YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've got six reviews so far!!!! I"m so happy you guys! Thanks!

Here is my thanks to all the replies I got:

faxnesslover: Thanks! I was wishing it was going to be interesting!!!!!
Seraphina611572: You sure are hyper!!! Hope you really like my story!!!!
Jasper winked: Me neither! I know a brief idea, but the details?? Not really! Hope you'll think it's interesting!
4EvaInHim: Just to reassure don't worry I won't. Thanks by the way! I'll post our story probably sometime this week, that sound good?
MaxRideFreak: Thanks!!!!! You sure a good sport! I won't ask you, but I wanted the magic part for a specific chapter, but it'll play a great part. Hope you'll like it.

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Pebble: Awww, sucks for you and your homework. Try to find time to update your story!

Okay, often with the replies, but now I've got too do my disclaimer: I DON'T OWN MAXIMUM RIDE CHARACTERS OR IDEAS FROM THE DRAMAS!!!!!!

Okay, here's a new character!

Benjamin Brown(Benjie):
Ummm, okay, I don't really know what to say about him, and he won't be a major character, but let's put it this way, Benjie is one of the good guys, if he ever needs to come in play, then you'll know he's good!
Age: 17, high school junior
Soulmate: Hmmmm, do you want to know?????

Okay, one last remark befor the next chapter! I"m going to be writing "quotes", that I've made up, and by which I follow! They'll be at the end of the chapters! Hope you like them!

NOTE: If you didn't read the previous chapter, you must, because you won't know what's going on!

Chapter One: Out with the Old, In with the New

Max's POV

Have you ever heard of the phrase, "Out with old, in with the new?" Well, I sure have have, and I wish my life could be just like that. All my life, I"ve been stuck with my brothers and sisters in a huge mansion, that makes us seem like dolls in a doll house. You would think my life would be perfect, but it's much more like jail. I really want to get out of this house, that's why I do martial arts, singing, guitar, cross country, dancing, and swimming classes, just so I can be outside for more time. My mom is perfect in every way possible, but my dad, Jeb, he's just a workoholic. All he likes to do is work, and work, and work. Other than that, he cares about money, money, and ... come on you can guess it, MONEY!

Ugh, my stupid life is sooo boring, that I feel like running away, but I've got no where to go. So, I signed up for this Acting School for Talented Individuals, and today I got my acceptance letters. Surprisingly enough, I figured out that Mom knew about this all along, and that she signed up all of my brothers, and sisters for the same school, and she contacted all my friends, and so know I guess all of us are going to this Talent school of acting. I can't wait!

Everyone of my friends and family, are going to come to my house today for a sleepover- getting ready to leave party! Even though I'm no fan for parties, I love hanging with my friends. So, my friends are going to pack most of their stuff at home, but they'll be bringing some extra stuff, and we're going to party. Don't worry, my mom allows it, and she told me that Feb isn't going to be home tonight either! I'm just soo happy today!! Then, tomorrow morning, mom says she'll have a bus ready for all of us, and we'll be heading to Florida for this amazing school!

Oh jeez, it's 6 already, they should be here soon! Hmm, I just realized I gave you a Nudge speech! Soory Nudge, but normally I don't talk this much, oops, I guess I'm too excited! I sure can't wait! Ding Dong! Looks like someone's here, I wonder who?!

When I reached the door, I opened it up to see Nudge running at me, along with Georgie, and Fang right behind her! Hmm, I should have known it would've been them first, their always first here to my house for anything!

"Hey Guys!," I said!

"Hi Max! Guess what! I haven't found what I want to wear tomorrow. Oh, I can't wait for tomorrow, can't you? I'm soo hyper right now, I coulds probably run to China! Oh, China is such a cool place isn't it? I wish I could go to China, but now now, we're going to Florida to attend the talent school. Oh, Max, have you been making cookies? I know when you're excited, you're always making cookies. Oh, that's really weird, is cookies the only thing you know how to make? I heard from Angel once saying that you cn't make anything else besides cookies! Oh, that's a Umph!" Oh my god, thank god Georgie covered Nudge's mouth, otherwise Nudge would go on and on about who knows what!

"Hey, George! That wasn't very nice of you! Would you like someone closing their hands over your mouth when you were talking?"

"Um, obviously not, but you, Nudge, are an exception, you talk too much, and sometimes you never stop, so we need to make you stop. How many times do I need to keep telling you that?"

"Oh, sorry, I'll try to stop, but you know me, I love talking!!! Don't you Georgie, talking is like the only way you can express yourself openly, oh Hi Angel, MAx can I go play with Angel! I just love playing..."

"Yeah, sure go ahead Nudge, just don't talk too much!" Jeez, Nudge, and her motor mouth! She never knows when to stop!

"Hey Max?" Oh, guess he hasn't really talked much has he, I almost forgot he was here!

