Sorry, just want to correct few mistake here and guess what? Next week, will post the next chapter! Give you little peek just so, you would give me more reviews kay?
Chapter 4 of Husband Problem Preview
"Interesting. Since when has MY. BAKA. belonged to someone else?"
"Just tell me, who am I to you?"
"Say, the baby belongs to who?"
Well, well, well, who want it by this week? More reviews? Thanks a lot.
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A/N
Hey everyone! I know that it's been like years since I updated my last chapter but here I am! I can't promise you that I'll be able to update every week/month but I promise you I will make sure this story will be completed, if possible, by next year. So, no worries!
Though I abandoned my Gakuen Alice stories, I still come to visit this site, not because of Gakuen Alice but because of Twilight. I am a huge fan of Twilight! Although I still read Gakuen Alice sometimes. Hey, I am still here right? Gakuen Alice still in my top five anime list!
I don't know about this but my writing style might be different now. I forgot the ideas when I wrote this story but I got awesome ideas. I have to say, after I read almost every Twilight fiction stories, I now understand what I want when I read and probably you do, too. We all want to keep the story in line—as well as reaching it out to the readers, NO OOC, understanding the gist of the story, updating regularly and most of all, we all want that romance! Haha, I am reader as well and I would try my best to achieve these!
Lastly, I might lose some of my old readers (sad case) but I hope I can gain more new ones. I would like to let you know that I write stories because I love English and I want to improve my grammar. And I hope I can meet more friends, and here, I treat you guys like my family.
Anyway, here it is. Enjoy!
This is disclaimed, all recognizable characters aren't mine.
Written by
Michiru Ichigo
Beta-reader / Credits to
Ria Lee
Previous Chapter
"Natsume, shouldn't you be here?" Mikan said on the phone with Natsume.
"Be where?" Natsume said in lazy tone.
"Maria's Love Baby!"
"What's that?" Natsume shouted curiously. Suddenly, a muffled voice was heard.
"Nat-su-me, I want more! Hurry, baby." The girl moaned. Mikan on the phone looked like she saw a ghost.
"Natsume, who's there?" Mikan said with a calm tone.
"None of your busi—" Natsume said but he was cut off mid-sentence.
"I'm sorry. It seems like you're having fun. Enjoy. Goodbye." Mikan said as she ran away from the room to her car.
End of Last Chapter
Suddenly, a guy bumped into Mikan and before Mikan fell, he held her tightly on her wrist and waist. When Mikan turned, she was shocked to see that Satoru was the one holding her. Satoru wasn't surprised at all. After all, she was the only one in the place with long brown auburn hair while sporting a long polkadot-printed maternity dress.
"Satoru? Why—" but he was interrupted by the man.
"Mikan, are you alright? Are you hurt?" said Satoru with a tinge of worry in his tone as he released Mikan from his arms. Mikan stared at Satoru for awhile, trying to register what he was talking about.
Mikan, with realization hitting her, thought, 'It been long time,the same worried look that I have always loved tosee…Natsume…'
"No, Satoru. I am alright. So, what are you doing here?"
"Well, you told me that you've got baby classes today so, I came by to see," said Satoru with a nervous look plastered on his face.
"Oh Satoru, that is so nice of you."
"I also heard that you needed a partner, right? Where is Hyuuga?"
"Well, he's…busy" said Mikan as she trying to look everywhere but Satoru. Satoru noticed something in Mikan's actions.
"What's wrong, Mikan?" said Satoru as he held both of Mikan's shoulders.
As usual, Mikan tear ducts gave up as she whispered, "He—cheated on me," and she continued sobbing as she covered her face.
"What?" shouted Satoru as the doctor came to check on the ruckus.
"Mister, this is a hospital. Could you please minimize your voice?" said the doctor as she turned to Mikan and realized that she was crying.
"Miss, are you alright?" said the Doctor as she got concerned about Mikan's disposition mainly because the brunette is pregnant and she body was trembling. Satoru answered in her behalf.
"Yes, she will be alright. And yes, I will minimize my voice. Sorry Doctor—"
"Doctor Jane" said as she offered her hand to Satoru while he released his hands from Mikan shoulder and shook hands with Doctor Jane.
