Ha ha, my first poem for Al. I feel special.

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Alphonse Elric--Hollow Soul

Blindly watching

Mutely following

Deafly listening

Soul slowly hollowing

Time and again

you've tried in vain

To rectify failure

And end the pain

To wipe away

Your brother's sins

And maybe make him

Human again

A body of metal

A heart made of steel

A human soul

That still longs to feel

You are only a child

Burdens too heavy

Body empty and small

Can't carry the load

So he takes it all

You wish you could help

Pay a bit of the toll

And maybe, just maybe

Save your dear brother's soul

But what can you do?

What can I do?

He's lost so much

Let me sacrifice too!

I hate being useless

I'm not only a child

I can help him!

I can save him...


This one switched viewpoints halfway through, I hope it's not confusing.

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~Firegirl