TheDarkestShinobi: I like the idea but I don't really like the way it came out. Regardless I hope you enjoy.

P.S. if you have a better name for the scene tell me because I couldn't really come up with one.

Now I'm sorta bored and for once don't have anything due soon. I will be doing most of the request now. If you have one, sending it in today means it will probably get done now.

Don't hesistate!

Scene 5: Discipline

Elliot smiled as he watched the competitors fight each other.

It was the first round and he had been one of the first to fall, it didn't matter to him right know. He had been good enough to get here in the first place and he had been treated to see some of the most elegant of fighters preform.

One had stuck in his mind more than the others.

Her beautiful cooper hair had flowed behind her ever fluid movements. She moved with such grace that every eye could do nothing but watch as every person found themselves entranced with her.

Kasumi was her name.

She kept her dignity and resolve as she fought, the only sound she made was a small cry when she let down her guard and was struck. Elliot flinched with her. She had jumped up in the air to catch the second kick and sent her opponent flying and evidently that was the end of the battle.

Then, someone did the impossible,

And upstaged her.

She was elegant in every way.

First the aesthetics, her long black hair was perfectly straight. The beads in the front were perfect and her eyes were innocent with an underlying tone of passion. Her cheeks were high on her face and ever so smooth. Her lips were full and shiny and he wanted to kiss them.

Her style of fighting looked like a dance. It was fluid in dodges and hits and counters. Steps seemed planned as if the very fight had been choreographed and practiced long before the fight began. It was a magical technique. She was magical.

What stood out the most to him was how disciplined she was.

It was something he always admired.

As a martial artist he had always had to be in control of himself and he had been very disciplined. It annoyed him to be in the presence of people who had no control over themselves. And he absolutely hated those who didn't show respect.

So when she took a blow to her side without so much as a sound his interest peaked.

When he noticed that every move afterwards was just as precise as before she was struck he was intrigued.

She lost.

She had been thrown out of the ring and hit the wall hard enough that it took her a few minutes to start to breathe normally. Her opponent had taunted her. Said something about angering the Mugen Tenshin but Elliot paid her no mind. She had looked up at the woman who taunted her and said nothing. She shifted her weight forward and stood up perfectly straight. Elliot knew she was in pain but she said nothing. He was amazed at the fact that she was still so… poised.

Then she shocked everyone watching by bowing to her opponent.

Her eyes didn't even hold any negative emotions, if anything it was a look of respect she gave the other.

She took her loss in stride and turned to walk back into the other room. She would be coming back out in a few minutes.

"Ayane is the WINNER!" a voice boomed and Elliot shifted. He couldn't care less about Ayane, he was curious as to the other woman who had lost, yet still carried the grace of someone who won.

He walked over to the door she was supposed to exit from and waited for her. He ignored the other fights and simply waited for her. He would wait for as long as it took her to compose herself and come out.

Because he really wanted to know her name.