Hi Guys,
Sorry this isn't an Update. I just wanted to know what exactly a BETA is. Yes I know they correct your work etc. But do I have to email them or what? There is a BETA READER page and I understand that but I was just wondering if you had to email them to ask if they want to be your BETA...? As you can see I'm pretty new at this website and a bit more than confused. So I will be thrilled if anyone would like to explain what a 'BETA READER' is and/or offer up your services. Obviously as I explained last chapter that my grammar, punctuation and spelling is lacking, therefore I am going to get a BETA.
I thought it might be a little annoying for me to ask something off you awesome people and not reward you guys in some way. So here is a taster for Chapter 4 :)
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T-M has very little inappropriate language.
I traced his lower lip, making him shiver. I inwardly smiled. His tousled brown hair hung justabove his eyelashes, he was adorable. Defiantly the most amazing guy I have ever met. He had his trade mark luring smile, which took my breath away. I was staring intensely into his green orbs just thinking. Thinking over my problems and such. I felt comfort in him eventhough I've only know him a week. Studying me, he decided to speak his thoughts.
"Your so beautiful. I feel like you've already owned a piece of my heart in these past couple of days" He whispered. My heart swelled and my skin tingled in response to his voice. Nobody has made me ever feel this way. I felt wanted and... Loved. Tears brimmed my eyes as I thought I might be falling for him. It hurt to even think about leaving him soon, made me just want to curl up and die. Noticing my sad mood he cooed at me and stroked my hair.
I looked at him and my barriers around my heart broke. The flood of emotions was over powering, overwhelming. Tenderly I touched the now fading red mark across his left cheek. Tracing the red raw edges of the injury slowly knowing it would get a response. He shuddered beside me and gently pulled me towards him, making us closer. Moving my face also nearer his. We were now merely inches apart. I could feel and taste his mint breaths on my face.
"Kiss me..."