OMG. Thanks Coby Cullen for the idea. ^^ Thanks to all my reviewers, too! Who knew Hearts would become so popular? Review replying... Anonymous, I can't help but make these poems sad. ^^ I don't even think I can make much of a poem to be humorous out of warriors. I'm glad you all like it! xD This is going to be about how Mudclaw felt when Onestar took over the leadership. The next chappy will come very fast as a dedication to all my reviewers. Wolfstar suggested a good idea, but I wasn't sure if I could fully understand and capture Birdflight. So I'm not going to do her just yet. I will be studying about her. Next chapter will be... Well, I can't think of one yet. I'll say "You'll see!" xD
Changes
W-what?
How can that be?
Tallstar made changes
Horrible changes
Before he left us
To go to StarClan.
"Onewhisker will be the new deputy
In Mudclaw's place."
I glare at him
Fear-scent unraveling around me
Anger steaming into me.
How could he?!
Such horrible changes
I, and I alone
Am the rightful leader of WindClan!
Even cats from other Clans
Could tell.
Hawkfrost and Blackclaw
Could tell that
The changes weren't good!
They were terrible!
I, and I alone
Should've been Mudstar!
I, and I alone
Should've received nine lives!
Why did Tallstar do that?
I've always been a loyal warrior
Not like that puny
Onewhisker,
Firestar's kittypet!
Onewhisker became Onestar
But I was still Mudclaw!
I just can't forgive Tallstar
For making those changes.
Those changes,
Pulling my life up
Tearing it into shreds
Into pieces!
Just because
At Tallstar's last breath
He whispered those words
To make changes
Those changes,
Has ripped me into shreds
Those changes,
Had torn up my life.
I was in fury
Furious
At the changes made.
How could he?
After all I've been through
With WindClan!
After all I've been through
As deputy!
I was ready to be leader
I was ready for power.
Onewhisker wasn't
Yet Tallstar still made his choice!
How ridiculous was that?
I'm not Firestar's kittypet.
I attempted to kill Onestar
Why did StarClan even give him
His nine lives?
StarClan accepted
Those changes I couldn't.
I tried to kill Onestar
But a falling tree,
Struck by lightning
Hit me
And life soared
Away and away.
Out of me,
Just like my leadership had.
StarClan betrayed me
Just as Tallstar had!
I was dying
I was screaming.
Pain rippled through my skull
And I died.
StarClan should've welcomed me
For I was just
Trying to take
What was rightfully mine's.
But StarClan killed me.
I saw no stars
I felt no safety.
I was in a dark forest.
Not StarClan!
How could they?
Just moments before
I was refused to StarClan
Tallstar meowed,
"Mudclaw.
I dread
That I had to make
Those changes.
But if you rose,
WindClan would be bloodshed.
I've gotten dreams
From StarClan
And I believed them.
You would've been alive
If you accepted
Those changes."
I snarled at him
And then
I was alone
In the darkness
In the Dark Forest.
And then I wish
He never made
Those changes.
Aw. Poor Mudclaw. WAIT, did I just say he was poor? Mudclaw is mean, but he was poor in a way. *SPOILERS FOR CODE OF THE CLANS*: There is a part in Code of the Clans in the deputy code parts. Tallstar stated that he received ominous dreams from StarClan, seeing now leader, Mudstar standing on a hill of bones and blood. Ooh, scary dream, huh? Mystery solved! That's why Tallstar changed the deputy. Sorry if it was a spoiler for you. *sighs* Any more ideas for my new poems?? Hope you liked this. xD A BIG THANKS and HUG and TALLSTAR PLUSHIE for COBY CULLEN!! xD
Hobey-ho, let's go!
~~Rainy