I know I had a few errors in this story, and got some of the names wrong, so I apoligize. I hope you liked it, though!
Anyway, I am making a second part to this story called 'Cats of Springclan Pondmist'
It will be from Pondmist's point of view. There will be much more mystery and action in this one.
Here is a little sneak peek of it:
She backed up, "I'm sorry, it's just... I want my old life back! I want to work in the medicine den again and I want to have Shadow by my side again... And I miss being around my kits..."
"Too bad!"
"You dont know how it feels to lose so much!" She shouted in a shakey voice, her eyes began to water.
"For starclans sake, get over it!" I spat. The smoke began to get thicker and I could hear warriors shouting and giving orders now. "Lets just go." I grumbled. But she just stood there. "We need to get out of here! Come on!"
"Not we. You." She murmured, a heavy hot breeze blew, making the pretty she-cat's fur blow.
"What are you talking about?" I yelled.
"I am a disgace to all warriors!" She yelled, clenching her teeth.
"Just a little more training..."
"No."
"No?"
"I'm not meant to be a warrior. But I lost my role as a medicine cat... I dont belong here, Pondmist. I'm leaving." Then, she turned away and walked off.
"Wait!" I shouted. She stopped and turned around. "Please come back..."
"Why should I?"
"You'll be leaving so much behind..."
"Like what? My kits who wont remember me? My leader who took away my part in this clan? You, who drove me to this?" She murmured in a shakey voice. Huge flames began to form. I froze. I didnt know what to say... Maybe she was right. She had nothing here. Then, she ran off.
"Fine!" I hissed, "Leave! Your hopeless!" I spat as loud as I could so she could here. And as she ran, a tree began to fall. And she was heading right towards it without noticing. "No!" I shouted. But it was too late, the tree had fallen, and crushed her. I stood, shocked. Everything was over... This was the end for her.