Tainted Angel OLD VERSION : Chapter 10 Reminisce, a pitch black / riddick fanfic

(I'm going to warn you all now, this is a very VERY Confusing chapter. I'm trying to give it a sureal feel, I hope you can understand what's going on. It's gonna be skipping around alot. If I can do it like I want to, This should be the longest chapter yet. If you are easily confused, I'd grab a bottle of tylenol before reading. sweatdrop But other then that, I hope you love this chapter.)

What an amazing time

What a family

How did the years go by

Now it's only me

Scythe thought back to her family as she sat. Waiting for Riddick and Jack to come to their meeting. She smiled slightly. She had the cutest daughter with her husband...Why did it happen...why...

But right now, all she wanted to think about was her daughter's smile...what a smile...what a god damn smile. Tears threatened to spill over from her cold eyes. She looked away, scraping at her eye roughly to get rid of liquid emotion. She shut her eyes and leaned back against the wall she sat against.

"Mommy! Mommy! Look what I caught with Daddy!" Her daughter looked up at her, Bright red curls falling around her face, green eyes sparkling in the lighting of the bright green sun outside.

Her daughter opened her cupped hands to show her a glowing lizard. "Oh that's beautiful." Scythe smiled down at her daughter.

She wasn't always so fucked up...On the contrary...

"Can we keep him mommy, Can we?" Her daughter squealed with excitment.

"Well only if daddy says okay."

"Yay! He said if you said Okay."

Scythe smiled, "What are you gonna name your lizard?"

"Speckle." Her daughter said, assuredly. As if that name made more sense then 22 equaling 4.

"Why honey?" she laughed.

"Because."

"Because why?"

"You wouldn't understand." She giggled.

"Oh come on, try me." Scythe smiled.

"I'm naming it Speckle, because of how my blood looked against your floor." She said in a whisper.

Scythe's eyes widened as her daughter's flesh melted off of the bones, her body crumpling in a bloody mass of flesh and bone on the floor.

She jolted awake from the nightmare, giving a despairing sob, It could have been different... Why did the story end like that?

Tick-tock

La, la, la, la, la, la, la

"It's so dark Riddick..." Jack called up to him as they crawled through the vent.

Riddick snorted, and made a hmpph sound.

The dark...and enclosed space...it reminded her of....

Jack shut her eyes tightly. The only sound that came from her room was the ticking of her clock. And there it came. WHAM. She heard her mother's body hit the floor in the other room.

"I told you, She isn't here!"

Wham!

"Shutup whore! You're always protecting the little bitch. Well it's time she learns her lesson."

"She hasn't done anything to you! She's never done anything to you! She's never done anything, But want to make you proud of her!"

Crack!

Jack made a soft sob as she heard her mother's head slammed against the cold cement of their home.

"I Said SHUTUP! Where is she?!"

Her mother cried out, sobbing, "She isn't here!"

Slam!

"You're Lying!"

"Stop it! Stop!" She sobbed.

Jack curled up under her bed, sobbing to herself. Why did her dad have to be like that? Why...why...WHY?!

"Tell me bitch, or I'll kill you!"

"She's not here! Snap out of it! Don't do this!"

"I SAID SHUTUP!"

Crunch...

There were no more cries from her mother...no whimpering...it...was over.

Her father lifted his foot from his wife's smashed in skull. He looked toward's Jack's room, glaring.

Jack's eyes widend. Sure her mother had beat her when she got drunk...but she never wanted her to die! She kept in the sobs she wanted to cry out and scream, as her father made his way into the room.

"Jack...Heeere Jack...Let's be friends..." He snickered.

She stayed under the bed, watching his blood stained boot move around slowly on the floor.

"Come Out Jack, and I won't hurt you..."

She stayed still, shivering.

"Fine Bitch, we'll play it your way." He snarled, and overthrew the bed, yanking her up. "Come to Daddy Jack..." He smirked.

She squirmed, "No...No...NO!!!"

Like a cat in heat, stuck in a moving car

A scary conversation, shut my eyes, can't find the brake

What if they say that you're a climber

Scythe's husband followed after his wife, trying to remember his daughter as well.

All he could remember was her bloody, limp body strewn across their home. This is what started it all...

"Todd, Don't you even play with him..."

"He wants to start shit with me for no reason, He'll get what he deserves."

If only he'd have known that the guy he was about to rat out, really did have his spies everywhere. They had heard him...Heard what he said. And so they decided to give him a warning...

His poor daughter...he blinked away the tears at the memory of his little Sophie. It didn't have to end that way. Damn his stupidity.

He often blamed her death on himself, the scars on his forearm lingering with guilt.

Naturally I'm worried if I do it alone

Who really cares cause it's your life

You never know it could be great

Take a chance cause you might grow

Oh, oooh

Riddick had to agree with Scythe...this trip was a risky one. Even HE wouldn't do something like this alone. He wasn't really thrilled of the idea right now, but he had to consider Jack.

