Alternative chapter 5
"I've got a surprise for you after this next test. Not a fake tragic surprise like last time. A real surprise, with tragic consequences and real confetti this time. The good stuff, our last bag. Part of me is going to miss it but a the end of the day it was just taking up space." GLaDOS said as Chell entered the test. The next test would be the last one.
Chell shot a portal on the wall that the light bridge was at and another up by a button. She walked through and pressed it. A cube fell further down the light bridge. She picked it up, jumped off the bridge, and put it on the button underneath the door. Then she shot a portal right beside the door and walked through the one on the ground. That test was easy.
As she stepped into the elevator Wheatley popped out of the wall where the light bridge had been. He was to late. Chell walked out of the elevator to the final test. Cake was sitting on the table in front of her. She couldn't believe it. That was when neurotoxin flooded the room.
She choked silently. "No! Nonononono! Oh, no." Wheatley yelled from the observation window. The smell of burning came from up there as GLaDOS set him on fire. Chell stopped moving and confetti exploded in the room.
"It's just like I told you as you killed me, your passing would not be mourned and guess what, it isn't. In fact it is the exact opposite. To say again so that you would understand you won't be missed." GLaDOS said laughing. She moved her body into the incinerator and got right to testing the cooperative robots.
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