I have took some time to write some of this story and I thank the two people pointed out my mistake in chapter 8 I edited it straightaway and I'm sorry for my. I've got this new software that works by you just speaking into it and it writes what you say it's a lot easier than typing the chapter.

I'll also try and update more seeming as it will be a lot easier to write the chapters however it will be just as difficult to think of what will happen in each chapter I do have an idea of what's going to happen in the story but it's just putting it into words and actually putting them into scenes is a bit difficult for me.

I do not own warriors Erin Hunter does and I doubt I ever will.

So here's chapter 9.

Chapter 9

Moonpaw padded towards camp, she couldn't shake the image of Tigerstar watching her train out of her head and she knew when she got back to camp that her brother would want to know what was wrong with her, as she just couldn't act as though she was fine as she wasn't and she was so scared to go to sleep to see Tiger star walking in her dreams in the place where no stars shine the place of nightmares.

As she padded into camp she instantly felt as though someone was watching her closely, she looked up expecting to see yet another ghostly image of Tigerstar but there in the middle of camp near the fresh kill pile. She still hadn't figured out why he would look at her, no, he didn't look, he stared at her. Even though he was blind his blue eyes looked as though he could actually see her physically. She hated him staring at her, she hadn't done anything that might make him stare at her, she didn't look funny, she wasn't different than any other cat, well, she had been reborn but she hadn't told anyone this. So why was it that Jayfeather stared at her like he was. It really made her fur crawl. She stopped thinking about her annoyance for a moment and remembered that Jayfeather was her son, well she was in her previous life, and even though he wasn't technically her son now she still knew that she shouldn't be thinking anything bad of him, she should be trying to fix what damage she caused to her family in her previous life. Moonpaw took a deep breath, and began to pad towards Jayfeather.

"Hey Jayfeather!" meowed Moonpaw.

"Hello Moonpaw!" Jayfeather answered politely

"I just came to see if you needed any help organising herbs, or maybe help you collect some heads from the forest?" Moonpaw asked.

"No it's okay, you wouldn't be any good at finding herbs anyway seeming as you haven't even been in the medicine cat den!" Jayfeather answered quite rudely.

"Actually, I've had quite a lot of experience with herbs, so it would be easy for me to help you find some herbs!"

"What are you talking about? You don't even know the difference between a comfrey leaf and catmint!" Jayfeather meowed, looking down at the apprentice with confusion in his blue sightless eyes. This made Moonpaw freeze, and realised she had just made a big mistake.

"Errrr...well...you see...Sunpaw dared me to come over here and ask if you needed some help. Yeah, I know it's a bit of the stupid dare but that's Sunpaw for you, thinking something is hilarious when it really isn't!" Moonpaw meowed, covering up her mistake.

"Well then, where's Sunpaw? Surely he'd be watching this, but I can't scent him in the camp." Jayfeather asked, and by the way he is tail tip was flicking back and forth showed that he was annoyed and obviously knew that Moonpaw was lying to him.

"He probably ran off, you know, so that if I told on him he wouldn't get told off." Moonpaw answered.

"Well, when he comes back tell him that you both need to start respecting cats with a higher rank than you, especially the medicine cat." And with that the medicine cat stalked away, still not seeming satisfied with the answers he had got from Moonpaw. Moonpaw let out a breath of relief, that wasn't as bad as some of the conversations she would have had with Jayfeather when she was leafpool, but it still wasn't a pleasant conversation. Maybe Lionblaze would be easier to talk to, as he was Moonpaws father. Just then a drop of rain fell onto Moonpaws head, she lifted her head to look at the sky, and she watched the grey clouds moving across the sky, becoming thicker and thicker, a storm was on its way.

Moonpaw sat in the apprentices den, peering through the entrance waiting for the evening patrol to come back. She wanted to talk to Lionblaze as soon as she could; she was going to ask him about his kin, and mainly about his mother and father. Moonpaw found it quite weird that her son from her previous life was her father now. But Moonpaw knew that she wasn't technically still physically his father but she still found it a bit odd. Sunpaw was sitting in his nest, trying to get warm and dry as he had gone hunting and he couldn't come back until he had caught enough to feed the Elders and the Queens. This meant he had to hunt in the rain. There were only two other apprentices in the den, Nightpaw and Hazelpaw. Moonpaw didn't know what to do about Hazelpaw, as soon as she found out that she was being trained by the dark forest she had moved her nest to the other side of the den. She wanted to stop her going to the dark forest but she didn't know how, but maybe if she told her the tales about what Tigerstar did when he was living she would be smart enough to stop going there. She knew there were many others being trained by the dark forest, and a few were in her clan, there could even be more that she didn't know about. Moonpaw didn't know who she could trust anymore,

"Moonpaw, why don't you just go to sleep, you can talk to Lionblaze tomorrow!" Sunpaw meowed drowsily from his nest.

Moonpaw reluctantly returned to herr nest and closed her eyes.

"Goodnight Sunpaw!" She meowed.

"Goodnight Moonpaw." He replied.

Well… she knew one cat she could trust.

I was going to add this chapter two weeks ago but whenever I went to edit the story it came up with a message saying there was an error. But I looked online and found a way to get around it :p

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