well now, I knew I would get several submissions on the first day, but I never expected to see some of these abilities and character designs, which I'm liking what I'm seeing.

there will no vaizard masks, they may be for Hell, but they do not have the ability to hollowfy. But that doesn't mean you can't go a little overboard with the other powers section as long as they are reasonable

Also, I do a first come first serve basis, so please pay attention to other reviewers' OCs ranks, I already have two Squad 13 Captains, I will specify which one will have to change their captaincy.

There are still slots open, please pay attention to the format of the four slots that are taken in the previous chapter and other requirements that are for certain Squad Captains and Lieutenants, three seated officers can be from any squad and obviously no bankai. Have fun with creating your warriors for Hell, they don't always have to stick with the general theme of evilness and destruction as they could have done something extremely bad just before they died that warranted them being sent to Hell instead of Soul Society. Listed below are taken spots along with any questions, criticism, comments, and I'm changing a other power on the Tenth Squad Captain. Please double space between sections/headings, make for easier reading them so that I can use them.

If you need or wish to change certain sections, feel free to review this chapter with the changed section only. also on women, those of you that tells me their bust size, I'm a guy, I have no idea what B cup or C cup means, I'm no pervert, use comparisons from the anime please.

Squad 1/Head Captain: Dean "Lucifer" Shard-mine

Squad 2 Captain: Kato 'Howie' Howell from wisdom-jewel, very fitting for the position due to zanpakutou abilities and the like, comic relief opportunity every appearance, doesn't seem like she would pick on Natsume, but that is okay, I'm sure there will be other captains that would be the type to do so. Question though, what does "Respect in whatever faction:7" mean?

Squad 3 Captain: Natsume Tomoharu-mine

Squad 5 Captain: Mizu Saki from Angeltwin07, interesting zanpakutou that is very unusual in my opinion, there aren't many illusionary type zanpakutou that people make, overall one of those nice characters that may have some conflicts with Squad 10 Captain.

Squad 10 Lieutenant: Yuki Suzuki from DreamStar14, zanpakutou, for the exception of last ability, seems to be a knock off of Rukia's a little much. Granted the captain of the squad has some similarities to Toushiro, but there is still some difference there. Change the shikai design to distinguish it more from Rukia's then you will be good. What I like about her: a big exception to Hell, shorter than the Captain of her squad, and she's a werewolf. Question on that, does she still have her zanpakutou and what kind of enhancements does that give her?

Squad 10 Captain: Nickel Shard. Change Other Powers, getting rid of Corruption to Minimum Release-allows him use of his ice even without his sword drawn or in shikai, but control can be sketchy, power is only quarter strength, and can't use his shikai's two attacks. -mine

Squad 11 Captain: Ashley Alburn-mine

Squad 12 Captain: Kuro Knightmarye from freeprincess, um, one word, Badass! Height is 7 feet, 6 feet 12 inches is the same thing as 7 feet tall, my dad is a contractor I should know this. The reading of ancient texts of the lost world such as latin and the like is a skill, not a other power, but very reasonable skill considering he's in charge if research and developement. The talking to lower level beings and demons, very fitting and does fit with the scientist like genre.

Squad 13 Captain: Shiyoko Barayokoshima from Eviltwin05, you get this rank because you reviewed first. An interesting character and zanpakutou. The Voodoo Plant seems to be another zanpakutou ability rather than a other power. Also, a description of what the Shikai looks like would be helpful, unless it is the thorny vines, which would make it cooler than what it already is.

Cielo Noct from Grimdivide, damn, now that is an interesting guy. a shape shifting zanpakutou is rare indeed, I have two ocs that I haven't used in any story but they also have shape shifting zanpakutou and that alone gives you a Captain's Rank, along with that interesting bankai. Choose a different Captain's Slot and it's yours!

That leaves Squads 4, 6 through 9 Captains, and lieutenants for every squad besides Squad 10, and three seated officers. You may post one more OC for those that have posted one. But please leave room for other people, as it has only been a day. THANK YOU A BUNCH THE OCs!!!!