There's a fact about this chapter; this is actually the third version of the second chapter. The second version of chapter 2 was something a lot more clunky than this in terms of writing style and descriptions plus, the original version was a lot worse than this so here it is chapter 2 V3.
/Year: 1994 Month: undocumented Day: undocumented
It was rare to see the ward of Nerima in a state of normalcy, no aliens trying to destroy the earth with a pervert as its savior (the pervert saved the world long before this happened), no crazy martial artists passing through the ward for an obscure reason, no crazy fiancees out to marry Ranma, for one good reason he was "dead". When the fiance brigade, his family, and the Kuno family were to be informed that Ranma died from a broken neck the reactions will-
A scream that ended with a gurgle pierced through the neighborhood.
-vary.
Damn, I just somehow knew that I have to get involved sooner or later, great there was still plenty of chaos in Nerima I decided to look around following the sounds of screaming and fighting, I was about to turn the next corner on my right when a body flew past me slamming into a wall, the she didn't move after that, and I'm guessing that was Nabiki who got slammed in to the wall, She was still alive by the way I think she was telling me to run but I ignored her to face her little sister; Akane Tendo, and her eyes held a crazy look that screamed psycho, blood stained clothes and Kasumi's severed head in her left hand didn't help soften the image. (It was cute in a creepy way, don't even think of judging me because I said that OK.)
I decided to do the next best thing without anyone getting hurt, "Time freeze." as I said those two words I snapped my fingers obviously; time stopped. (Technically, its more like wrapping myself in a time bubble that would take a really long time to explain in detail, time that I don't have.) I turned to where Nabiki was and took a closer look at her wounds. One look was all I needed to know was she needed medical attention immediately, so I picked her up and ran to the nearest medical practitioner in this part of Nerima, Dr. Tofu Ono, it was pretty easy to find his office and it seems in lucky because he was inside the clinic I placed Nabiki at the door, I hope he notice's her on time. Her little sister will be hard to hold off, not impossible just hard.
I went off to where Akane was as time started to flow again. I really shouldn't reference Jo Jo's bizarre adventure for this besides, I highly doubt dropping a steam roller on top of Akane will stop her, it would just stun her for one minute at best.
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That's the new and improved chapter 2. So read, review, and move on to the next chapter.
