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Let's start shall we!
4 days later(Natsu P.O.V)
Yes, it's been 4 days since I last saw her eyes. Those chocolate eyes that was always smiling at me. Her scent that still lingered fresh on me, somehow changed. The once vanilla, choco butter, had changed to the hateful smell of the infirmary. Medicines, medicines everywhere, and all of it changed the scent I loved most of all. I miss her usual antics when me and Ice brain were fighting. Now I wasn't, I never left her side, if I did it was when I was going home, but sometimes I stayed. I never let anyone else touch her besides Mira. The rest would always visit her, asking if there were any changes. But all I said was NO.
I feel empty. Empty without her smiles,her touch. Her cute blushes whenever I came too close to her, or said some cheesy lines. She would always laugh when I got angry for her talking constantly to Gray. Saying that I was jealous. Yes I was jealous. Jealous because I couldn't stand seeing her laughing more with Ice face, than me. Her best friend. The guy that got blinded by the lie of a childhood friend. The stupid guy that slowly fell in love with her.
"Lucy... Please wake up" I whispered, clutching her hand in mine. Cold. It was cold. The beeping sound wasn't helping at all. Suprisingly the guild had those things for the patient, when they want to keep them breathing. Nothing changed, the beeping sound didn't change. It was steady. She was breathing fine, telling me that she was still alive.
"Hey Lucy, if I told you what I feel about you, would you wake up?" I asked her. I know she wasn't going to answer, but it was worth the shot. Sighting deeply I rubbed circles in her hand with my thumb. My other hand wandered to her cheek, her cold cheek. I missed how smooth and soft it was. Why didn't I see that she was saying the truth? That Lisanna was the lier, and not Lucy. Speaking of Lisanna, I talked to her a couple of times, but I didn't trust her anymore. She lied, and made everyone do this to Lucy. And all we did was run around in her palm, not seeing that Lucy had spoken the truth.
Some kind of best friend I am. A jerk. That's what I am. Maybe that's why I wasn't able to say my true feelings for her. The fact why I was so blinded by what Lisanna said. The fact I didn't stop her from leaving. The reason why we hurt her. I had hurt her. Lucy please wake up. I can't stand seeing you like this, sleeping for a long time. Not moving. Acting as if your de-
Why the hell would I think of you like that!I can't! And I won't think of you like that! Luce come back to me! I can't live without you beside me. Here beside me in my life. Forever, for an eternity. Just you and me, can't that happen? Can't you wake up soon and smile at me again.
"I'm so sorry Lucy" I whispered, clutching her hand in mine. As a tear managed to escape from my eye. I didn't care to wipe it away, because my heart was aching, shattering, torn without her.
(Below the infirmary, Fairy Tail hall)
Something doesn't seem right... Why would Midnight give Lucy back so easily? And what was up with that message he said? "Once she awakens all your horrors will come true" What on earth did Lucy ask him to do?
"Gray can you think of something?" Erza asked the ice mage that was beside him. In return she got a shrug from him.
"And it has something to do with us right?" Levi confirmed them. Which they nodded to.
"Still... Lisanna why did you do that in the first place?" Gray asked her. Lisanna was seated beside them in a table, where the other Fairy Tail members surrounded them. All eyes turned to her.
"Uh...Uhm..." Lisanna tried to start, but couldn't think of how to start it.
"Tell the truth Lisanna, we wanna know why" Mira said to her softly. Siblings they were, but Mira had kept a close eye on her since the past 4 days. The day that made them look down on Lucy.
"Errr... Because she stole you guys from me?" Lisanna started, but it came out as a question. Everyone was listening to her. Even their Master Makarov was present.
"Stole us?You do know that you disappeared a long time ago right?" Erza asked her slowly. Which Lisanna nodded to.
"So why?" Gray asked this time.
"It''" Lisanna blurted out in a straight line.
"Pardon?" Mira asked her. Everyone was confused too, they didn't get what she said. Breathing in deeply, exhaling all the air she took in.
"It's because Natsu and her was so close together..." Lisanna trailed off.
"So? you were jealous?" Levi asked her. Slowly Lisanna nodded. Making some of them scoff in disgust.
"You wanted Natsu all to yourself, was that it?" Erza asked her.
"Yes" Lisanna whispered her answer.
"Jealousy is a sin, per say envy I presume" Makarov said. Looking glumly at them. Why had he had 'children' that always longed for a loved one? Besides him being their 'parent'. Laughing to himself
Soon they turned their heads up stairs to see Natsu panicking.
"Guys!Something's wrong with Lucy!" Natsu shouted at them, then ran straight back to the infirmary.
Immediately everyone ran upstairs, waiting to see what news had Natsu wanted to convey. And it sounded bad too.
The monitor that was connected to Lucy was beeping loudly and fast. Her breathing was becoming heavy and hard. Still in her coma this was a sign. Wether she would wake up or sleep forever.
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