Guys sorry about Reid in this chapter, I have now changed it and made sure that most of the mistakes are better. I write these chapters as if they are a script sorry I'm sort of used to it.
Reid drove for a full half hour. He didn't even know where he was. He drove past a couple of speed cameras hoping it would take the picture, but nothing because he wasn't speeding. He thought to himself quietly "I wonder if I go over the speed limit, the camera will catch me." He looked at the unsub; he did nothing just kept looking forward. He then looked into the rear view mirror to look at JJ; she was looking out of the window. Reid looked to check if her seatbelt was on, it wasn't on. "Can you please put your seat belts on?" He said still looking at the rear view mirror.
"No talking!" the unsub shouted.
"Sorry it's just for safety." Reid replied.
JJ fastened her seat belt into the buckle. Reid noticed a speed camera sign and then suddenly noticed the speed camera on the left coming up. Reid knew what the speed limit was around that area, it was 30. He noticed he was doing 25. He then pressed his foot down harder on the pedal. He was now doing 50. He felt really bad for what he was doing, but it was to save his and his friend's life.
"What are you doing?" the unsub asked loudly.
Reid didn't answer. They drove past the camera just as it flashed its lens.
"You idiot, now we have to change cars again!" the unsub shouted furiously. "Pull over, now!"
Reid pulled over and the unsub got everyone out of the car and putted handcuffs on them both so that they couldn't fight him. JJ tried to run away put the unsub caught her. The unsub then held both of them and pushed them along a field.
. . .
Garcia looked at her computer screen feeling helpless. She then clicked onto a link to look at speed cameras to see if she would have luck finding Reid and JJ. She clicked on a new picture that has just been taken 10 minutes ago. She saw who the driver was, it was Reid. She quickly dialled Hotch's number.
"Hotchner." He said as he answered the phone.
"I've found Reid and JJ. I came upon a speed camera and Reid was driving." Garcia said quickly.
"Ok Garcia, where were they and when was it taken?"
"They were at Southeast of 15th street, Oklahoma City and about 10 minutes ago."
"Thanks Garcia, could you tell Derek and Emily to go because I and Dave haven't finished here yet."
"Sure thing" Garcia said just before she ended the call.
Garcia phoned Derek.
"Hey momma" He answered
"Hey Derek..."
"Oh are we just on first name basis now?"
"No, it's just..."
"What's wrong has someone upset you?"
"Derek no, it's..."
"If Kevin is being horrible to you I..."
"Derek Morgan, will you just listen to me?" Garcia shouted getting really frustrated. "I have found where Reid and JJ are and I rang Hotch and he said that you and Emily should go to the scene."
"Ok how did you find them?"
"I saw Reid on a speed camera at Southeast of 15th street, Oklahoma City."
"Ok I and Emily will go there now. Listen about just then, is Kevin being a pain?"
"No, you are." Garcia said as the phone call ended.
. . .
Reid and JJ kept walking across the field. It felt like they were walking for days. "Do we have to go any further?" Reid asked tirelessly.
"We are nearly there now so stop moaning." The unsub said.
They stopped when they approached a silver van.
"Now both of you get in the back." The unsub said calmly.
Reid and JJ did as they were told just in case the unsub did something bad. The unsub took the handcuffs of them and then they got into the van. The unsub opened the doors to the van. The unsub drove for what seemed like a whole day. They came to a sudden halt.
"Stay here I need to do something a minute." The unsub hissed as he got out of the van.
"JJ, what do you think is going to happen to us?" Reid asked
"Nothing I hope, but Spence try not to worry too much, just in case you have a panic attack or something like that."
"I will try not to."
"I wish there was a way to get to our cell phones so we can phone Hotch to come and find us."
"I know but there isn't because the doors are closed."
JJ's phone started to ring in the messenger bag.
"I wonder who that is." JJ said.
The unsub opened the doors.
"These are the people I was talking about." The unsub said to a man stood next to him.
