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authors note: I added somehthings to chapter 11 and guys I really need more reviews... please:)
oh and I am now in ninth grade!!!!!!!!!!!... don't know where that came from :P
(Naruto)
On the move for about three days... Or was I just not paying attention to what time it was? We were all still traveling together, team one and team two...
The icy, wet wind formed a dry layer over my eyes...
Granny and Jiraiya were still knocked out but at times murmured something about the Uchihas and the Kyuubi. They mentioned something out loud just now "Uchiha… Senju… founded Konoha… Izuna's… eternal Mangekyou… me… Kyuubi… I attacked… with Kyuubi… Hashirama Senju… I was exiled… Obito's… fake death… to control Kyuubi… fourth Hokage… I'm still… Madara."
Kakashi-sensei's looked like he had seen a ghost when Granny said 'I was exiled… Obito's fake death'
(Kakashi)
I was exiled and Obito's fake death doesn't sound good. Who is 'I' and what does 'I' have to do with Obito?!? 'To control the Kyuubi, were the words after this unexpected sentence... How could Obito control the Kyuubi? The first time he activated his sharingan was right before he supposedly died...
Who had been controlling them the whole time? Was it that guy Pain? Did the Akatsuki purposely want us to hear all they were thinking about?
Again they spoke but in broken sentences "Nagato… chakra machine… secret… Rinnegan… bodies… Pain"
(Tobi/Madara Uchiha)
Oh shit! Was it still my turn to use the Shouten jutsu on them?! Damn it they must have heard everything through my thoughts… fucking telepathic communication! I'm screwed... but I'm still the strongest Uchiha… hehe
"Umm hey Itachi why don't you and Kisame take over Tsunade and Jiraiya… I'm exhausted and I don't have that much chakra left"
(Hinata)
I found some time to sit on Gamabunta and borrow a pen and paper from Sai. Writing down all that Jiraiya and Tsunade-sama were saying was not too difficult; they were only one word sentences. I guess writting it down in point and solving the puzzle later won't hurt.
"Good idea Hinata" Kakashi-sensei looked over at the scroll I was writing on and seemed pleased.
(Shikamaru)
I think I should do some research on that guy Madara Uchiha and Kakashi-senei's friend Obito Uchiha. If I can find anything on Pain or 'Nagato' then I'll be lucky but Naruot and Kakashi-senpai fought with him so there's enough information they can give me. I have look up Rinnegan and its blood line. The Rinnegan eye is very rare and powerful. I don't' have a choice. I have to help Konoha...
More people want to help others and their village... Especially the people in Konoha. Everyone continues to think about the wonderful feeling he spread across Konoha. Naruto has changed everything... We've all been motivated to go on, never stop... and believe.
(Naruto)
"Kakashi-sensei?"
"Hmm…"
"I told you before that Sasuke wanted my Kyuubi... but why?"
"Good question… Why would he need it…? Well maybe Orochimaru ordered him to capture you but Sasuke doesn't really care about anything else excluding the death of his brother. There could be multiple reasons…"
"He said something about joining the Akatsuki… he would probably do that if he was forced to by a stronger Uchiha… if there are any left besides Itachi"
"Naruto, that's it!" Kakashi-sensei excitedly shouted. His eye ripped open.
"Uh… what's it?"
"Obito Uchiha must be the stronger Uchiha so in order for Sasuke to 'not get killed' he may just have to work under Obito… but what will happen to Itachi… Sasuke might kill Itachi and then go after Obito... so he might want to capture the rest of the Bijuu for the Akatsuki!"
"Wow… that actually made sense!" really it did!
"Just one little problem… Orochimaru will take over Sasuke's body. Orochimaru quit the Akatsuki so Orochimaru hates the Akatsuki… therefore why the hell would Orochimaru/ Sasuke go after Obito, an AKATSUKI member?!"
"Shikamaru has a point there…" Kakashi said.
"You know…." I decided to tell them about what I think. I know Sasuke... he's not that ruthless... or has he changed so much that even I can't recognize his true nature?... "Maybe Sasuke's plan was to take advantage of Orochimaru's training and become stronger than him. I think Sasuke will kill Orochimaru and then fight Itachi…"
Both shikamaru and Kakashi-sensei gawked at me like they had never heard me say such an incredibly true thing.
"I'm not lying!" I added.
"I know you're not but what you said… could be very true" Shikamaru replied.
"We still have to find those Akatsuki members who are controlling Tsunade-sama and Jiraiya-sama." Kakashi-sensei mentioned something we could not simply miss out and deal with another time.
(Pain)
"We still have a chance. Kisame, go after the leaf ninja"
Jiraiya... I remember him... I could never defeat him in battle... but now, he won't be able to match up to my power. We still have control over Jiraiya and Tsunade, luck just has to be on our side...
Hours later...
(Naruto)
Now we have to fight this one! There were still a ton of ninja and almost half of them were Jounin. However, one Jounin said the stupidest thing I've ever heard…
"You… are… an Akatsuki member!"
"Gai-sensei… OF COURSE HE'S AN AKATSUKI MEMBER CAN'T YOU SEE THE BLACK COAT AND THE RED CLOUDS. YOU DIDN'T KNOW WHO THIS GUY WAS LAST TIME SO JUST FORGET IT!!!" Tenten shouted and boiled with furry.
