Not to sound cocky or anything, but...I was really happy with this poem! It's probably my favorite so far, and maybe even my favorite EVER. I hope you like it as much as I did.
READ it (if you want), REVIEW it (if you can), but please at least ENJOY IT (or face my wrath)
Maes Hughes -- No Time
My hands and feet are tingling
My mind is going numb
I cannot see, I cannot hear
My mouth has been struck dumb
I try to call to the ones around
'Please don't leave me here!'
Are they deaf or am I mute?
They do not seem to hear.
The light of day is dying
Or maybe that's just me
I know this isn't what I wanted
There was so much more to be
I wish I could have been there
I wish with heart and soul
But time has come to pay the price
And death collects his toll
So now I must bid thee adieu
My loyalest of friends
I hope you can forgive me
With no way to make amends
Please do not forget me
Or let me vanish from your hearts
There's so much that I want to say
But don't know where to start
Take care of my family
And take care of my friends
I hope that new beginnings come
From every forced end
As my life drains out around me
In crimson on the ground
I wish that I could taste or touch
Or hear just one last sound
My time is running out now
I know I must move on
I do believe I'm leaving now
Going...going...gone.
Awwww I cried when he died in the anime even though I knew it was coming from the Manga. :'( Saaad day man.
Thanks for reading, please review! If you have ideas, tell me of them!
~Firegirl