"What and you are going to kill them just like the rest?" the man said
"Yeah, you know experiment for other killings."
"Oh right ok then."
The unsub closed the doors which left JJ and Reid gobsmacked.
"Reid don't worry the others will find us soon. Everything will be ok." JJ said whilst budging over to Reid.
"I know I just don't want to let the team down." Reid said whilst looking at the floor of the van.
"Spence listen to me" JJ said whilst holding Reid's chin up straight. "you won't let the team down, we are all proud of what you have done in the past and if that changes we will tell you, not that it will, but Reid just listen to me when I tell you this, we all love you, your like the baby of our little family, Hotch and Rossi are the mum and dad, Garcia is the auntie that spoils us all and everyone else are the kids."
Reid laughed at the last thought. "Yeah that's true. But you really mean it, your all proud of me?"
"Would I have said it otherwise?"
"No. Thanks JJ."
"It's ok." JJ said with a smile.
The van started moving again. This time there were 2 people in the front.
"Reid don't worry, everything will be alright."
. . .
"Tim, Tim, has anybody seen Tim?" A man shouted
"Excuse me, I'm Supervisory Special Agent Aaron Hotchner" Hotch said to the man, "Please could we speak to the manager of this gym?"
"I'm the manager, what can I do for you?" The Manager said to Hotch looking him up and down.
"We are from the FBI." Rossi said showing the manager his badge
"FBI? W-what are you doing here?"
"2 of our agents have gone missing and they were here just before they got took, we would like to see your CCTV cameras please." Hotch said to the man who looked scared and innocent.
"Erm, yeah sure, if you will follow me to our back room please." The manager led Hotch and Rossi to the back room. He noticed the door was open.
"This is supposed to be closed and locked." The manager said.
"Who was the person you was looking for before?" Rossi asked the manager
"The receptionist, there was a queue of people waiting to check in." The manager said. He then walked over to the desk with the computers.
"Here they are." The manager said pointing to the screens
"Could you rewind the tapes to about" Hotch said looking at his watch "3 hours ago?"
The manager rewound the tapes until they saw a skinny male and a blonde short female walk through the doors.
"Stop please. There's JJ and Reid. Could you zoom in for us please thanks?" Hotch said.
"Do you want me to play it in slow motion?" the manager asked politely.
"Yes please." Rossi said whilst staring at the screen.
They watched as they saw Reid and JJ talking to the receptionist and then following the receptionist to the video room.
"They came in this room." the manager said.
"Look around and see if anything is missing." Hotch ordered
Everyone looked around. The manager noticed the draw was opened and was missing 2 handcuffs.
"There's 2 handcuffs missing from this draw." The manager pointed out
"He must have taken them with him." Rossi replied
"We better see if Reid and JJ walk out with Tim." Hotch stated
They went back to the computer screens and then watched Reid and JJ walk out of the gym with Tim.
"What's Tim's full name?" Hotch asked the manager.
"Timothy Cahill."
"Thanks, I will call Garcia to find his address and to find out about him."
Hotch got his phone out and dialled Garcia's number
"Hey Garcia, can you look up the name Timothy Cahill please."
"Yeah sure. Right he works at the Southern Athletic Club..."
"Yes we already know that, where does he live?"
"1921 Southwest 11th Street."
"Ok thanks Garcia." Hotch said as he ended the call.
"1921 Southwest 11th Street." Hotch said to Rossi.
Hotch and Rossi walked out of the video room and out of the gym. They got into the SUV. Rossi got out his mobile and phoned Morgan. He putted it on speaker.
"Tim Cahill." Hotch said
"Is he the unsub?" Emily said
"Yes, we saw him leave with JJ and Reid and not return." Rossi said in reply
"Ok we will meet you at his house then." Morgan said as he closed the lid of his cell.
. . .
To Be Continued...
So there's the 3rd chapter again but improved I hope you like it :)