Okay everyone, i'm posting this notice up to basically say that chapter one, and only chapter one, will be rewritten. The sequence of events will not change, and it will not effect the story what so ever, but i realized that chapter one was horribly written. (I kept switching back and forth between 1st and 3rd person, it was incredibly cheesy, and was just kinda lame in general. Essentially, the same thing will happen, but grammar-corrected, a little less ooc, and slightly condensed.) So, i really do apologize for the inconvenience this may have caused. Thank you for understanding. Thank you for your time. ^^
P.S., chapter one was updated as of 5/10/12.