Anika: VioletFangs, you really made my day. That was a LONG review. So I counted it as 5. Here is the next chapter.

Aj: Do I get to say anything?

Anika: No!

"You're dead! How could you kill my mom?" I asked the bodies of the people whom we knew. Before they could answer me, the doors that were bolted shut flew open and in walked the flock, including Angel. The way they looked made me want to cry. Angel had burn marks all over her and looked like her usually tan skin was black from the ashes. Nudge's tongue was ripped out of her mouth and her neck was slit. Iggy's eyeballs were in backwards so that they were solid white and his neck had rope marks on it. Gazzy had eraser slashes going all around his body, the blood still showing. Dylan looked super pale, like he had no blood in his body left. He probably didn't. Fang was the worst. There was nothing wrong with him.

The problem was, if the entire flock and Dylan were gruesomely killed, then why was Fang perfectly fine. Tears were falling slowly like snow down my cheeks at their appearances. Why was Fang perfectly fine? Part of me knew that it was something bad and didn't want to know. The stubborn part of me wanted to know so that I could know if I should kick his ass or not. Fang stepped forward towards me and lifted my chin up so my eyes were looking directly into his.

"Hello Max." He greeted in a totally un-Fang like way. His voice sounded deeper and more civilized.

"What happened?" I snarled.

"They got into little accidents." He answered gesturing to the somewhat frozen flock.

"Accidents?" I questioned.

"Murder." He stated. "Grey was tired of fooling around. Angel came to her senses and left him. He gave all of us one more chance, but the clones. Flat out killed them. The flock all refused, but me. I chose the winning side and you failed everyone on the wrong side and caused all of this. You refused to join Grey and others' suffered. It's not like I ever cared about any of you though. You should have died your hair red if you wanted me to. I only care about myself. You could have chosen me, but you chose them and they died for it. You were frozen for eternity in the isolation tank." Fang usually didn't talk so much. Then, his eyes turned pitch black. There was no white, no dark brown, just black. I took a step back.

"You're. Not. Fang." I ground out. I pulled out my pocketknife that I kept with me at all times. Fang chuckled.

"You want to stab me. Go ahead. I'm not going anywhere and you're not going anywhere." He told me.

"Oh yeah," I asked. "Guess again." Then I stabbed the blade into my stomach. I only felt pain for a moment and it was more like my headache pain. I burst up from the wooden floor and hugged Fang around his neck sobbing into his shirt. He patted my back and comforted me and I could feel the hatred oozing off of Dylan. I'm not going to break voice or whoever you are. I'm Maximum Ride, the unbreakable. I told whoever kept me there mentally. Fang kissed my forehead and I actually felt like forgiving him.

I couldn't stay mad at him forever. Well, I could, but I didn't feel like staying mad at him forever. Why keep pushing him away repeatedly when the reason why I was angry with him was because he was trying to protect us. I would have done it if it meant keeping everyone safe. Sure, he was being all manly and macho like all stupid boys do thinking they're stronger then girls and thinking that I need protection, but it was still based on the better good for us. Deep, huh. I know, that's just the understanding person I am. It helps that I read his mind.

"I forgive you." I mumbled into his shirt. He raised my chin to look at his and I saw him smile. Nudge was smiling like an idiot along with Nudge 2 and Angel 2 while Dylan finally accepted that I would never feel that way about him. Both Iggy's and Gazzy's were arguing about some bet they made that we would get back together and then Angel soared into the house smiling and came up and hugged me. She told us that she destroyed RAVEN after she came out of her brainwashing and was sorry and we all lived happily ever after, never to be bothered again. The End.

If you seriously believed that last paragraph just happened then go and reread the Chronicles of Max and her merry band of mutants. This is what really happened. Sorry for tricking you there, but I'm mean. Right before I was going to tell Fang that I forgave him, the glass around us shattered and big hairy fur balls burst through the door. We all jumped up and got into fighting positions trying to cover each others' backs from the surrounding erasers around us when a voice spoke out.

"Sorry to ruin the moment freaks." Ari spat. I spun around and gaped at my dead twice half-brother. I bit my lip and made my eyes harden.

"Ari." I choked out while the rest of the flock dropped their stances slightly.

"Hi Maxie. Thought you got rid of me again six feet under, huh?" Then he wrapped a claw around my throat and dangled me off of the ground. I struggled for air and Fang tried in vain to get the deluxe refrigerator off of me.

"Ari. Don't you remember that you're on our side?" Nudge asked. My face was beginning to turn purple and I was losing consciousness from the lack of airflow. A fact Dylan and Fang were highly aware of and were punching with all their might. I felt like an idiot.

"I was never on your side, freak. I was against my dear old daddy, Itex, and the school. Your on my enemy's side now which makes you my enemy as well." He snarled.

"We're not in Jeb's fan club either, bub." I wheezed. His eyes darted towards me.

"Oh Maxie, I almost forgot about you." He flung my almost limp body at the flat screen TV and sparks danced as I fell to the ground. I struggled to get up, but his boot smashed against my chest, breaking my ribs with a sickening crack. I felt him lift me by my arm as my eyelids were struggling to stay open and I swung my leg right where it would hurt him and he winced, but flung me over to another Eraser's arms right before consciousness left me.

I woke up hurting like hell, but not opening my eyes or moving at all so I could pretend I was still unconscious. I heard the whir of a helicopter so I knew that this was way bad. I could tell that I wasn't in the air though. My eyes snapped open and I saw that I was in what looked like an abandoned town. I stood up, despite my body's refusal and saw a HUGE onyx building that was five times the size of the empire state building. In purple letters across the side was the logo, RAVEN. Oh, great. I had to take them down alone. I used my raptor vision to zoom in on the helicopter that was approaching the building and in the open door were Fang's kcolf and Gazzy and Nudge. You have one hour to save them and destroy RAVEN Maximum. Or your nightmare becomes a reality.

Aj: Dun, dun, dun!

Anika: You have a sick little mind you know that?

Aj: [Shrugs] The winner of last chapter's question was, Kris! I actually kind of like that one better to. And for the other questions, Dylan is being shown a little sympathy. Max should forgive Fang soon, Dylan is good with an evil side that wants revenge, and Max will be broken by seeing her loved ones die.

Anika: Now onto this chapter's questions. Would you read an actual novel that Aj would write if it got published? One that wasn't on fan fiction?

2. Do you think that the nightmare that Aj created was too creepy for a twelve year old?

3. Were you mad at us for tricking you guys with that one paragraph where everything is happy and perfect?

4. Would Aj be good at creating horror movies?

5. What are your predictions on what will happen in this?

Aj: LONG author's note thanks to Anika. Remember that long reviews count for more then one review depending on how long it is. I require eight now. If it is longer then VioletFang's last one then the next chapter will be dedicated to you. See ya' next time! –Aj.