first…"
In his hand was a small, silver engagement ring. It had a small delicate diamond in the middle, with sapphires cut into the shape of wings beside it. Engraved on the band was "My Angel.
He whispered "Will you do something for me?"
You May Forget Me
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