My fiance thinks I am looking at wedding dresses; ). I am so lame. I asked him to buy my Eclpse ticket and he glared at me and left the rrom mumbling something about me loving Jacob and Edward and Seth more. And it was storming real bad, so he wouldn't let me leave. So I stole his laptop and a couple of brpwnies. Now, I am writing this, and he is over there snoing. Lol.
Since he would not let me leave, I said he was a good boyfriend. He does not believe me. When you review to tell me how good or bad this is, please give your opinino. Ttyl.
Disclaimer: I am not Stehanie Meyer, so I don't own Twilight. I do, this plot. And a pretty engagement ring!
BPOV-
I was holding Vera in my arms, and Heathers tiny little hand was in my other. I had all three bags thrown across my shoulder.
''Bella?,'' I here a voice ask.
I turned and saw Benjamin Davie.
Benjamin Davie was an ex-boyfriend. He had smooth, dark skin, and big bown eyes. He had short, cropped black hair. He was 5;7, and muscular.
He still had those same, big, black glassses. He was wearing a yellow dress shrit, and a blue and white agyle sweater dress. He had on basic kaki slacks.
'Benjamin Davie?,'' I asked, shocked.
''Bella Platt,'' he smiled,''long time no see.''
He hugged me, and I hugged him back.
''So how have you been,'' he asked as he took a step back, all the while looking me over.
''Well...I'm not Bella Platt. It's Bella Cullen, now.''
But not for long, I added in my mind.
''I see you have kids,'' he smiled.
''Yes. This is Heather and Vera Emily,'' I smiled as I discussed the joys of my life.
''Theyre gorgeous, just like their mother,'' he smiled.
I blushed.
''Ya ready, babe?'' I heard a voice say.
I looked behind Benjammin and saw a pretty wman. She had smooth, pale skin, and big brown eyes. She had red lipstick, long, wavy brown hair, and long legs. Like a prettier version of me, some would say. She was wearing a tight yellow dress and green stilettoes.
'Sure. Oh. Bella. This is Holly,'' he smiled.
''Hi,'' she said in a nasally voice.
''Uh, hi,'' I smiled awkwardly.
''Well, I've got to go. I'll see you around, Bella,'' he said before they turn and walked away.
''Well...awkward,'' I smiled.
I walk out to catch cab, seeing as I lef my car in Forks.
And I am brought out of reality by a large, painful object wacking the back of my head.
I woke up about an hour later.
Where where my babies?
I looked over and saw Heather and Vera. They where sitting on a blanket, rolling a ball back and forth.
I tried to get up, but I couldn't. My legs and hands where tied to a chair. Crap why did this hafta happen? And worst of all...who had done this.
''Hey there, good lookin','' I hear a voice say. It ssounds sickengly familiar.
Out of the shadows. He had a slight bby face. Boyish, but with hint of more manish features. He had big, bight blue eyes, and short and messy blonde hair.
''Bella Cullen: the girl who broke my heart.
. The girl who was too good for me, but not to good for Edward Cullen.,'' he raved on and on.
And that is when I realized who he was: Mike Newton.
''Mike, what the hell is your poblem?,'' I asked.
''Relax, toots. I didn't hurt your kids. Oops, my mistake. Our kids,'' he corrected himself.
He stroked my cheeks.
''Excuse me,'' I asked, stunned.
''You heard me, Isabella. You are mine now. Heather and Vera-and, by the way,... Heather is quite the talker. How else would I know there names?- Are mine now. I am their father. .I'd love you every single day of forever, Isabella. By me. I love you, and I'd never know anything like this. I'd never hurt you. I'd be there for you always.,''' he whispered as he grabbed my face in both of his hands.''
What was he getting at?
I staed at him with wide eyes as he did the unexpected: dropped to one knee!
''Bella, will you mary me?''
MPOV-
Am...am I dead? I really don't know. I don't feel , taste, or smell anything. I am numb. There is nothing but darkness where I am. I can't make sense of what is going on around me. If there is anything going on around me. I am stuck in a bottomless pit of darkness. I can't get out.
'Babe! Baby, dont leave me, please,'' I heare a voice plead.
It sounds far away. Like I am walking in a tunnel, and someone is yelling at me from the end: distant and slightly feint. I vaguely recognized it.
Why had this happened to me? Was fate trying to punish me? What had I done to end up being attacked?
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep Beep. There it was again. The consistent sound of beeps. I had no clue where it was coming from. But it was kinda...reassuring. And I had no clue why.
''Fix it,'' I heard someone snarl.
It was over the tons of weight pinning me down in the darkness.
Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep. I decided to concentrate on that instead. It was moore soothing than the flurry of anxious and livid voices that where swirling around in high speed above me. They where all different. Yet all the same. I really couldn't think anymore about them. They where scaring me.
Okay. Breathe. If you can. I don't know why everything felt so heavy.
Suddenly, I was being shaken violently. My body was taken up like a rag doll, and brought back down with no regard to how tender I felt. Once, twice, again. My lungs where moving at hyper speed.
My body was rising off the sheets again. Three, four, five times.
Stop, please stop. That is what I wanted to say to whatever was making my body convulse like this. But I couldn't; It was if my mouth was non-existent.
Pressure: fluid running up my esophagus and pouring out my mouth. It burned my throat, and I could not make sense of it.
I heard an ear splitting scream. Where it was coming form, I did not know. I just wanted the horrible cry of agony to stop. To cease and desist.
I did not know where the screaming was coming from, just that it sounded close. In fact, it sounded seriously close. Almost as if the being making the terrible nose was hovering right over me itself.
And that's when I realize the scream was mine.
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