Mongol's Vengance

by Dragon-Sigma

After the fall of the Soviet Union, Lithuania and Poland leave a world meeting and wander into the wilderness. There they discover a anarchist plot. A plot that could work in their favor...if they accept the means used to achieve it.

5. Rewrite?

Hello to my readers! I'm thinking of rewriting parts of this story when I get the chance, but I'd like to know what you think. Are the Nations in-character? Do you like the idea of the story?

I might also change the title to "What They Are In The Dark", which is what I called it on my Deviant-Art account.

I'm planning on doing some small changes to the beginning, and then maybe do some major changes to the middle and end.

Thanks for waiting, and please comment!

- Sigma