teaser below but read this anyway...
Yeah, I've kind of given up on this story after reading PLAGUE and deciding to switch from Caine being my fav character to Dekka's after Caine was a right… well… to Diana and because Dekka was really brave when… well- I don't really want to give plots away… But now I'm totally Dekka & Brianna all the way…
If enough people tell me to keep writing I'll continue or something… I don't really know what to do write for the next chapter, it was going to be something about Caine realizing he had emotions, Sam being angry, Dekka braking up some sibling arguments, Phoebe stomping around for hidden reasons and threatening to leave… But I don't really know so, any ideas?
I don't know what to do with Caine- should I leave out PLAGUE plots or include it, all the horrible plot lines…*shudder and never look at lady bugs the same*? That would be good 'cause of Dekka plots, but bad 'cause of Diana and Caine... ahem… plot lines…
So review if you ever want to read about the big plan to bust Astrid out and find Diana while sorting something big out for Phoebe that will create shocked gasps from all 18 of you that actually bothered to review.
And on that matter, to you who didn't review- you will never be forgiven- Ever- Unless you review, in which case I'll put you back on the Christmas card list.
I have ideas on what the next chapter could be, I've planned it various ways, but hey…
I don't like bribing for reviews- but none of you ever review, so:
5 more reviews and I'll think about continuing…
10 more reviews and I'll write one of my normal sized (and I'll admit- it they're tiny) chapters…
15 more reviews and I'll write three times that…
20 more reviews and I'll throw in a big fight scene and finish with a jaw dropping cliff hanger…
I have other things I could be doing like drawing or revising for my mock GCSEs that will put me in smart people sets, so review or die- Here's that teaser anyway…
...Everything...
Caine blinked the water out of his eyes- even he didn't know if they were tears or just the pouring rain that was soaking him from head to toe while turning his hair into something that vaguely resembled a mop- if that mop happened to be black and chopped up emo style by the freak base's resident hair dresser (or just the crazy chick with the scissors) Astrid Ellison.
But Astrid was gone now- and his twin had very nearly killed him for it, not that Caine was to blame. He was always to blame. For everything- and most of the time he was right to be blamed, he didn't mind that. It was to times he wasn't wrong, the times he was trying to be the good guy but ended up being the scapegoat, which he hated.
The edge of the roof beneath his feet, he could slip in the flooding rain but couldn't care less, he glared over the side into the wide night full of worthless people that never had a reason to stop smiling or stop thinking about shoes and cheerleader looks or a reason to stop pondering aimlessly when the next football match was on.
Resident bad guy Caine- that was all he was and ever would be no matter how many mutant winged girls with palest blonde hair and brightest green eyes tried to change him. No-one was on his side now. Not one person at all. None of them. Nobody.
All his life the same story: Mrs Temple, his adoptive parents, "friends", half a town full of children- Sam, Astrid, Dekka, Edilio. All abandoned Caine, the freak that deserved no-one to like him.
And now the one person he had loved, the one person he swore never to give up on had given up on him.
As he stood in the rain he realised one thing- freaks like Caine Soren don't need anybody.
The plan was suicidal- but any other way wouldn't be fun. Caine Soren would prove himself- but nobody was going to like what he was about to do.
He let the darkness of the night air take him as he stepped over the edge with the cool air in his soggy hair as he plummeted.
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