Here's chapter 2! I don't own Sonic, but I do own the Western counterparts. Hope this is better than the old chapter 2. The Sonic characters portray the Western people like they do in Sonic and the Secret Rings and the Black Knight.


A long, long, ago back when everyone rode on horses and carriages, Indians ruled the plains, and the west was still wild, Sun-nic the 2nd (portrayed by Sonic) was moving from the east to the west to a little town called Green Hill Town. He wore denim pants, a blue long shelved shirt, and black chaps. He also had a white hat on and brown boots. He was carrying a sack filled with possessions. It was later morning and the town was in at the edge of the prairie. If you kept going you hit dusty grounds. Little did he know that the little town had big problems. The town was in debt to Edgar the Kid (portrayed by Eggman). He was the supposed mayor and sheriff, but all he did was tax the town heavily and that resulted in lost deeds. The town also had a group of thieves to worry about too. They were called the Babylon Thieves (portrayed by the Babylon Rouges). They kept stealing their goods and money. Most of the townspeople think that they were working for Edgar the Kid.

As soon as Sun-nic was about to enter the town he met a troubled two-tailed fox (portrayed by Tails). The fox was wearing denim pants and white boots with red on the backs. He had a red plaid shirt on and an orange bandana. "Well, howdy little fellow," Sun-nic said. "What's your name?"

"I am not LITTLE!" The two-tailed fox exclaimed, "I happen to be the deputy of this town!"

Sun-nic had a disbelief look on his face, but quickly said, "Really? Sorry about that. What's your name?

The deputy looked at him sadly and said, "You'll laugh."

He chuckled and said, "No, I won't! Mine is a whole lot funnier."

"How?" The deputy asked.

"I'll tell you how," Sun-nic said, "My name is Sun-nic the 2nd, but just call me Sun-nic."

The deputy of Green Hill Town didn't laugh. "I don't think it's funny," The deputy said, "In fact it's better than the whole townspeople's names put together."

"You're the first person who didn't laugh," He said. Then he asked, "Now what's your name?"

"My name is Deputy Tommy Two-Tailed," The deputy said proudly, "but you can call me Tommy."

"That's a very fine name, Tommy," Sun-nic said. They shook hands.

"You want to go to the Saloon to meet some of the town's folk?" Tommy asked.

Sun-nic smiled and replied, "Be glad to."

They started to walk in through the gate before Tommy said, "Oh, I forgot to say welcome to Green Hill Town."

"This should be interesting." Sun-nic thought. They started making their way through the town and to a run down, wooden building.


I hope you liked it! The story will get better and longer. I promise! PLEASE REVIEW AND NO FLAMES!