Yeah, scream FINALLY and run around in circles. I'm going to write a new poem. The idea was suggested by Hawkfur the Ninja. It was a great idea. This will be Mistyfoot's POV written in poetic format.
No More Surprises
A life
Full of surprises
Is not always the best.
My brother Stonefur
And I,
Had plenty.
My friend Silverstream,
Daughter of Crookedstar,
RiverClan's great leader...
Surprise...
Died
Kitting the kits of Graystripe.
Graystripe of ThunderClan!
So much misfortune.
I'm wrathed in it!
ThunderClan gives us more and more
Surprises.
Good,
Bad,
Both.
We were loyal,
Brave, proud warriors
Of RiverClan.
But...
Surprise.
Bluestar was our mother.
No... no...
We couldn't forgive her.
How could she
Give us away?
Yeah.
Our mother is Bluestar.
Bluestar of ThunderClan.
Leader of ThunderClan!
To become deputy
She gave us to RiverClan,
Where our father Oakheart was.
Yeah.
It wasn't
The best surprise
To get.
Bluestar begged our forgiveness.
I wouldn't forgive
So was Stonefur.
How could she?
How could she
Leave us behind
Like that?
How could she give us
Such horrible surprises
At a time we didn't want it
The most?
I wish
Those surprises
Had come another time.
Not now...
Not then...
Not later...
I wish I didn't
Even had to get such
Horrific surprises.
No more surprises...
Please...
But no one respected
Our wishes.
Surprise...
Bluestar was dying.
No... no...!
I didn't forgive her yet.
But I still...
She was my mother.
I still love her,
I guess.
But she was
Entering StarClan...
No... Don't go, Mother!
Bluestar was smiling
Still smiling at us.
She begged for our forgiveness
Again.
This time
We forgave her.
She whispered to me
Those words
I can never forget...
"Thank you,
Mistyfoot...
I
Always
Loved you two...
So much...
Thank you
For forgiving me...
I'm finally...
forgiven."
She went.
No! Mother!
I cried
But no matter how much I wept
Mother's not going to come back.
Surprise...
I hated that surprise so much
Now Stonefur and my kits
Are my only
Living kin...
Surprise.
Another horrible surprise
Followed that.
Leopardstar
Came together
With Tigerstar,
Forming TigerClan.
And because Stonefur
And I,
Stormpaw and Featherpaw,
Were half-Clan
We would be killed.
Stonefur wouldn't kill
Stormpaw.
And so he was killed.
Not another surprise!
No! Stonefur! Don't leave me...
I felt like I was dying myself...
How can Stonefur
Just leave me like that?
No, Stonefur!
Come back...
Please...
Stop it, StarClan!
Why are you torturing me?!
How can you do this to me?!
First Oakheart
Then Bluestar
Now Stonefur!
What else am I losing?!
Surprise.
Feathertail died
In the Great Journey.
How could that be?
She was a great apprentice.
Not Feathertail...
She was so innocent
And sweet!
Now even she's gone
To StarClan.
I almost began to hate
My ancestors
For pulling away so much
From me
And me alone.
Surprise...
Twolegs had grabbed me away
Leaving Hawkfrost temporary deputy.
Leopardstar chose wrong
Hawkfrost
Was ambitious...
If I never returned
What would've happened?!
Luckily
I returned
Only to get another surprise.
Surprise
Stormfur was exiled
By Leopardstar.
Because Hawkfrost
Questioned his loyalty.
I wish
Hawkfrost never came!
I just wish
There would be
No more surprises
In my life.
I rather have
A plain life
Please, StarClan
I beg of you...
Please...
No more surprises
In my life...
I know, poor Mistyfoot. She's always been unlucky. I hope she becomes Mistystar soon! I love her! Poor her... *sniffle* Well, please review!