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So anyway onward with the story! It's a long one guys!


I sat across the table from Kristy watching her poke her spaghetti absentmindedly. She occasionally looked up at me but would just go back to her uneaten dinner.

"Are you going to eat?" I asked.

"Not hungry."

"Well then lets go to the living room." I stood up and Kristy followed me.

"Is it explaining time now?" she asked half smirking.

"Yes."

A frantic bang on the door made both of us jump.

A girl's voice screamed form the other side. "KRISTY! ARE YOU THERE!"

Kristy ran to the door and opened it only to be tackled to the floor in a hug. The girl was blonde and had a purple tank-top on and black jeans. Her makeup made her look like lady gaga (if you know what I mean.)

"KATIE!" Kristy yelled.

The girl got off of Kristy and stood up. "Yeah, it's me who'd you expect?"

Kristy and Katie then embraced a real hug before sitting down in the living-room.

"Todd this is Katie."

"Hi." I said.

"Nice to meet you." She replied.

"Katie… Lady Jaclyn said you were dead."

"I know I thought I was too! Max fucking stabbed me five times and left me for dead!"

"That does sound like him."

"Yeah well, you try explaining to a physician how your stab wounds cleared up in less than two hours!"

"Yeah, hospitals suck."

Katie took the TV remote off the coffee table and examined it.

"Well I promised Todd I'd explain a few things to him."

"What things?" Katie asked excitement in her voice.

"Max, Lady Jaclyn, you, why max is after me, that kinda stuff."

Katie looked confused, "Are you sure?"

Kristy nodded and turned to me, "What do you want to know first?"

I was so overwhelmed by what had just happed I could barely get out, "Max."

Kristy half smiled, "I figured that."

"OOHHH! Can I help?" Katie asked.

"Sure, why not."

"Okay." Katie said. "To put it simply Max is a vampire with possession issues."

I shuddered, "Vvvampire?"

"Yep." Kristy agreed.

"You guys aren't vampires right?"

"Oh, hell no!" Katie exclaimed, "Being a vampire sucks, no pun intended."

I could not believe what I was hearing. "But you said your stab wounds healed within two hours."

"I'm a werewolf stupid." Katie said cruelly.

I looked at Kristy with a worried expression.

"Don't worry I'm human." Kristy said.

I shook my head and returned my gaze to Katie, "But you were with Max."

"Following a vampire has its advantages."

"Like?"

"You get to eat the scraps."

I shuttered.

Kristy snorted, "You really are a dog aren't you Katie?"

Katie smiled wide showing her perfect white teeth, flashing against the contrast of her dark red lipstick.

"Okay…" I said shakily, "Why is he after you?"

"He thinks I belong to him, like I'm part of his property."

"Why?"

"Because, I had a bit of a slip up."

Katie snickered, "Go on, tell him what it was."

Kristy looked at the floor in shame, "I told him I was in love with him."

My eyes widened and I felt hurt some how. "What?"

"For the record, I was thirteen and I had no idea what I was getting myself into!"

Katie stood up and started twirling and hopping around the room, "So they dated for awhile and then she met me. I told her what he was and it didn't really bother her… at least until she found him in her house with blood all over him and her parents dead on the floor."

Kristy turned away and shut her eyes trying to fight back tears. "He killed them because they didn't want us to get married."

Katie sat next to her and hugged her, "Max became obsessed with Kristy. He wanted to marry her even though she was only thirteen."

Kristy looked like she was about to spiral into a sobbing fit so I decided to change the subject, "Okay… maybe we should switch to another topic." I said.

Katie nodded and began to explain who Lady Jaclyn was. She said that Lady Jaclyn took Kristy in after Max killed her parents. She protected her and treated her like a grand-daughter. Kristy had been running from Max for two years.

"She even took me to New York for my birthday." Kristy smiled at the memory.

Katie sat next to me and whispered, "Did he say anything about a job undone?"

"Yeah." I whispered back.

"He was talking about the wedding. He plans to kidnap Kristy and force her to marry him."

I shook my head; this guy is really fucked up. He's worse than Johnny! And that's saying something!

"Well!" Katie said as she clapped her heads together, "I need to go back to that stupid hotel and get my stuff."

"Hurry back!" Kristy called as Katie walked out the door.


My dad got back before Katie did. He got a taxi ride home and stumbled in the door drunk off his ass.

"Todd! Get me a beer out of the fridge!" he yelled as he flopped on the couch.

I walked up to him, "Don't you think you've had enough to drink tonight?"

He stood up and smacked me hard across the face, "I'll say when I've had enough to drink boy! Now get me a god damn beer!"

I covered my throbbing cheek with my hand, "You'll die if you drink too much beer dad!"

He hit me again, this time harder. I gasped and spit blood out of my mouth. I didn't even notice Kristy standing in the doorway.

She ran up to my dad, "Mr. Casil stop! You need to calm down!"

He smacked her hard and she fell to the floor, "What I need is a beer bitch!"

I looked at Kristy on the floor staring horrified at my dad. My face felt hot and I could feel the anger growing. I jumped on my dad and wrested him to the floor. Both of us punching and kicking. I hit him and he hits me right back, eventually he got on top of me and started wailing on me.

Kristy pushed him off me and in the same quick move shoved him out the door. After she closed and locked the door she ran to my side.

"Oh my God, Todd are you okay!"

"I'm fine…" I choked out.

She ran out of the room and came back with a first-aid kit. She walked me to the couch and started putting bandages on me. Her hair smelled sweet, and her hands were so soft on my skin…


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