Actual story (horrible as it is) – regular font

My commentary – bold

Few notes:

1. Sexy sex scene ahead! Prepare your trashcans if you have a weak stomach!

2. I'm not in the best mood, so I'm being extra bitchy and cursing a lot. Sorry I have a horrible temper. Enjoy anyway!

3. So whenever Tara's tributes to Satanism are entered, they don't actually show up. I'm gonna play around with spacing to see if they do show up (don't want to lose parts of the story ;) )

Chapter 4.

AN: I sed stup flaming ok ebony's name is ENOBY nut mary su OK! Okay, you heard the illiterate being! Ebony's name is Enoby, not Mary Sue. Since that's bullshit and Tara can't spell, her name's Enoby Sue. DRACO IS SOO IN LUV NO, HE'S IN LOVE WITH HARRY, DAMMIT! wif her dat he is acting defrent! Not possible. dey nu eechodder b4 ok!...So they knew every otter in the world before they met? That's what I got out of it, that's what it shall be.

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"DRACO!" I shouted. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?" Umm…*scrollscrollscroll* He's in the Forbidden Forest, so maybe hhe's trying to get you expelled? Or better yet killed? Ooooh, let's hope for the best!

Draco didn't answer but he stopped the flying car and he walked out of it. I walked out of it too, Falling to your death.curiously.

"What the fucking hell?" I asked angrily.

"Ebony?" he asked.

"What?" I snapped. Nice way to to act towards someone you "luv."

Draco leaned in extra-close and I looked into his gothic red eyes (he was wearing color contacts) which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness THEY'RE CONTACTS, YOU DUMB BITCH! and then suddenly I didn't feel mad anymore. Okay then.

And then… suddenly just as I Draco kissed me passionately. …Wait, what? Draco climbed on top of me To punch your face in? and we started to make out keenly against a tree. He took of my top and I took of his clothes. I even took of my bra. Oh. My. God. 'S long as you keep your leather panties on, I'm fine. Then he put his thingie In this case, his fist. into my you-know-what In this case, her face. and we did it for the first time. YOU WHAT?

"Oh! Oh! Oh! " I screamed. I was beginning to get an orgasm. …Eeeeeeewwww…! We started to kiss everywhere and my pale body became all warm. Eeeeeeeeew! And then….

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!" Well, Draco's being raped, so get the SVU in here to arrest her. This can't possibly be consentual.

It was….Dumbledore! NO! Okay, no! Just no! You can ruin Draco, you can ruin Hogwarts students in general, but ruining Dumbles just crosses that line! I'm gonna draw pictures of you and kill them.

BAD TARA! NO!

Sorry bout my temper, folks! I'll control it better next time!