"Are you joining our class for today, Miss—" said as she held her iPad with the list of participants of the classes.
"Mikan Hyuuga," said Satoru in bitter voice when he mentioned 'Hyuuga' as searched for Mikan's name on her iPad and, after a while, she finally found 'Natsume & Mikan Hyuuga'.
"Well, come to our class. It is about to start. , please bring your wife to wash up then come back?" said as she gave a smile for both of them and turn to right and went off. Satoru was staring at Mikan, they smiled when thought Satoru was .
"Come on Mikan, I'm sure that is some mistake. Why don't we join the class? After all, you've been dying to go this class since you registered," said Satoru as he smiled widely and together, they walked to the class as Mikan took a few tissues from the counter on their way to the room and wiped her tears.
"Well, as long as Satoru is here for me!" said Mikan as she smiled widely but in her heart was still full of bitterness.
After the call, Mikan is no longer talking to Natsume while the latter, as usual, is comfortable with all the silent treatment.
Nowadays, Satoru always accompanies Mikan to the baby classes. Satoru even schedules half of his time to take good care of Mikan and the baby. Mikan never asks for explanation from Natsume because Mikan doesn't want to know the truth just as Satoru doesn't want to give more thoughts or stress to Mikan.
Although Natsume, deep in his heart, misses Mikan loud voice and her touch but he thought, he never really did anything wrong. He did thought about the call, since Mikan started acting strangely but he can't think of what he had done wrong. As much as Natsume wanted to ask, he doesn't have the time to sit properly and ask plus he knew pregnant women are very emotional and he doesn't want to deal about it.
After four months, advised her husband which isn't actually Satoru—but they never plan to correct her. Anyways, advised him since pregnant women in four to five months would be more emotional and always hungry.
And one night around 4:16AM, Mikan woke up as the baby in her tummy kept on asking for food. Mikan didn't want to wake Natsume up so, she went to find some food but her appetite is now craving for cake. Mikan can't help wake Natsume up.
"Natsume?" said Mikan as she shook Natsume's shoulder. Natsume slowly opened one eye.
"What do you want?" said Natsume lazily after realizing it was Mikan as he closed his eyes once again.
"Could you please go buy cake for me?"
"Well, you got hands and legs right?"
"Well, yes?" said Mikan curiously don't understand.
"BUY YOURSELF! GET OUT!"
"But—" before she could finish the sentence, Mikan thought of Satoru so she went to call him.
"Satoru?"
"Isn't our sweet Mikan with her baby hungry?" said Satoru sweetly. Satoru always stays up late because of Mikan besides he's got project to be pass by next week.
"I am sorry—"
"It is okay, Mikan. What do you need? Cake, I assume?"
"Yes" said Mikan brightly.
"Well, that will be delivered in half an hour. If I get late for one second, you can punch me," said Satoru as he walked out of the house while grabbing his keys.
"Please be late then," said Mikan sweetly.
"Haha, alright, I'll go now,"
Exactly half an hour later, Satoru came to her house with the cake she asked. While Mikan ate the cake with Satoru wanting to do something, Natsume came out to get water and saw…
A/N
My bad.
Well, if you must know I am rushing to finish this story. I don't want to abandon this story anymore and my time is running.
If possible I wish I can finish this month but the timing was not right at all. Also, my stories must go to my beta-reader first. Well, here are some questions:
What does Satoru want to do?
What was the thing that Natsume witnessed
Is Natsume really cheating on Mikan?
If you must know, Doctor Jane is not ordinary, any reasons why?
Start reviewing! XD Reviews make my day! And I must say, without you guys, I won't be writing this story anymore. I came back here because I saw that there are new reviewers so without hesitation, I am writing again because of you guys!
LASTLY, THANK YOU SO MUCH TO MY BETA (RIA LEE) WHO FINISHED BETA ONLY FOR ONE DAY BECAUSE my last beta took ONE MONTH also haven't finish and I need to keeps asking which I really hate because it look annoyed to her as well as me. LOL
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