"Okay, Okay, then I should forget him!" Gai crouched in a comical position indicating that he was somewhat terrified of Tenten... his student!
(Tenten)
I've had it with those goody two shooed, fuzzy browed, cry babies!!! Although I like Neji… but his hair is better than mine... damn you all!
(Naruto)
"I'm going to start anyway!" "Water-style water shark pursuit!" Kisame shouted.
The battle was probably between Gai and Kisame.
"You guys go on… I'll beat 'who ever this' is up."
"Fine if you insist… oh and good luck on trying to remeber him" Kakashi-sensei chuckled.
Tenten (for various reasons), Granny, Jiraiya, Gamabunta, Shikamaru, Kurenai-sensei, Temari, Hinata, Sakura, Kakashi-sensei and I resumed our journey.
(Gaara)
We should be able to finish him in no time. Before Kisame's jutsu could reach anyone's feet I quickly attacked.
"Sand Tsunami!" A grainy wave of sand hit Kisame. My sand tossed his body from left to right. He struggled to swim through the suffocating sand. I finally gathered my sand back and let others attack Kisame.
"Baika no jutsu!" Chouji smacked his large and stretched out hand down on Kisame. It was like a fly swatter crushing a fly.
(Gai)
It was my time to shine! Why don't I just call the Akatsuki member 'him'? I started off with punches and hard kicks. He tried to kick me but I didn't let him and instead jumped up in the air. He followed suit and was soon in the air too. I used a substitution jutsu and teleported from in front to behind the surprised man. I held out my arms and two bandages rolled out of my sleeves. I wrapped the two bandage rolls tightly around the enemy. I grabbed him but with my face towards the ground. Descending to the ground I held onto him and rapidly spun around counterclockwise "Primary lotus!" Letting go of my opponent -whose name I did not know- he crashed to the ground. Dust polluted the sky but when it cleared away a huge crater scarred the earth.
(Kiba)
"Akamaru why don't you finish the shark creep off!" Akamaru barked in reply to my command and targeted Kisame. Akamaru crunched his... ass with its white, arrow shapped teeth!!!
"Uh… haha I didn't mean that!?... but good boy Akamaru!"
Over whelmed by attacks and jutsus Kisame somehow got to his feet and scurried away.
(Kisame)
There were so many of them… If I had stayed longer I would not have lived! Pain's so impatient! My chakra level has decreased a great amount because of the shouten jutsu I had to use on those two Sannin!
(Kakashi)
The other ninja soon joined us and were successful in at least weakening Kisame a great deal...
(Naruto)
"You're mine!" Granny suddenly shot her eyes open and grabbed my leg. Her nails dug into my leg. The ninja with me all turned around were shocked to see what was going on. Granny yanked me off Gamabunta, throwing me to the ground with a thud. Jiraiya had taken a sword out and pointed its sharp edge at me.
"You die now!" he raisesd his sword.
"No he won't!" Hinata shouted and charged at Jiraiya with her new jutsu,
"Juuho Soushiken!" Hinata crammed the two chakra lion heads around her fists into Jiraiya's stomach. Granny dragged me over to a tree, grabbed a kunai and stabbed my arm with it. The cut was so deep that the kunai cut through the tree... my arm clung to it. I let out an awfully loud cry and tried to pull it out… it was just too painful!
Sakura wanted to continue the brawl her own way for a while and so, punched Granny's face, which started to bleed.
"Katon Housenka no jutsu!" Kakashi-sensei helped out and spat round fire balls at them. The two managed to dodge some of them but were hit by the rest.
(Kisame)
I could only travel this far. I was quite a few meters away from them but I could still what was going on. I forced my shouten jutsu to continue its control over Tsunade and Jiraiya.
(Naruto)
"Chidori!" Kakashi-sensei attacked again and sent the sannin flying else where. Kiba wanted to take part in kicking ass and performed "Gatsuga!" Akamaru transformed to Kiba's clone and jupmed on top of Kiba. Kiba and Akamaru spun around in a twister, hit Granny and Jiraiya and bounced off them. Tenten dazzled them with her weaponry and Lee attacked with a handful of Taijutsu! Temari literally blew them away with her colossal fan. Gaara covered them with sand and performed his sand burial jutsu, almost killing them! Shikamaru attacked them with his shadow strangle jutsu. The shadow traveled up Granny and Jiraiya's bodies. Shikamaru soon exclaimed that his jutsu was successful! Yamato tangled them with his wood element jutsu while Lee, Gai, Hinata and Sakura found the perfect opportunity to beat the crap out of them! Shino's bugs poisoned them and finally Neji attacked with an eight trigrams sky palm. All these people fighting to save me made me smile. Granny and Jiraiya said something which was not really expected, "Wait what's going on!?!" they shouted and fell unconscious... again. I guess who ever was controlling them gave up or was suffering from too much chakra loss…
(Kisame)
I couldn't control them any longer! I let go of the jutsu and was grateful I didn't pass out or die!!!
(Naruto)
Hinata slowly and carefully removed the kunai from my arm and wrapped it in a bandage.
"It didn't split a cordial vein so that's good" Hinata softly spoke but she's breathing fast... which probably means she's worried.
I thanked everyone for helping out to save me. Gai and Captain Yamato again willingly volunteered to carry Jiraiya-sama and Granny. Gamabunta was no longer with us and we were no longer struggling as much. At last we all were safely traveling back to Konoha... I think.