Okay, this is my first fanfic. And I don't carfe if you're harsh or whatever, I just want to know what you think of today's random Harry Potter thought that became a short story.
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, because if I did, I would be insanely rich and my ideas would be published.
{At the final battle…}
A witch wearing a translucent grey-lilac shawl over her face, who seemed to be Trelawney's friend, ran into the room and yelled, "Wait!"
Everyone turned toward this woman, despite the battle they were all fighting in. She pulled the shawl off her to reveal Sirius- who, contrary to Snivellus' beliefs, was not a woman, let alone one as crazy as Trelawney.
"Sirius?!" Harry yelled in disbelief, still not getting through the shock of seeing his dead godfather in the middle of his battle with Lord Voldemort.
"Yeah, it's me, Harry. Took me forever to get out of that damned veil!"
Then, Tonks, Lupin, Fred, Colin Creevy, and other lost ones came walking through the doors behind Sirius. Fred said, chuckling, "Wow. Guys, the weirdest thing just happened! We all just woke up in this room off the Entrance Hall. I feel really rested and energetic, though- like a baby bunny prancing around."
All of a sudden, Harry's parents came crashing through the other doors on the far end of the hall in a muggle car. "Long time no see, Padfoot, Moony!" James yelled, as Lily explained, "Sorry, we got lost for about ten years after that really bright traffic light."
A few moments of which was comprised mostly of the prior members of the Great Hall just staring and the new-comers looking kind of awkward, standing there and shifting uncomfortably under the others' intense gazes passed.
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?!" And outraged Bellatrix screamed.
Voldemort, thinking he was about to be outsmarted by Dumbledore's little brat, Harry, and his army, decided to take his last chance to achieve victory. He pointed his wand at The Boy Who Lived and yelled, "Avada Kedavra!" the curse naturally rolling off his tongue after so many uses.
"Shut up. I win." Harry said in a defiant and annoyed voice.
Voldemort and his followers just dropped dead there and disappeared into non-existence, for Harry and the light side had won.
A/N: Review?