"Yup, what'd you want Fang?" If you didn't that was Fang, then I guess you didn't really catch on!

"Oh, I was just wondering, Are we first again?"

"Yup, but Krissy and Serena(if you didn't know, I changed Sarah to Serena because of internal problems! Get used to it!), should be coming in like...*catch my watch*... 5 or 7 minutes."

"Ok." Hmmm, Fang really need to stop having those one word answers, they get boring after a while.

Not knowing what to do, I went into the kitchen to get the cookies I was baking. Yes, Nudge was right, whenever I get excited, I bake cookies!

"So, you actually baked cookies, didn't you?"

"Wah!," I turned around to see Fang standing right behind me. "Gosh Fang stop scaring me like that! It isn't nice!"

"Oh I'm sorry, I didn't mean to scare you, did I hurt your feelings?"(if you didn't hint onto the sarcasm then too bad for you!)

"No, no you didn't, how can I possibly be mad at Fang???" Fang, you see, he's my best friend, but then again you would think we were brothers and sisters because of how close we are. Occasionally, we fight about stuff, but then afterwards, we both apologize, and say how stupid that arguement went, and it was a waste of time. That's how cool Fang and I are, we understand each other sooo much that we trust our lives with each other. i know everything about him, and he knows everything about me!

"So, Max do you want to?"

"Huh, what, sorry I wasn't really listening?" oops, I'm not listening, i really need to stop doing that.

"I was going to ask you if you wanted to take the kids out into the pool, or would you rather wait for all of your friends to come, and then go." Ha, Fang, you always think ahead and look out for what I may be thinking.

"umm, I guess we should wait for the others, but if the kids want to go outside to the pool, then go ahead, just don't dunk anyone!" I'm not a fan of water, I prefer the air, but I guess the pool would be cool for now, but I do really want to wait for the others, and then go to the pool.

"Okay, then I'll tell them, but I'll come back to wait with you, that sound cool?" Hpm, Fang is always there for me, but it does get annoying.

"No, you don't have to, you can go outside if you want, Fang."

"But I'd rather not."

"oh, okay, then let's get the kids, and see if they want to go swimming."

"OF COURSE WE WANT TO!!!!!!!!" Oh, wow they were sneaking on us, I really hate that.

"Okay, gosh guys please stop sneaking on us, we aren't going to be doing whatever you want us to. See, ever since I was little, Fang's family and my family have been friends for so long, that I can't even count them, but, once we turned 12 or so, everyone's tease us that we were meant to be together for ever, that is me and Fang. But I think that's absolutely absurd, but they still believe that it's true, so whenever we're alone, they are always listening to us, wondering if anything will happen, but of course, that won't happen! "If you guys want to go swimming then get changed, and you guys should know where the pool is, right?"

I got a various responses of "yups" "yeahs" and "rights". "Okay ghuys, have fun, I'll be waiting for everyone else to come!" With that, they all run to get their swim stuff, and were out the back door before I knew it.

"Oh, wow they sure love to go to the pool!" Fang, saying, slighty amused.

"Yeah, I'm sure they..."

Ding Dong I guess someone else is here! I opened the door, and in cam Krissy, Serena, Sera, Pebble, and Kyle come in.

"Oh wow, Krissy I thought you were going to bring Serena and Kyle, what's with the party?!"

"Hello to you to Max. Well, Sera and Pebble needed a ride, and so I offered them one, isn't that ok?"

"No, that is totally not okay Krissy, you are only allowed to bring two people with you, and no one else." *hint sarcasm*

"oh, I'm soooo sorry, I really didn't know!" *hint: more sarcasm*

"Okay, can we please stop it with the sarcasm, it's soiunding a little too cheesy." If you don't know who that was, guess it's... Sera!!

"Oops, sorry Sera, okay do you guys want to head backdoors, the others are in the pool, but I'll still be waiting for Will and Michael, do you guys want to wait?"

"Nope, not really, we'll head outside, is that okay with you Max?"

"Yup, go ahead Sera and Pebble, are you guys going?" I was referring to Krissy, Kyle, and Serena.

"Yeah, I'll go with Sera and Pebble." That's Serena.

"Okay, how about you two?" Krissy looked like she was going to answer, but Kyle butted in first.

"No not really, going outside with a ton of girls, ugh I don't really want to."

"oh, okay, sounds like you Kyle, wanna wait with Fang?"

"Sure, sounds good." With that Kyle went to go talk to Fang.

"Hey, Kyle, wait a second, wait for me I wanna talk to Max for a sec, is that okay?"

"Yeah sure go ahead, I'll wait here." Awww, Krissy and Kyle are so good together, they really understand each other.

"What is it that you wanted Krissy?"

"Well, I think I should start with the bad news first."

"What's the bad news?"

"Well..."

Oh no, a cliffy! Sorry guys, I really wanted a cliffy, so review and I'll post the next chapter sooner!

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For the quotes, I'll start next chapter!