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Sorry that i haven't updated lately(on both of my stories) but my internet has been down since friday of last week and the week before that I had my science fair and i had to work on that cause me and my partner didn't work on it that much until a week before the fair...soo...yea...again I'm REALLY! sorry.
Okay everyone NEW CHAPTER WOOT!!..
lol..alright i was reading my reviews and i got this review that made me laugh soooo much....I'm not insulting the person at all ...soo if you are reading this I'm not making fun of you...all right it was a criticism one..hahah...I'm not naming names but this is the review:
i would say i like this story, but i don't. you need to learn how to spell. and did you even develop a plot line? god! but i will finish reading this since i've read all the good ones. maybe you should get a beta for this story or give it up for adoption. i usually give positive reviews, but i couldn't for this one. i'm only trying to make your story better. And this is another one by the same person:
actually this was a pretty good chapter, besides the spelling and grammar. And another one—same person:
that is not how you spell torcher. god could you be anymore challenged. it is T-O-R-T-U-R-E. Torture. Sooo onward with the story! Heheehehehe..I know my spellings bad but...well if you REALLY don't like my story cause it has no plot line or I have bad grammar and spelling..well then STOP reading it!!God. And thank you for calling me challenged I appreciate it! Well ONWARDS!! oh yea..i know this is off topic a little but if you have facebook join the group 'saying poo instead of shit'..me and my friend created it!. Chapter 8 Recap
Bring on the torture
literally.
I think I'm going to die tonight.
Sigh
My life is a total living Hell.
Bella/Isabella's P.O.V
I went down stairs with everybody behind me and opened the door. When Klaus saw me he took a whole viewing of me—from toes to head-- when he made it to me face he swooped down to meet his lips with mine. This time i broke the kiss, and brought him to the living room.
"Klaus...I...ummm--"I broke off nervously. I couldn't say it I was too scared. I could feel the tears start to sting my eyes.
"Love, before you say anything may I please say something?" He asked me lovingly. I just gave him a silent nod.
"Alright love, when we were going together I wasn't-the most loving fiance. I know I hurt you, physicaly and mentaly. But I have changed. And I am very deeply sorry and if you could take me back I would very deeply apreciate it." He told me, looking strait into my eyes.
"Bullshit." I turned around in alarm to see Rosalie looking at Klaus in disgust.
"Excuse me?" Klaus turned to her in anger...So he was lying ...he hadn't changed.
"I said Bullshit. Your lying. You never loved her and you never have."
"And who are you to say that,young lady?" He asked her.
" My name is Rosalie Hale, and Bella has told me all about what you did to her." She told him
He turned to my in complete anger " you told her about that?"
I look all around the room. At all the faces of the people I love and who love me back. "Yes" I whispered quietly.
" YOU TOLD ME YOU WOULDN'T TELL ANYONE!!! WHO ELSE HAVE YOU TOLD?!?!?!?" he screamed at me. He raised his hand to slap me in the face.
It stung but I didn't flinch. I was taught better than that and have learnt from my mistakes from the past not to. So I said a firm "Damon."
"WHY!?!?"
"Because you left me all torn up and bloody, Klaus! How could I have not? He found me. Crying. In my room after you left." I didn't raise my voice. I didn't need to, because the power in it was very pronouncing.
"You told me nobody was home"
"There wasn't. I had just come home after you left. I was walking upstairs when I heard crying, I went into Izzy's room and saw her—like..like that" There was pain evident in his face and his eyes from the memory.
"You Raped her and when she found out she was pregnate you have her a abortion. She tried to tell you not to- that she wanted to keep the child but you wouldn't listen to her" Rosalie said in disgust.
"ROSALIE!!"I yelled at her and she quickly covered her mouth and said a quick sorry.
"Isabella—He raped you?...Why didn't you tell me? Why just Damon?" Stefan asked me.
"Because Stefan..I have told you stuff before that I haven't told Damon. And some day I was gonna tell you. And some day i'm gonna tell Damon the stuff I told you" I said to him.
"Bella why didn't you tell me about this?" Edward asked me.
"because Edward...I haven't thought about it since the day I died and turned into a vampire." I told him.
"ISABELLA MARIE SALVATORE!!!!!YOU TOLD HER ABOUT THE ABORTION TOO!?!?!??"
"Klaus sweety? You know what? I have dealt with your crap for long enough! I DO NOT LOVE YOU AND I DO NOT WANT TO SEE YOU EVER AGAIN!!!" I yelled at him.
"fine then...if you don't want to see me ever again..then give me my ring back"
"wh-what?"
"I said give me my ring back"
"Klaus you know i can't do that without dieing." I told him sadly
"Fine then...We shall be wed tomorrow at 6" and then he got up to leave.
"WAIT!!...fine...you...can have your stupid ring back." I said and through it at him.
He caught it in surprise and then look outside and said " But the sun is set..you can't go outside anymore"
"I do not give a damn." I said.
"Fine then" and he flung the door wide open.
Then sun was brutal. It was burning my skin. I can't breath. My body seemed as it was filled with light. Only the light was pain. It did not bring pleasure. It brought pain and hurt, no comfort.
I'm dieing. I know I am.
But then suddenly I'm not burning anymore.
And i hear screaming. Why is there screaming. Isn't death suppose to be peaceful?
Damon's P.O.V
As soon as I saw Klaus fling the door open I was running. And while i was running I was taking my ring off. I know its risky but I had to save her. I have to save Isabella. I'm not going to loose her again.
When I reached her I put my ring on her. When I felt the sun hit my skin I screamed but i managed to pick Isabella up and carry her over to her husband-Edward. When I reached him and gave her over I colasped on the ground-right when she woke up.
"DAMON!"
"I'm fine Isabella..I just have to-" And then I passed out.
OOOOOOO cliffie!!!!
SOOO what did you think!?!?
I know its not the best but well..I kinda ran out of ideas so i just wrote this while thinking what to write...I just wrote what came to my mind.
Please review if you wanna know whats gonna happen to Damon. The next Chapters gonna be in his P.O.V!
Okaaaaayy....welll...yeah....
BYE!
~~Miss. Alexander Sterling~~
