I want to start off by saying I'm sorry. I really am. But I simply can't continue this story at this time.
As several people have pointed out, I need to work on my writing skills. I suck at grammar, story content, and even mental stability at this time.
Let me explain.
Mental instability simply means that my writing is influenced directly by what I think is cool at the moment. As you have noticed, there are a lot of random bits in my story that don't really matter. Such as the south park quote, and the Doc Holiday reference.
Story content. I noticed that there are a lot of holes in my story. The characters don't walk anywhere, they just appear. I'm sure there are others, but I am really tired right now.
I just want to say that I don't blame any of you, and I do plan on returning to fanfiction someday. I just cant right now. So if any one wants my story, they can have it. Thanks for all of your kind words. I'm amazed at the response my sucky writing has garnered.
Many thanks and well wishes (my god I'm making it seem like I'm leaving forever), the Fat-Man