If anything happened to Jack in that slam, he didn't know what he'd do...It would tear at him forever.

He looked foreward Silver blue eyes scanning the tunnel ahead of him.

He'd have to take the chance. To get Jack out of slam alive, was his top priority, even if he'd never show how much he cared for her on the outside.

What you waiting

What you waiting for

What you waiting

What you waiting for

Tick-tock

Take a chance you stupid ho

"What are you waiting for, Jump, Quick, Before it's too late!" Scythe screamed out to her best friend.

"I can't! I just can't!" Syn sobbed, her knees shaking as she stood atop a rock that was being slowly swallowed up into the acid pit.

"You Bitch, Jump! JUMP! SYN!" Scythe screeched as her friend drew nearer to the acid.

"I CAN'T!" Syn yelled at her friend, tears streaming down her face, "Hurry up, Get out without me! Go!"

"No, I won't leave you! I can't! You've been so good to me!" Scythe tried to jump down and save her friend, but her husband grabbed her, "You can't do anything for her now!"

Jack's eyes widened as she watched the woman's feet begin to to touch the acid. The screams were horrific...

Syn screamed, eyes widened in pain, clawing at her skin to try and ease the pain as her skin and bones melted.

Riddick watched, swallowing slowly. He could only immagine what that pain must feel like.

Syn's body sunk into the acid, the acid eating it away faster then it could sink. Soon her head was all that was left, and her face was twisted in horror as she finished being burned alive.

Scythe was hysteric, screaming and trying to get to her friend.

Todd Grabbed her wrists firmly, and slapped her roughly across the face, "Stop it, Scythe."

Scythe finally stopped, biting her lower lip.

Riddick turned, "Let's move it people."

Jack turned her eyes from the horrible scene, following Riddick. Dear god...already they had lost one of their 6 companions...

Like a echo pedal you're repeating yourself

You know it all by heart, why are you standing in one place

Born to blossom, bloom to perish

"Hey. How do we know This Riddick guy isn't gonna just screw us over once we get there, and take the ship for himself."

Riddick growled under his breath, and went to straighten this guy out, but before he could Jack had punched the guy.

"Don't even say something like that! Riddick would never do anything like that! Shut your mouth! Just Shutup!" Jack was really upset about that.

Riddick's lip twitched, in an invisable smile, but before he knew it, the man was falling.

The punch had knocked his senses from him, and he stumbled backwards...and over a ledge into a lava pit.

Jack's eyes widened....She just killed someone...again...."I..I...He...He...he just....I didn't..."

Scythe glared, "Dammit, there goes another...How are we gonna pull this off?!"

Todd shook his head, "We can't! It's Imposible!"

"We can't go back. Keep Moving!" Riddick grabbed Jack's wrist and pulled her along the dangerous footings of this hell hole planet.

Todd shook his head, swallowing, but followed after.

Scythe sighed..."Dammit." But followed as well.

Ya know you're (wigging out) cause of your sex chromosome

I know it's so messed how our society'll think (for sure)

Life is short, you're capable (uh-huh)

Oh, oooh

Look at your watch now

You're still a super hot female

You got your million-dollar contract

And they're all waiting for your hot track

"Riddick how the HELL do you expect to take out tons of guards with just four people."

"I can take out four people by myself."

"Always so fucking COCKY! Well that's not helping right now! The little bitch just killed our back up muscles!"

"Don't you dare call Jack a bitch." Riddick grabbed the front of the guy's shirt, shoving him backwards.

Scythe's husband was on the ledge of a lava pit, being held up only by Riddick's hand on his shirt.

Scythe's eyes widened, "Shit! Get off of him! GET OFF!"

Scythe grabbed Jack, And held her over a pit of acid, glaring at Riddick, "Let him go..."

What you waiting

What you waiting for

What you waiting

What you waiting for

Riddick smirked, "What are you waiting for? You don't have the guts to drop Jack, because if you did, I'd drop your husband in a heart beat."

"...You're right. I don't." Scythe swallowed, "Please...Just...Let him go.

What you waiting

What you waiting for

What you waiting

What you waiting for

Riddick smirked...and started to help Todd up.

What you waiting for

(What you waiting for)

Take a chance you stupid ho

Scythe breathed a sigh of relief, and let Jack back up.

Jack swallowed nervously, having thought she'd suffer the same fate as Syn...

What you waiting for

(What you waiting for)

Take a chance you stupid ho

"Come on, Let's get a move on...And don't call Jack a bitch again, or I will kill you."

"Alright, Alright..." Todd mumbled.

But before they could move, the female's blood curdling scream made Riddick turn quickly, eyes wide as he watched the girl's form fall backwards into the pit.

"No..." the word came out, barely above a whisper....

(OH. OH. Who was it. Who Fell. You don't know. And you won't know till I update nnTwo chapters in one day, that is an achivement, since my fingers are frozen and stiff and I can hardly move them X.x Alrighty, well. Hope you enjoyed this, till next time!)