Rosepetal's POV

"Take that,, Lionblaze!"

I smiled down at my kits.

Blackwhisker was coming back from the hunt.

He would be glad to see them.

I watched my youngest. He was playing with his siblings.

He was called Toadkit, in honour of my brother.

Toadkit had black fur and amber eyes.

Then Strawberrykit jumped on Toadkit.

" No!!" I shouted.

She looked at her paws.

She had golden red fur and blue eyes.

She looked like Lionblaze.

Don't know why.

Then there was Moonkit with green eyes and silver fur.

"Daddy!" They squealed.

Then I saw my wonderful mate.

"How was the patrol?"

He purred. I took it as a yes.

I picked up a rabbit for the kits.

It was almost time for the apprentice ceremony.

"Foggykit!"

Our little Foggykit had been named after Foggyfoot.

She looked just like her.

The ceremony started.

"Foggykit, StarClan sees your shyness. Cinderheart will be your mentor, she will help you break your shyness. You will now be known as Foggypaw."

The Clan shouted my daughter's name.

"Moonkit, StarClan sees your outgoingness. Ivytail will be your mentor, she will help you be outgoing but sensible. You will know be as Moonpaw."

The Clan shouted my son's name.

"Strawberrykit, StarClan sees your softness. Berrynose will be your mentor, he shall show you to be soft with your Clan and kits but fierce in battle. You will be known as Strawberrypaw."

The Clan cheered my daughter's name.

"Toadkit, StarClan sees your lovingness. Like your sister, you must reserve it only for kits and the Clan. Your mentor shall be Sorreltail. You shall now be known as Toadpaw."

The Clan cheered my son's name.

But my heart at the mention of my brother's name.

Blackwhisker gave me a sympathetic lick.

It must've hard for him too.

It was too bad that he hadn't ever met Toadpaw.

They would have got along so well.

Soon, it was night and I could see the sky twinkling.

Every star was shining. I knew every female cat with silver fur and blue eyes looked down on us.

Every cat that had ever loved, smiled at us.

Every cat that was loyal to love guided us.

And every cat that had ever known us would protect us.

Like a mother protects her kits.

Like a warrior protects her Clan.

Like an apprentice is eager to protect all.

And like a forbidden lover looks after his mate.

Did you like the end? I thought it was pretty good.

Romantic, sweet but with a hint of pain and violence, I thought it was an okay fan-fic.

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